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HomeMy WebLinkAboutSUS347TK 1425 .S8 S9 no. 347 AGENCY COMMENTS ON DRAFT EXHIBIT E OF SUSITNA HYDROELECTRIC PROJECT LICENSE APPLICATION Comments by NMFS, DEC, DNR, USFWS This document is assigned SUS 347. It comprises four agency memorandums addressed to Eric Yould, Executive Director, Alaska Power Authority. These memorandums are assigned individual SUS numbers 10040, 10041, 10042, and 10043. These submitted comments are in reference to: Susitna Hydroelectric Project FERC License Application. Exhibit E / prepared by Acres. Draft. -- APA Document nos. 157-161. CONTENTS SUS 10040 (part 1 of SUS 347) Comments on Draft Exhibit E of Susitna Hydroelectric Project License Application. Letter to Eric Yould from Robert W. McVey, January 25, 1983. • From Robert W. McVey, Director, National Marine Fisheries Services, Alaska Region • 13 p. SUS 10041 (part 2 of SUS 347) Comments on Draft Exhibit E of Susitna Hydroelectric Project License Application. Letter to Eric Yould from Richard A. Neve, January 21, 1983. • From Richard A. Neve, Commissioner, Alaska Dept. of Environmental Conservation • 4 p. SUS 10042 (part 3 of SUS 347) Comments on Draft Exhibit E of Susitna Hydroelectric Project License Application. Letter to Eric Yould from Esther Wunnicke, January 13, 1983. • From Esther Wunnicke, Commissioner, Alaska Dept. of Natural Resources • 6 p. SUS 10043 (part 4 of SUS 347) Comments on Draft Exhibit E of Susitna Hydroelectric Project License Application. Letter to Eric Yould from Keith Bayha, January 14, 1983 • From Keith Bayha, Assistant Regional Director, U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service, Anchorage • 7 p. with 112 p. attachment (This and other explanatory sheets are supplied by Alaska Resources Library and Information Services. Titles of this document and of the memorandums are supplied from Susitna Aquatic Impact Assessment Project Bibliography with corrections made by the cataloger.) Note about the quality: The original papers are not available. Those papers were microfilmed, and the microfilm was later digitally scanned into a PDF file. COMMENTS ON DRAFT EXHIBlT E 1. NMFS 3. DUR 2. DEC 4. USF'WS I .. I Part 1 of SUS 347 (also SUS 10040) Comments on Draft Exhibit E of Susitna Hydroelectric Project License Application. Letter to Eric Yould from Robert W. McVey, January 25, 1983. • To Eric Yould, Executive Director, Alaska Power Authority • From Robert W. McVey, Director, National Marine Fisheries Services, Alaska Region • 13 p. ;~..~',. ....-...,.•. Th e Nation al Marin e Fi sheri es S ~r vice has revi ewed dr aft Exhibit E of th e l icense a pplicat ion f or th e Su sftn a Hydroele ctric Proje ct.We are submitting ccnme .rts on thi s docume nt which s ilti s(/,in part ,the agency coord inat ion mechanism e stabli shed by th e Federal En ergy qeg ulatory Co o,"i ssi on (FERC).Th e fo rm al position o f IUlFS i n r e gard s t o the Su s t tn a Proj ect hes been r equested iuld prov tu ed t o th ~.'\1.1::k.c:.Pow er- Authorit}(APA)in s ev ere 1 pr evi ous in s te nces ,Sp ec if i ce 11 y.we r ef ar to th e f o11 CJ\'1 i n!J tlMFS c or res po nde nce whi c h shou ld be cons t de red, a l ong wi th th e Exh ibit E conme nt s,as f orm al c oordi nat ion, 1.Let ter t o Eric Youl d f r om Ro ber t rlcVey .Directo r,Ala ska Regi on fli1F S,Ncvemb er 29,1982. 2.Statement of Rob ert l~cV cy before th e Ala s-k a Pow er Au thority Boa rd of utrectors ,April 16. 1982. 3. Letter to Eri c Yould from Robert McV ey,October 15,19 82. Mr .Er ic You ld Executive Director,Ala ska P ~~er Au th ority 334 W.5th Avenue An chorage.Al aska 99501 De ar Nr.Youl d: Th e Nati onal Narine Fisheries Service (ril'lF S)is e ntrusted with Federal j uri sdict ion ov er marine ,es t u~r i ne ,a nd dn adromous f is h~ry r esources. Und er Reor9 anizat ion Pl an No. 4 o f 1970.3 C.F.R.Secti on 203 (1970 compila ti on).r eprinted in 5 U.S.C.Appendi x II a t 64 (1970).tll'IF S was established to e xercise those function s previously carried out by th e Bureau o f tonmer-c te l Fisherie s.By vi rtu e o f thi s del ega tion of autho rity,Nf.lF S is r esponsi ble f or overs ight a nd e valuation of a ctiv i- ti es wh ich may a ffect mar ine,est uarine,and anad romo us fi shery r esources.Unde r t he Fish and Wild l ife Act of 1956, 16 U.S.C.Sect ion 661-666 (c)r equ ires th ot N:1F S be consulted "wh enever th e waters of any s t ream or other bo dy of wa t e r ar e proposed or autho ri zed t o be im- pounded ...fo r any purpose wh atever .••by any public or private agency unde r Fed eral permit or 1 icen se."Nr·IFS inte res ts in t he pr otect i on of marine,es tuarine,a nd anddromo us f i shery re sources als o de rive s from th e An adr omous Fish Con servat i on Act,the Magnuson Fi shery Conservati on and Manage ment Act,a nd the Nat i ona 1 En vi rorm ente 1 Po l i cy Act.Th e FE RC r ules and r egul ation s r equ ire consultat ion with NMFS whencvet a pr oj ect ma y affect a nadromous,es tua ri ne ,or mari ne f i s hery resourc es , 5cJ5 /tJO,/O J ~~\?Il \~ UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF COMMERCE N.tIDn.1 Dc ••nlc end Atmospheric Admlnlstr.tlon Nat i onal Marine Fisheries SSMJ w e P.O .Boz 1668 Juneau.Alaska 99802 January 25. 1983 I I :• • • I I I I I I I I,,,,, \, ·J.I __ I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I 2 Because of the nature and magnitude of this project,and certain unresolved i ssues concerning resou rces for wh ich N ~FS bp.ars responsibil ity,we do not feel the f onma l consultation process 1s complete at th is stage.NMF S will cont inue to ass ist your agency throughout the pl anning and l icensing process. G~neral CO lTll'lents Our revi ew f ound this l ic ense exhibit to be very i nfo rm ati ve and gen- e ra l'ly well deve loped .I t represents a consi derable improv ement over th e 1981 Feasibility Rep ort,particul arly in its consideration of filling concerns and 1n discussing project effects from a Watana alon e and Watan a/Oev il Cany on com bined perspective . We have not comme nted extensi vely on chapters 5,So cioecon om ic impacts or 10.Alt erna tives .Howe ver we beli eve it is i mp urtant to recognize certai n re cent dev elo p ~n ts which wi ll i n f l ue n c~th e f easibility of this project .Uo rld oil pr tces have f a il ed to esce lete as projected in earlier economic stUd t 2S.~a t ur d l ga s alternat ives have been influenced by r ecent pric ing a gr ee p ~n ts and a pr oposal t o construct a gas pipeline capable of supplying mu ch of t he Southc entra l popul ation .We have r ecently rev i.wed th e 8. tt clle Ra ilbelt Electric Powe r Authority Sludy tl ew sletter #4,De cemb er.198 2.Thl S newsletter presents an upd ate e l ect r-Ica l demand for ecas t which, for the year 2010 ,is 44 percent l ower th an the 1980 ISER fo re cast.Load f orecasts wil l dictate f ac il ity design and op erat ions which ,in t urn,will detemine th e amo unt of wa ter r equ ired f or powe r produ ction and available for dm1n stream fish eries flow. In an ACRES report of OCt obe r 198 2 ,E n ~r9 v Si mu lation·Studies to SC lect Proje ct Dra wdow n and Mitigati on Flows ,e nergy s imu latlons were made which as sumed a medium load f ore cast f or th e year 2010 of 779 1 GWH, a f igure s ignifi cantly i n excess of t he re cent Batte lle f orecast of 3844 efld 4986 f or me di um and low 2010 dema nd .I t app edr s that many of the basic economi c premises upon wh ich thi s project was planned pave now changed.We believe th e license appli cation should fully -con sid er t he tm a ct of th ese event s and dlSCUS S thclr effect or 1m act on overa ll ro ect easl 1 lt t e nee or ~a ta n a to be 0 e r a tl 0na and t e e conom1CS a ssoc ate W1t prov1 n9 s u Clent ownstream ows t o minimize fi shery imp acts . Th e data gathered from the enviro nmental fie ld studies ,begun in Jun e 1981.and pr e sented i r.t he Exhibit,s ho w the Susitna Riv er system to support l arg e.valu able runs of pac ific salmon,other anadromous f ish, dnd several f ne sh ~at er r e sident f i s h s pecies .Th e propo !ed proj ect wo uld imp act th ese re so ~rc e s .particul arly .in that reach of t he Susitna Rive r b etw ~e n De vil Canyon and Talke etna .Th e pri ma ry intere sts and concerns of UHFS i n the Susitna fedS ib ility studi es have been t o a ssure th at (1)th e f ishery r esources are i d~n ti fi ed dnd quantifi ed,(2 , s peci fic i mp acts a re identifi ed,(3)imp ~c t s are avoided wh enever poss ible,and (4) specifi c and effr.ct ivc mitiga tive me asures a re dcveloped for all un avoidable adverse i mp acts . I I I I I I I I I I I I I'. •I I I I 3 Th e r esult s of the se stud ies and othe r ma teria ls presented with in l icense Exh ib it E l n d i ca~e that project construct ion and op erat ion wil l signif icantly a f fect f is hery r esources through cha ng es 1n s t reamf l ow , wa ter qua li ty,t emp era tures,i ce conditions.veget ati on, and slou gh habita t.Studies to id ent ify and as sess these changes a nd to d es ~rib e t he f ishery resou rce s of the proj ect area were i nitia ted in 1981 .At th is t i me two fi eld se asons of data hay e been ga t ~er ed.Howe ver,the dr aft Exhib it Edoes no t includ e mst of th e 1982 da ta nor the result s or analysis of th at data.Th e docu me nt cl earl y suffers by thi s omiss ion.a nd we re comme nd that Exhibit E of th e licen se appl ication in clude a pres entah on and anal ysIS of t he 198 2 data . Through ou t Exh ib it E references a re ma de to ongoing or proposed s tudies which wi ll add ress i ssues we c on sid ~r criti cal to th e f easib il ity of t his pro ject.Yet it i s not cl ear wh at t hese s tudies will entatl ,who will conduct th em or when th ey will occ ur.Ue re cor.rn e:n d t hat th e license a ppli cation detail ongo ing and propo sed studi e s. Th e info rma ti on pres ent ed in Exhibi t E r egarding r eservoir operat ions does not suffi cient ly co nvey th e range of imp acts pr esent ed by t ~e project .lie rec orrmen d th e l icense a pplic at io n be ex ~a nde d t n i nc1 \ide a mo re r ecis2 descri t1 0" of 1macts and rese nt t h~o l 1ow 1n ~s 1 9 n operat n9 conce rns: Fl ow re leases -base d upon weekly rd t he r t ha n mo nthl y a verages. Quant if ica ti on of "no rme'l ''spill ages.bel ow t he 1 in 50 yea r event. pas sed thro ugh th e out let/cone valv e facili ty . Po tential peaking operations a t \:at ana wit hout the Devil canyo n Da m. ACRE S has identi fi ed this as a poss ibil i ty.h~at c ircumstances would dictate s uch operation?What daily and hourly f luctuations would r esult?How wo uld s uch flu ctua t i on s be attenuated by t ri~u t ary input and th e river dis tance be tw een Wata na and Dev il Cany on?; Co mp ensat ion fl ow pu mp s at th e De vil Canyon f acil ity.What flows will th ey provide?How were th ese fl ow s establ ished?Are the se pumps s ti ll pl ann ed f or th is f acility?• We cont inue to be con cerned about devel opm ent of a r elease schedul e which would mit igate i mpa cts to fi shp.ri es.Th e dr aft Exh ib it Estates th at r educed fl ow s could im pa ir f ish migration, de-water s pawn ing and re a ri ng habitat .prevent access t o s lo ug h a nd s td e ch ann el habitats.and l ow er or e li mi nate i nt ~ r -9 ra v e l fl ows t o s lough and s ide chann el spawn i ng g~und s.Th e mi ni mum fl ow s pr oposed in Exhib i t E,how ever, were not developed using a ny recognized i n-s treamf lowpr edi ct ive meth odologies ,a nd may not c on s t it u t ~the preferred f l ow r egime fo r mi ni mi zing s uch effect s.Th e li cense exhi bi ts de not e xplain how t he 12.000 cubic feet pe r sec on d (cfs)~i nimum oper at ional fl ows f or Au gust and Sept e mb t ~were detenmi ned .~e note tha t t hese fl ow s have been re duced from those recon r.~n ded minimum f lows pr ~s en t ed i n th e 1982 Final Draft Fe asibil ity .Re po r t,Volu me 2.S i ~i la r l y ,no rat i on ale 1s pr ov ided which s uppo r ts -mininu m-wi nter flows t e n times t hat of e xisting natural winter f l ow s.We b el i e v ~th at ~x imum wi nter f l ow l im it s should be r equired as well ,pa rt icula rly i n 11 ght of potential staging s hould i ce cover develop bel ow De vil Canyon.I least t wo seasons data . Of th e vari ou s fish hab itats bel ow Devil Canyon Dam,th e s loughs betw een Talkeetna and Porta ge Cr eek.a re th e most likel y to be adversely affected by t he proposed work.A p p roxi ma t~l y t hirty -fi ve s loughs exi st in th is r each.Adul t sa l mo n have been observed i n at l east tw enty-six of t hese . Post proj ect flows and water t emp eratures will present several s ignifi cant impac ts t o thes e habi tats.T h e~e are discuss ed in some deta il i n Ex hibit E.Howe ve r,on only one o f t hese,sl ou gh 9 , has detailed i nvestigation been conduc ted wh ich in cluded groundw ater fl uw, upw elling. and t emperature stUd ies.Th ese s loug hs a re th e mo st imp or - ta nt s pawning a reas tr.f luenced by th e ma in stem Sus itna Ri ve r:.They are a lso i dentif ied as pot ent ial s ites f or mit igating fi shery r e sou rce l osses t hrough phy s i ca1 nl'Jd1fi cat ion.\Ie f ee 1 i t i s i mp ortant t herefore, t hat Ex hibit E pr esent a n i nformed opinio n based on site specific data as t o t he effects of project operation on s loug h habita t .In a dra ft 4 Exhibit E suggests that it may be des irable to spi ke spring flows to accommodate out-migrants and fac ilita te flush ing of sloughs and s ide chann els.I t also states that the proj ect release schedule will need to i ncor po r ate bo th volume and t emp erature conside ration s.Howev er. nei ther of t hese con cerns 1s reflected 1n the prop osed f l ow re gime.Th e r elease schedule presented i s not s upported by biological da ta.nor does it reflect concerns f or f ish passage.We recommen d t hat t he l icense appl i cat ion contain a s pecifi c. de tailed flow rel ease s chedule. developed t hroulh a 9uantlfla61e Tn-stream f low anal YS TS and coord inated wlth rl Mf S,Us F sh and '!lldld e Ser vlce a nd the Al aSKa De artment of 15 an an ~Wl C wou m n1m ze m acts an or en ance con 1t Dns or spawnln 9!ee 10 9!passage,out -m lgratloo, an overwl "te rl ng 1"the Sus l t na Rlver . The Watan a and De vil Canyon dams wi ll cause chang es to th e exi sting wa te r t empe rature re gi ~of t he Susitlla River ,generally re leasi ng cooler wa ter during s umme r month s and wa rme r water i n winter. Temp erature va ria ti ons affect th e abi li ty of f ish to migrate, s pawn, fe ed,and develop i n t he Susit na sys tem.Ice f onnation will be delayed or po s sibl y not occur. Exh ibit E discus ses th is mat ter a t length but dces not prese nt an l ccur a t e descri ption of post·project t emperature dlte ration s . A mo del was dev e loped t o project temp eratures,yet it has been ope rated with only one year of data (1 981).Further , t his mod el vas run on ly for t he mD '1 ths of June thro ug h October.Temp erature n~deling is not pre sented for t he Devil Cany on Rese rvoir,yet Exhi bit E states th at t he locat i on of i ce forma tion a bo ve Talkeetna will depend on t he ou tfl ow t e mp ~ ra tur ~s f rom De vil Ca nyon Da m. Rea liz i ng t he importanc e of an accurate un derstanding of the th e nnal s tru cture withi n the r es ervoirs and o f out flow tem peratures,'we believe addit ional information i s warrant ed.We re commP.nd t hat mode Jing be done for both re servoirs through out the yea r,and the re sult a nt da ta be lncorporated 1nto th e r lve rlne tem peratu re mode l cal ibrated wlth at I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I 5 In those areas wh ere i ce fo rma tion does not occur. water elevation s would drop below natu ara ll y occu rring l evel s.l eadi ng to potent ial de- watering of spawn ing gr av e ls and r edu ctions in u p w ~l l ing ar e as.Exhibit E pr edi ct s th at the Ice f r ont should occur at son~l ocation betw een T al ~e e tn l,RH 100 and She nman.~~130 and wi ll depend upon t he upstream t emp e rature,i .e ,th e Devil Canyon outf low .As no mode l wa s coopleted f or wi nter river ine or rese rvoi r te mp eratures .th e full scop~.and me a sure of th ese effec ts cann ot be ass e ssed . Exh ib it E di s cus ses t he i mpdc t of proj ect const ruction and op erat ions on riv e r ic e f onnati on.App are ntl y . pos t-p roj ect ic e f onnati on will be delayed du e t o hi gher re l ~a 5 e t em p ~r d tu rp.s fro m De vil Canyon." Cu rrently.ic e ori gina t ing f r om t he upper Susi tna cc.t tr-ibut es'75 to 85 per cent of th e ice l oad to th e l ow er River .With t his i nput r edu ced or delay ed by t he pr ojec t .ice f a nna tion 0 11 the l ow e r Ri ver will be a ff ected.Thi s impa ct -is not adequ ately discussed i n th e Exhibit. I ce fo rmation abov e Tal ke etna wi ll al so be delayed by t he proa e ct .The l ocat ion of th e i ce f ront i n th i s reach has i mpor tant i mplica tions to f isherie5 ha bitat withi n t he nein s t em,sf de chann els.and sl o\.lghs.In areas with ice cove r.staging i s e xp e cted to occur whi ch wo uld i ncr ea se water surface e leva t i ons. poss i bly inc reas ing upw el li ng.overtopp ing th e up stream berm s of s loughs. and causing high veloc ities and scour to occur . report prepared for Acres American,Inc.1/,th e author note s th at until the 1982 fiel d data are analyzed,any statements regard ing streamflows necessary for chum s almon access t o the s ide sloughs are provisional.Within Exhibit E,there are vague and seem ingly contradicto ry stateme nts concerning slou gh i mpacts .Statements are made within this Exhibit that data on the areal extent of upwelling with in th e sloughs at low flows are not presently available,that ground water upwell ing i s driven by mainstem r iver stage,that spawn ing areaS of the sloughs may be affected by reduced upwelling, and that flows of 16,000 t o 18,000 c fs are required for easy access to the sloughs .The document also conta ins statemen ts that 12.000 cfs wil l provi de access to mos t sloughs.that a 12,000 cfs relea se will assist i n maintaining groundwater fl ow and upw elling with in s loughs ,and th at chang es in s treamflowdur ing the open water season pred icted und er ope ra ti on of De vil Cany on are not expected t o affe ct slou gh ha bitats.Clearly, post-projec t impa cts to th es e i mpor tant and s ~ n si t i ve hab itats are poorly und erstood .NMFS rec omme nds that th e f inal l icense a pplicat i on contain the r esults and anatysls of th e 1982 f ield dat a being gathered by the Alaska D e~ar t men t of Fish and Ga me,e t a t ,and results of an e xpanded study a s loughs t n the Devi l Canyon t o Talkeetna re ach wh i ch wo uld provid e a larger a nd more r e pr ese ntat ive sam ple th an cur rently ava l lalile._ r rce n, nc.ove e r , S awnf n So lma n t o Si de Slou hI.prel i mln ar Ass es sme nt of acces s b Habi t a t a ave a ee tna.r aTt epo r-t , 198 2. I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I 6 Exh ib it E s ta tes th at i f a lte rnative mitig at ion sc hemes pro ve i nfe asi - bl e ,a hatchery could be developed.Whi le we re gard s uch arti ficia l me thods to be th e l east desirable form of addressing fi shery l osses,we r ~al ize t hat s lough mod ifi cat i on is l argely untr ied in Al aska a nd that th ese miti gative e ffo rts may i ndeed fa il .Th erefor e,we r ecommend th at Exhibit E sh ould a dvance t his dis cus si on be*ond th e statement that "a hatchery could be develoscd.il Informat10n s auld be l nclu d ed'\~,thln lI cense Exh ibIt E whI ch c sc ri bes t he nw nb er of hatcheries needed. locations . s izes ,what th e pr odu ction ta rget f or each speci es would be . and cost est i mat es. Finally,none of the mit igative measures pre s ented comply with FERC rul es and r egulations under Section 4.41 (F)(3)(iii);t ,e ••cos ts f or t hese f eatures a re not pr ~s e nt e dJ nor a r c desi gn pl ans for mit igation f eatures in cluded . Specific Comm ents Exh ibit E Ch apter On e -No comme nt. Chapter Two I I I I I ••n n -u------ u n I I I I a ~ I · 7 page 15 ,para. 4.Bre akup The section should describe when breakup no rmally occurs,specifically the dates of the earl iest ,D~an .and latest recorded events. page 38,para .3 This section should consider that at least eight sloughs exist above Gold Cre ek.several of which support large numbers of spawning salmon, e.g •• slough 21 .IIhfl e Gold Creek may be a logical po int at which to gauge flow, 1t does not necessarily guarant ee that upstream flow will be sufficient to maintain habitat value in th ese sloughs. Exhibit E should discuss th is concern and r ecommend necessary me asures to guarant ee adequate flow to these sloughs. pag e 47 .Section (v)Ims acts on Sl oughs Th e section notes thatat~to confl rm t he areal extent of upwelling at low flows are unava ilable at this ti me .Currently only on e slough has been invest igated suf f ici ently to predict project influenc es on groundwat er and upwell ing.Thi s slough is 1I0t r epresentative of all such sloughs in the Devil Cany on to Talke etna r each. Under existing winter flows, ic e fonmati on causes s taging equivalent to an open water flow e leva ti on exceeding 20,000 cf s.Filling flows of 1,000 cfs,for whi ch ic e f orma ti on may be delayed or fail to occur, could significantly ilnp act sloughs through de·w a tering gravel spdwning are as and ov erwintering hab itat . page 49,para 2 As the temp erature of groundwat er is con sidered a fun ction 'of the avrraye annual temperature of t he ma ins tem Susit na ;wh at will be the i mp acts of the second fillin g year release temperatures t o the _groundw at er ?How long would an y chang e per si st?Uo data are prese nted t o support th e stat e ~n t t hat ground water te m~eratur es will not chan ge. pa ge 51,para 3. ":On thly En CfiY Simulations ; The referenc ed pr ogram utl1:zcd load forecasts developed by ISER. Woodward-Clyde,and Battelle.Th ese for ecasts are now serfou sly questioned i n light of recent developments (s ee General C~~nt s).We recommend these simulation stud ies be updated a nd run with th e most recent load forecasts available. pag e 58. para.1. Reservoir and Outl et Water Tcm~eratur es This sugg ests that wlnt er outfl ow temp eratures betwe en I D and 4DC can be selectively withd rawn through a mul tiple i ntake st-ucture.This control would be depend ent upon the th ermal profile of the reservoir during winter,a set of conditions which has not been mod eled. Therefore.we question th e validity of the statement which suggests one degree water temperatures would be available on request. Informat;on presented by ACRES duri ng th e Nov.29 -Dec.3 Workshop showed winter t emp eratures in Eklutna lake to be between 0 and 3.6 0 in the upper 2 meters.while isoth er mal conditions e xist below·this l evel. • I m II u U II U II 11 11 11 II II • I ~ ~ J I 8 page 59.para.2.Ic e I t is not cl ear what i mpa ct will occur to th e l ower River f rom r edu ct ion of i ce flow f rom th e upper Su sftna.Ho w far down river would f ee f orma ti on occur?When do es f reeze-up normally occur? page 91.para.2.Mi tf ~a t io n of Watana Ingou nd me nt Imp ac ts This section s tates t at a proposed 12.0 cfs flow at GOld Creek would provide salmon access to mo st of th e sl oughs and would assi st in maintaining adequate ground water l evels and upw ell ing rates .There a re no s tudies wh ich would supp ort t hese conclusio ns,as on ly one of approximately t hi rty-si x slou gh s has re ceive de tai led s tudy . Sim il arly,current fn fo~tfon does not perm it the developme nt of miti gation me asures wi thin t he s lo ug hs,as stated i n th e la st pa ragraph on th is page. page 93.para .2.Ni trogen Sup er saturation While we s upport tne con cept of instaillng cone valves at th e ou tl et wor ks of both dams, t he s ubject r equires furth er discussi on .Th es e va lves wil l only operat e (and afford gas s upe rsa tura tion bene fit s) during sp ill ages below t he 1 in 50 year hi gh f low event.Ac cording t o the dis cussi on presented on pages 79 throu gh 8 1, such spi ll ages wo uld be a r el atively un common e v~n t (for th e 32 year period s imu l ated, th e re wer e 4 years durin g which spill ages occurred).Th e di scussion on th e sp.valv e s shoul d present dat a on th eir frequency of us e and expla i n t he c ri t er ia by which th ey a re p ~a n n ed and ins talled.Th is shou ld includ e the f oll owin g: 1.Pote nt ia l te mp era ture i mpac t s res ulting from with drawa l f rom th e ~e outl et stru ctures . 2.Potenti al impa ct s t o ri ver 'ice for mat ion attributed t o operatio n of th e se valves du ring winte r. p~ge 95, para. 1. Tempe r Jt ur e The d is cussion of De vll Cany on post-pro ject t emp e rature mi ti gati on i s in adequat e.Wha t adv antages a re gai ned by th e n~l ti p l e r e l ease st ructure?Wil l Devil Canyon r eservo ir stratify during s u~er and winter? Chapter Three page 8 . par ••2 "Si nce th e gre ates t changes in phys i cal habit ats a r e expec ted i n th e r each between Talkeetn a a nd Devil Cany on,·f ishery re sources usin g that por tion of th e r-tv er were con sidered to be the most sensitive to pr oject e ffec ts ." Transforming t he mainstemSusit na Riv er into a r eserv oir i s also a con sid erabl e chang e.Later i n this paragraph is th e statement "The mit igati ons proposed to ma in t ~in chu m sal mon s hould a llows ockeye and pi nk sal mo n t o be ma intained as we ll .-We are unab'l e to loc ate specif ic mitig ati on plans f or chum sa l mo n :Thos e c onceptual pl ans pr~sent ed for sl ough modification and ma instem -------- I II R U II II U II II II II II II ~. m \I I I 9 spawning bed construction deal principally with one life history stage .The statements made here th at improved mafnstem conditions will replace loss of slough rearing habitat and that Juvenile overw in tering area s ~re not expected to be adversely affected by the project are not support p.d .In fact,preliminary data presented elsewhere in the Exhibit indicate that overwintering habitat will be impacted and that sloughs may provide important real'fng habft~ pag e 12.Species Biology and Habitat Utilizati on in th e Su sitna River Drainage Estimates of adult s a lmo n presented in th is section depict only escapement.A n~re meaningful esti~lte should be made using catch to escapement re t tos,as.done i n chapter five.For instance,in 1982 77.000 pink salmon migrated above Talkeetna.Howev~r only one f ish in every 3.8 e scaped the comme rcia l f ishery.Us i ng th ~3.8 to 1 rat io, this reach of th e Sus itna accounted for ov er 350,000 pi Ilk salmon of which over 277,000 were available to th e commercial fishery . Escapement est imates alone fail t o i ndicate th e high valu es associated with anadromous f ishery resources. page 76.Slough Habitat Th is sectloR do es not describe i mp acts associated with lowered wi nt er river stage during fillin g.Should u~·rell ing a nd backwater effects during winter prov e criti cal to developing eggs or juv enile se'lmontds ,any reduction in thes e areas could create significant damag e . We qu estion th e figure pr esented as th ~nu mb er of s loughs -in which salmon spawn within the Chu l itna t o Devil Canyon reach.Using in formation suppli ed by th ,ADFG and from Exhi bit E••dult salmon have been obs ~rved i n 26 of these slou ghs.Exhibit E should clearly present the total numb ers of sloughs in this reach and the 1981 and 198 2 data on spawning adul ts.; page 77 The discussion presented on impacts to slough habitat i s not cl ear. As Exhibit E states that groundwater upwelling in th e .loughs is probably driven by the m ~instem stage,which would caUSe a decreas ed flow in the sloughs (post-project),why does this section state that under post-project cond itions only the backwater area s (of th e sloughs'would be affected7 The second paragraph of this page states,·Uith mainstem flows above 14,000 crs , a backwater forms at th e eouth of the s Iouqh,"Ho",is this known?Which slou gh is being df scusse d?Is this true for each slough?The sa me paragraph explains t 'iat , during the 19 82 field season,flows i n the 12,000 to 14,000 cfs range occurred and afforded opportun ity to observ ~f ish passage a t flows below normal'Au gust levels.These flows appeared to hJmp er or restric t fish passage ~J1 t o sloughs.Backwater effects were not s een at flows of approximately 1l,OOO chi yet project low flow limits for August have been establish~d at 12,000 cfs.This section underscores the problem s • II II II II II ""II [1 II 11 ~ "~ n " 10 associated with such propos ed fl ow s.It is apparent that som e significant chang es occur t o the sl ough habitat within a rel at ively narrow r ange of flows ;changes which ma t have i mportant biological implications. pag e 87 ,para.5 Wh il e th e "de scribed floods ma y tran sport se dime nt and scour th e Riv er bed, reduct ion or eli min ati on through flow r egulation may not necess ar ily be benef icial .The Exhibi t p r e s ~n ts no data to su pport the comment that hi gh main st em velociti es l imit fi sh usag"(page 87. para.2). Further,s uch high f lowevents ma y be critical t o main tain- ing si de channel a nd s lough habita t t hrough f lushing and re plenis hmen t of gravel s and by remov ing y p.9~t atf on and b e ~y er da ms which may reduce habitat valu e.This point 1s not discussed i n th e following sect ions on slough o r side ch a n~,l habitats . pag e 103,paragraph 3.Slough Ha bitat Ue di sagree that chang es 1n s treamfl ow du ring th e op en-w~t er season are not expected t o affe ct s lough habitat s. page 116.Aqu atic Studies Program We bel ieve th is dlScussion suffe rs from o ei s s t on o f t he ma jority of th e 1982 f i eld stud y r esults .We s t ro<1 gly bel t evo t ha t two year s of study are the mini mu m r equired a s a basis to di scuss the i mpact of hydro electr ic deve ln pmen t on th e Su s itna River . o page 130.tlea sures t o Minimize Imp act s It is stated tha t "A f low r eleas e schedule will be used that mi nim izes the lo s s of d own s t re a ~habitat a nd main tains norma l t iming of flow-rel ated biolog ical s ti mu li ."Th e flow sc hedule presented in Exhib it E,chapter 2 doe s not mini mi ze habi tat l oss ,nor do es it oaintai n no rmal flow r e l ated biol og ical st i mu li.Thi s section s hould also di scuss install at i o~of comp ensati on fl ow pu mps at Devil Canyon which would provid e fl ow betw een the damand t ailrace ch an~el. page 130,para.2.ne as ures t o Minimi ze Imp acts The section states~Alnstream f low requlremen ts a re being det ermined fo r each sp ~c i e s/l i fe s tage/time unit com bination."Who is performing t hese stud i ~s?How wi ll th ey ~e d~term i n 2 d?Again, i t i s i mp ossible to und ers t and what fl (JW regi me.i f any .is actually being sugge sted within Exh ibi t E.I s th e r el ease s chedule pr e s e ~ted in Table 2.17 j ust a "firs t cut?"This is apparently th e case. Consid ~r in g that th e fi na l r elease s chedule i s t o be based on futur e s tudies e s suggested here and may be mo dif ied to acconrnodat e out- "i gration (page 3-13 2,pare,I)and wi ll need to consider tem perat ure and volume (page J-l ~J.par a .1);why ;s a flow r egi me proposed in the abse nce of such i nfo nna tio n? page 131.pare ,1 This states,i n effec t.t hat slou gh habitat will e ither be e nhanced or degraded by th e proj ect.s ud th at actual imp .'l cts to habita t are t he s ubject of ongoing s tudi es .T he s ~ongoi ng s tudies should be descr ibed.Wh .t "ill be invest ig ate I?Which sloughs will b e studied? 11 II, II, II, II II• 11, I II, n 11 11 n 11 n II 11 pa ge 132.pa ra .4 Th is sta tes t hat fl ~,s of 12.000 c fs are suffici ent to und ertake r ect ify i ng imp acts by n ~d jfy ing habita t .Ho w i s thi s known ?The paragraph s hould discu ss the s tudies upon wn 1ch t his i s based or qual ify any such conclusions as prel im inary and subject t o furt her s tudy. page 133,para.1.Wi nter Flows Th e statement i s ma de that "Slncc minimal impa cts a re e xpect ed dur ing both f illing and operational winter fl ow,r ectifying ~a s u re s are not needed.-This i s not s upport ~d.On page 131 . pa r a.1 ,we learn s lough habit a t mdY be degraded by win ter fl ows a nd tha t t he~e i mp acts a re th e s ubject of ongoing studies.Pa ge 94 presen ts a l engthy dis cus si on of i mp act s attr ibuted to altered win t e r fl ows. page 133,para .5 .Redu c tion of Impacts Ov er Time . ·pos t-oper ationa l monltorlng wl11 be condu cted to e valu ate the e ffec tive ness of mi tigation ~a s u r e s (see Secti on 2.6 ).-Th e li cense application s hould deta il what mo nitori ng wil l occur a nd how th e e ffec ti ve ness of miti gati on effo r ts will be evaluated . ~g eI 36,~N .3 _ The di scussion of hatch e ry de ve lo ~nt 1s i n4dequate .In t he event t ha t other mitigat i on a l ter nati ve s f ~i l ,i t wi ll be i~po rta nt t o pres ent a clear picture of \-,h at meas ures would be taken t o -conpe nsa te for f isher i es lo sses. page 131, pa r a.3 .~bel i e ve t hat t he wate r tempera tu r es of 5°t o 6°C during th e second f 111ing year will present si gnificant advers e i mpact s t o s .lmo n. Additi on of a low le vel portal could appa rently avoid muc hi,of thes e e ffec ts .We re commen d s uch a d!vicc be inc orporated in to he fin al design. page 143 ,para.1 "Cont inui ng r eservoir t herrne I mod e l lng will allow an eva luation of available w ~t er te mp era tures th r ou ghout th e year so th at a deta il ed r el ease plan can be de v~l op ed .The re lease plan wi ll need t o consider bo th water temperatures and volume in orde r t o minimi ze i ~pa c t s .·We s trongly agre e with t his ,and rec~n d th at th e l ic ense appli cat i on contain ju st s uch a r elease pl an wh ich would mos t ef f ect ively mini mi ze i mpac t. Ch apters 4-9 -No Comment . Ch apt er 10 pa ge 28.pa ra. 6.Diver sion,l Eme rge ncy Re lease F ~c il i t 1 e s Th e r el t Jse l evels re f e rr ~d to do not avoid adverse effects on the sal mo n f ish ery down stream. ,. U II II II II I II II I 11 II II II I I I I I I I II 12 page 30.para.3 Figure E.2.90 indIcates that three.rather than four portals would be constructed at Watana.We question which is correct and how the numbers and position of the portals were considered in minimizing impact.Also we cannot concur that temperatures wilT be controlled within acceptable limits. page 30. para .4 We are not awa ,~of studies which have occurrad to mitigate project Impacts through provIsion of streamflow at Gold Creek.These should be described . page 31.para.5 According to pres entation by ACRE S Am erican at an APA-sponsored wor kshop in Anchorage during th ~week november 29 to Decemb~r 3,1982, no temp erature mod el has been run f or Devil Canyon r eservoir •.How. then.can th e utili ty of a mul ti-l evel draw-off at Devil tanyon be known?This again underscores th e present lack of understanding of project temp erature i mpacts.. Th e following s tateme nts of concern wer e pre sented by NMFS before the APA Bo ard of Oirectors on Aprtl 16. 1982. ·On e area of l imited in formdtion i n t he Fea sibil ity Re po rt deals w;th the effects of pos t project fl ~~s on th e fish cry res ources •.••·These sloughs t her efore r epresent'an a ~"re quiring con sidt!rat io.n of potential mitigation and/or enh ancement n~a s u res .To dat e,les s than one eighth of the side channel s and s lough areas h3v c been surveyed. Further,the impact s of various flow r egimes on th e habitat are unknown because the hydrological and ecological relationships between the mai nst em Susitna and these ar eas have not been adequat ely studied •.•"·The results of a compr ehen sive In-Stream FlOW Stu1y would all owa bal ancing of fi sh habi tat los ses again st poWer · g en~r a t i on ••••·Cu r~n t l y,we do not beli eve a high l ~vel of conf idence exists i n th e projected post proj ect tempera tur~within the t~o re servoirs,the Su sitna mainstern.and th e si de chann els and sloughs ..••1 "•••specifi c studi es mrs t occur which will develop mitfgatlon opt ions •••"I·It i s not rea sonable to assume that (one fi eld season of f ish eri es data)is adequ ate f or proper characteriz at i on of th e resources.II ·W e are concerned th at the (l icense)appl icat i on will reflect t he serious defic iencies we have me ntioned.If our review shows th is t o be the case.we feel our agency will hav~no a lternat ive but to r equest th e ~ERC to r eject th e application or direct that the deficiencies be corrected ." Our review of the mat erial pres ented in draft license Exhibit E I ndIcates that these deficienc Ies stIll e xist .It I s regrettable that we have reached th e dr a ft license appli cat ion stage whil e th2se issues rena in unresolv ed.We fe el that th ~s e is sues and data mu st be i ncorpor ated i nto Exhibit E and that \Iithout thenl the lice nse I [I 13 applicat ion will be found deficient.We believe that Exh ibit E should be suffic iently developed so as to form t he bas is for specific license conditions wh ich would protect anadromo us fish and their habitat.As written,Exhibit Eonly leads to further studtes.The FERC guidelines specify that information within Exhibit Ebe developed to a level commensurate with the scope of the project .Th e Susitna project will b~ the most 2~ostly and comple x hydroelectrIC fac ility eve r considered by the FER~• and th is complexity and depth should be reflected i n license Exhibit E. We appr eci ate this oppor tunity to comment on the draft Exhibit E. Robe t II .~IcV ey Direc or,Ala ska 2} Susltna proJect s tatus Re port -pre l imi nary Dr aft .Federal Energ y ~cg u la tory Commissi on -Dat a for ~c1si o n s .De cemb er I.1982. Part 2 of SUS 347 (also SUS 10041) Comments on Draft Exhibit E of Susitna Hydroelectric Project License Application. Letter to Eric Yould from Richard A. Neve, January 21, 1983. • To Eric Yould, Executive Director, Alaska Power Authority • From Richard A. Neve, Commissioner, Alaska Dept. of Environmental Conservation • 4 p. The Alas ka De partme nt o f Env iron mental Conservation is pleased t o respond to the Alaska Powe r Au tho ri ty 's req uest for c om ments o n the Susi tna Hydroelectric Pr o ject,Federal Energ y Re gul atory Licens e Ap plication,Exhib it E. These co mments are organ ized into seven pr imary categories and are presented below. 4J't .::;1111:1:1 SECO ND FL OOR ANCHORAGE.A LASKA 9 9501tsar;2 14 ·2533 P.O .BOX 615 K ODIA K.ALASKA '90"486-3350 eo.BOx 1201 SOLDOTNA ,A LASKA 99669 (90I )2 62 ·521 0 P.O.BO X 1709 VALDEZ.A L A SKA 99686 19011 83 5-4698 P.O.BO X 1{l1j4 WASIL LA .ALASKA 99681 (3Dl)316-5038 61LL SHEFFIELD,GOVERNOR o o o o i /0 I SOUT HCENTRAL REGIONAL OFFICE ! Jan uary 21, 1983 Dea r Mr.You ld: Hr .Er i c Yould Ex ec uti ve Di re c to r Alask a Powe r Au th ority 33 4 West 5t h Avenue Anc horage,Alas ka 99501 I;.....'-:-.::;-,~:-:=.';:::i ~..::r n .-.,rr::\1'"1 :7 t: -','."1 1 '1 '\\\..':.•,\."I l"'~,i l :!':J I ,d I ;;1 \"\I .'II ,. ,~I .''-I'....\I ,~•\"• r-__\;:,_,t I i ~I I J t I 1,~I .L .,_\'.'I r,"",,'':,'I-.-_.~___.'-:-.~~....-_:.1 t ........ DEPT.OF E1\"VIH01\"JIENT,\I.(;ONSEHV,\.TION II II II "II II II A. Water Qual ity II II II II l ~ II If ", ff rl- LH 1.The discuss ion on wat er quality impacts is well done for both the Wa ta na and Devil Canyon da ms .The major impact to water quality is f rom a chang e in the downstream water temperat ure that will occur with the pro ject operation.The Re s ervoir Temperature Hodel (DVRESM)i s designed to predi ct reservoir ou tflow temperatures to an accuracy of ±2°C.Thatis a range of var i at ion of 4°C. A difference of 4 °C in predicted outfl 0",temperatures could have a significant effect on the actual versus the predi cted impact on downstream fisheries .This model i ng effort shoul d be deve! oped to predi ct reservoi r operati ng parameters when us ing a given downstream i mpact,essent ially work1ng the model backwards.Accurate est imet es of the pred1 cted downstream river temperatures are an essential co mponent of the impact assessment process. 2. The sheer magn1t ude of the construction proje:t will crea te a high potential for soil erosion that may affect wate r qual 1ty.The Exhibit E needs t o be more speci fi c on how these problems will be mit 1gated • r~et h o dolog i e s ne ed to be de scr ibed i n detai 1 for construct ion of t he road , dam and townsites , a nd o ther pro ject entities. B.Hazardous Substances A very large amoun t of hazardous s ubstances will be transpo rted to,and ut i l t zed a t,the project site.D1 scharges of hazardous sub stan ces coul d con ta minat e l and as well as surface and ground water.Further i mpacts c ould occ ur to human we lfare,f ish,and wild life. The Exh ibit E docu ment does not addres s the major possible sources of f uel spills,but rather the minor ones (lea ky hydraulic lines and water p umps). A ve ry deta iled oil sp ill contingency plan needs to be developed t hat will have s everal major objectives and be written to account for a major (i.e., tank truck roll-over),as we ll as a minor spill event. Mr.Eric Yould January 21.1983 Page 2 The plan should be responsive to project needs and yet be simple enough to be functional.Major objectives of the plan are discussed in detail below: 1.To develop a training program that will stress spill prevention.This program needs to cover spill response under a 11 project condi t ions and set up several response scenarios. 2.To develop the response capability to adequately handle the worst case spill expected.This response capability should be developed for the Watana and Devil Canyon camps and the rail head stagi ng area.This would mean staging spill cleanup equipment at all sites.All hazard- ous substances that will be used on site need to be consi dered (so 1- vents.chemical additives.etc.). 3.To develop an immediate response team for each work shift.consisting of personnel dedicated to spill containment and cleanup,should a discharge incident occur.This response team would have a designated leader who would direct the team. A complete training program in spill response for this team would be essential. 4.To contain a small s ect ton on the project area environment.This would include a map of major drainage areas,fish habitat and seasonal descriptions,and wildlife habitat and seasonal descriptions.The environmental section is very important in prioritizing spill response actions (i.e.,most sensitive areas first),and for developing an ap- preciation for the impact a spill can have. C.Wastewater Treatment The type of wastewater treatment plant to be used at each camp site has to be described in greater detail to more adequately evaluate its effective- ness.The di scharge from the Watana treatment facility may not met.~fecal coliform standards because of inadequate dilution.The discharge zone should be well defined for both facil ities.The Watana and Devil Canyon camp wastewater treatment plants are to be functioning and approved before each camp is in operation. D.Concrete Batching Plant Potential impacts that may occur from the concrete production process are not descri bed in enough deta il •The di scharge from thi s proces s will a1so have,in addition to pH changes,problems with siltation,turbidity and possibly toxic additives used in the curing process.Siltation from concrete can form a mat over substrate gravels.This could suffocate emerging sa1mon fry or other i ndigenous organi sms that requi re subs trate habitat.Discharges that may have toxic concrete additives as a component may kill aquat ic organi sms.The batchi ng process may a1so have ai rborne particulate problems.Specific control measures need to be described in detail for each type of problem that may be encountered. Mr .Er ic Yould January 21, 1983 Page 3 E. Access Corridors The access route (Plan 17) was det~rm i n ed ,during the access route selec- tion process,to have greater pote ntial for major envi ronmental i mpacts than the oth er route options.The major impacts of conce rn were: 1.The Denali Highway to Watana Dam site portion passes through habitat that has historically been used by portions of the Nelchina caribou herd. 2.Many nat ive grayling strea ms can potentially be affected during the construct i on of the Dena 1 i Hi ghway to Wat ana Dam site access sect ion. 3.Access al ong the so uth s ide of the Susitna River from the Wat ana to Dev il Canyon Da m s ites passes th rough the Stephan Lake r egion.Th i s r e ~i on is i mportant habitat for moos e,wi nter ing car-t bou ,mi grat i ng wa te rfowl ,an d fur beare rs. 4.Wet lands habitat is crossed southwest of Devil Canyon. Because of the greater potential for major impacts associated with the Plan 17 access option ,more attention should be given to defining the methods that will be implemented to mitigate the :e impacts.For example : 1.How wi 11 the access route be designed to mini mize disruption to the car ibou ~erd? 2.What t echnique will be im plement ed to prevent impacts to nat ive grayl ing streams fro m road construction? 3.How will i mpact s to the Step han Lake reg ion be reduced? 4.How wi 11 project and post-project access be controlled to prevent seconda ry impacts related to access? F.Fi shery Impact Assessment The fi eld data base is incomplete for an accurate prediction of the i mpact the Susitna Hydroelec.tric Project will have on fishery resources.A good set of data has been collected for only two years.Fishery population and related wate r quality data can have inherent f l uctuat tons from year to yea r,Long t erm,1arge-sca 1e programs need to be implemented in order to ma ke a r easonably accurate population estimate.Very specif ic detailed s t udies des igned to correlate physical and chemical aspects of the aquatic h3bitat t o population flu ctuations need to be part of the long term pro gram. Th is progr am should be cont inued t hrough project construction. Mr.Eric Yould January 21,1983 Page 4 If impacts cannot be accurately predicted,a worst case (100~1055)estimate of the fishery population should be assumed and the implications this impact would have to the aquatic community and related resource use need to be discussed.By assuming a worst case estimate,a type of mit igat ion program can then be developed where compensation to the fishery p?pulation can occur tL result in an acceptable 1055. A long term post-project aquatic monitoring program should be developed as an integral part of the project.Funds should be allocated in advance to insure the continued existance of this program.The monitoring program is essent ia 1 to determi ne the effect iveness of mi t i gat ion measures that are implemented. G.Interagency Review Board It is strongly recommended that a formal interagency review board be estab- Ii shed to work wi th the Alaska POVier Authority in the development of the Susitna Hydroelectric Project.This board will identify and comment on soci oeconomic and envi ronmenta 1 issues and regulatory requi rements.It is suggested that the Formal Oesig~ation of the Susitna TeChnical Advisory Committee (see attached memo to you dated November 17,1982) be i~plemented to accomodate this recommendation. Once project construction begins,a similar interagency board should be established to monitor the socioeconomic and environmental impacts and regulatory compliance.This board would make recommendations to the Alaska Power Authority to correct associated problems as necessary. The Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation appreciates this oppor- tunity to comment on the Susitna Hydroelectric Project,Federal Energy Regula- tory License Application,l xhibit E and hopes that these comments will be useful to you.If you have any questions,or if we can be of further assistance,do not hesitate to contact Bob Martin or Steve Zrake in Anchorage. Si ncere ly, ~~ Richard A.Nev~ Commissioner Attachment cc:Bob Martin,ADEC,Anchorage Steve Zrake,ADEC,Anchorage Su-Hydro Steering Co~nittee Part 3 of SUS 347 (also SUS 10042) Comments on Draft Exhibit E of Susitna Hydroelectric Project License Application. Letter to Eric Yould from Esther Wunnicke, January 13, 1983. • To Eric Yould, Executive Director, Alaska Power Authority • From Esther Wunnicke, Commissioner, Alaska Dept. of Natural Resources • 6 p. .. ---~.~~- , I L..'"-.\•l..-,•-'...i :.'L '.SHEFFIELD,GOVERNCR DH"'HT~II:NT ttt·N~TU."I.RF.SOIIRCF.S OFFICE OF THE CClMMSSlONER I, January 13,1983 Mr.Eric Yould Execut i ve Director Alaska Power Authority 334 W.5th Avenue Anchorage,AX 99501 Dear Mr.Yould: ~J 2 L H The Alaska Depsrtment of Natural Resources has reviewed the draft Exhibit E application for the Susitna Hydroel~ctric Project.We are submit :ing comments on this document which in part satisfy the agency coordination requirements established by the Federal Energy Regulatory Comaiss ion, (FERC). The formal position of the Department of Natural Resourc~s regarding the Susitna project is contained in the Exhibit E comments which follow ;our April 16,1982 testimony to the Alaska Power Authority Board of Directors (copy attached)and the letter to Eric Yould from Reed Stoops dated October II,1982 (copy attached).We request that an unabridged copy of these comments accompany the perfected application submitted to FERC. ORGANIZATION AND PRESENTATION OF EXHIBIT E In some cases the Exhibit E text,tables,and figures do not reference t he documents from which the material was taken.The consequence of this inadequate documentation is that the reader ca nnot determine the specificity,accuracy or sufficiency of the Exhibit E.We recommend that the speci fic references to ori ginal documents be included in this Exhibit E before the application is submitted to FERC. WATER QUANTITY AND QUALITY During the past two years the Department of Natural Reaources has emphasized the great lmportance of acquiring a clear understanding of the rela t ionship of various flow-re lease rates from the proposed dams and the corresponding i~acts on downstream aquatic re80urce~,habitats ,and uses.ibis information ia vital to enable DNR to make informed decisions with respect to instream flow reservations and water appropriations both of which are required in order to facilitate the Suaitna Hydro Project.The flow releases schedules presented in Exhibit E for filling and operation of the Watana and Devil Canyon Dams have not been developed in consultation with the Department of Natural Resources or by a methodology approved by this Department whi ch 1.s charged by law witl:authority to adjudicate all water appropriations and inatream flow reservations in the State.Indeed, Exhibit E does not explain the process by which these release schedules flows were devised.We strongly recommend that the license application contain a specific.detailed flow release schedule developed through a quantifiable instream flow analysis program coordinated with DNR and with state and federal fish and wildlife ag encies . Attached please find the entire text of the review comments from our Division of Land and Water Management.Please consult that text for additional specific comments relating to navigability .thermal modeling.and nitrogen gas supersaturation. ACCESS This department's comments regarding the proposed route from the Denali Highway to the project site should not be construed as support for that V loj ~~L LuuLe &b the preferre~~ans of ~ccess.This agency.along Witn the other state and federal resources agencies/has consistently favored road access to the project from the Parks Highway.However,if the route proposed in Exhibit E is selected.we recommend certain design modifications . We recommend that the principal design criteria for the proposed route be the enhancement of scenic values and public safety.We consider the proposed high-speed design of the road inappropriate.The long-term use of the road after dam construction will be primarily sightseeing and recreation.The highway should.therefore.be designed to take maximum advantage of the scenic potential of the area which traverses some of the most dramatic in North America. In addition to being an unattractive counterpoint to the natural landscape. the high-speed road proposed (55 miles per hour with 40 miles per hour at difficult curves)may create serious safety problems.The long braking distance for a vehicle traveling 55 miles per hour on a gravel road endangers the stop and go driver and those who park and stand along the side of the road to take photographs.Although a high-speed road will yield cost savings during dam construction,it is questionable whether these cost savings outweigh the long term benefits of a scenic road.The rationale for a high-speed access road design should be based on an explicit quantification of the cost saved by that design.We believe the scenic and public safety benefits foregone by a high-sp~ed design when accumulated over the expected life of the road are almost certainly greater than the costs saved by such a design to facilitate the brief construction phsse of the dams. Although design standards for upgrading the Denali Highway between Cantwell and the proposed access road were not discussed in Exhibit E the issue merits comment because an upgrade will be necessary to accommodate project-related traffic.The portion of the Denali Highway affected provides excep tional views of the Alaska Range,Reindeer Hills and the Talkeetna Mountains.The Alaska National Interest Lands Conservation Act (ANILCA)of 1981 called for a joint state,federal and private study of the scenic qualities of the Denali Highway.The intent was to encourage cooperative land management of lands adjacent to the highway to protect its important scenic values.The Denali Scenic Highway Study will be published in early 1983.DNR encourages APA to consider carefully the recommendations of that report and to support a design which is consistent with the study recommendations. Finalll,we recommend re-routing of the proposed access road where feasible to take advantage of the extraordinary vistas.Presently the r oad transects a large wetland in the upper Brushkana drainage.Consultants l c .~onsible for the aesthetics portion of Exhibit E re commended that this section of the road be re-routed to higher ground to the west.We concur and support that recommendation,which will also protect the wetland from the impacts of road construction and should result in lower long-term maintenance costs because of better soil conditions. RECREATION AND AESTHETICS We agree with the consultants'conclusions that recreation plans be focused on those opportunities occurring elsewhere in the project area rather than those directly associated ~.th the reservoirs.Because of fluctuating water levels and steep shorelines,the reservoirs themselves will not present an attractive recreation environment except for occasional use by speedboats. The greater recreation opportunities will be associsted with the access road and the many lakes,streams,and alpine hiking areas that can be reached from that road.The consultant~identification of recreation resources on Cook Inlet Region,Incorporated (CIRl)land raises the question as to how these recreation opportunities might be realized .We recommend that the Power Authority consider Bome sort of leasing or concession arrangement with CIRI to facilitate public recreation use on Stephan Lake.At least one public use site of a suitable size (40 acres or more)should be provided at Stephan for camping,fishing,and as a staging area for those people using the lake for float trips down the Talkeetna River.In addition,legal access acrosp.vl11ag~and regional corporation lands should be secured and a trail constructed from the reservoir to Stephan Lake.In order to most effectively enhance the recreational potential of the proposed projects,we would recommend that the recreational element of Exhibit E a dd three sites adjacent to the Alaaka Railroad.These sites are Indian Rive r ,Gold Creek, and Curry.Each of these sites would provide a destination point for recreation users of the Alaska Railroad and would provide a greater diversity of recreation opportunities.We recommend that management of the off-aite recreational facilities associated with the access r~ad are best met through the budgeting process of the Alaska Power Authority.If the Division of Parks is expected to manage these sites,then we will have to work closely with APA to ident Ify priorities for project fuuding. In summary,we feel that the connultant has done an excellent job in identifying the recreation opportunities and resources available in ~he project area and would request that the scope of the study be expand~d to look at the identified sites along the Alaska Railroad as described above •. HISTORIC AND ARCHEOLOGICAL The report on historic and archeological resources is well done and addresses all the pertinent questions about mitigation.We concur with the attigation plan as presented in the draft document. We concur with and support the proposed education program described on Page E.4.114.We consider such a progr83 to be a necessary and effective part of any larg~construction project.If project personnel are adequately trained and sitec are clearly marked,avoidance should be a viable ~tigative .easure in many of the indirect and potential impact cases. TRANSMISSION LINE The Access Plan Recommendation Report dated August.1982 proposes routing a transmission line through a non-roaded area south of the proposed road between the d~sites.The line was well sited taking advantage of terrain and v e ~e t a t i o n to m1nl~ze eDvl~onmental AI.d visual iapacta 8b well as minimizing construction costs.We support the route proposed in the August report.We have since been informally advised that APA has decided to route the transmission line along the road between the daa sites to allow year-round access for maintenance (winter over-land access via all terrain vehicle is feasible without a road).If road access is determined to be absolutely necessary,we agree with this decision;it would be inappropriate to have two east-west road corridors through this area.However, presentation by consultants at the APA sponsored workshop in Anchorage during the week of November 29 to December 3,1982,indicated that there may be excessive concern by maintenance engineers with year-round access.The consultants argued persuasively that maintenance by helicopters is not only feasible,but is cheaper than road maintenance and is a common practice in states other than Alaska.Helicopter maintenance bas also proven itself in more rugged terrain and extreme weather conditions o~southeast Ala8ka~ The need for road access in case of bad weather Is a concern,but it Is important to clarify precisely what is gained in terms of minimizing the risk of power outage by having road access.That gain should then be compared with the costs.In this case the major cost is a strong negative visual i.pact on the road between tl~dam sites.In contrast,the gain seems to be ainimal.In short,the value of year-round access Is not infinite and in this case may be significantly less than the costs. SOCIOECONOMIC L~PACTS The permanent townsite appears to have been located in an exceptionally wet area.Apparently the major criterion for locating the townsite was land status.A more appropriate location from the standpoint of land capability and general a'lenities for the inhabitants of the townsite would be in the Fog Lakes area south of the Sus1tna River on privately owned land.The townsite 1s particularly 1mportant because,as indicated in the Exhib1t E, the tendency for workers to reside on-site dep~nds on the qua11ty of housing and nther ~~n 1 t i e s .Exhibit E emphasizes that a high amenity site will minimize impacts on outlying communities by encouraging a higher perceutage of workers to live on-site.We support this objective but do not think siting the townsite as proposed will help achieve it.We strongly suggest finding a more suitable 10cat1on for the towns1te. Exhibit E projects minimal project impacts on local facilities and 8ervir ~s due principally to the provision of on-site housing for ~urkers. The total Mat-So Borough population increase as a result of the project is projected as 4.700 in 1990 (peak year).1.110 of whom are expected to live off-site in rural communities.Should that projection be accurate.the off-site impacts would.indeed.be limi t.ed.However.the projection assumes absolutely no in-migration by unsuccessful workers.This is a misleadin~ assumption.In fact.in-migration by unsuccessful job seekers will probably be considerable.Such in-migration is a likely result of decreases in job opportunities in the lower 48 and has occurred in Alaska during construction of the nil pipeline.Current economic conditions would stimulate extensive in-migration to a greater extent than is predicted in Exhibit E. If in-migration is seriously underestimated in Exhibit E.then a wide range of socioeconomic impacta is underestimated as well.Past experience in the state shows that boom conditions,such as the proposed dam construction would create,have led to rent increases,~rollferation of sub-standard housing and strain on public facilities and services.The potential impact caused by unemployed in-migrants is particularly significant in light of their tendency to be more of a disruptive influence on saall communities than employed in-migrants.Unemployed in-migrants.for example.tend to require more services such as public health and family assistance of various forms.They pay fewer taxes and may have little stake in the community. thus caring less about relatively minor issues such as yard maintenance and the appearance of local parks.In the small.rustic communities in the project area,these problems could create considerable tension between current residents and the new in-migrants.We consider the socioeconomic impact assessment to be inadequate without an attempt to estimate the numbers and effects of unsuccessful job seekers and their dependents who will move into the region. It would be more accurate and useful tn provide a range of projected population increases in affected communities rather than a precise number such as 263 in Talkeetna by 1990 or 75 in Trapper Creek.These numbers convey a precision not supported by the methodology or the probability o f error inherent in such projections.More useful information for community planning purposes would be a high-low range.A key consideration in planning for public services is the populati,n threshhold which requires new capital expenditures.For example.if a population increase of 300 would require a ne~community well in Talkeetna.the city would be better off knowing that it fac~s a probable incr~ase of 250 to 350.rather than knOWing that someone has disaggregated a series of numbers to produc~an estimate of 263. Exhibit E discusses generally the need for measures to ensure that the local unemployed get a chance at project-related jobs.Assuming there will be considerable competition for jobs by in-migrants and that the state's objective is to encourage local hire.it will be necessary to develop a clearly defined and legal program to achieve that objective.The measures recommended by Exhibit E are vague and do not reflect the significance of this i s.ue to the state or the borough.We suggest more attention be given to developing a more comprehensive approach to address this issue in the Exhibit E application to FERC. ALTERNATIVE ENERGY nee Exhibit E devotes about four and one half pag es t o the geothermal energy alternat ive.This informat ion i s factual and provides general background for the reader.The Exhi bi t E could be improved by noting tha t the Department of Nat ura l Resour ces has a geothermal lease in the Mount Spurr area planned fo r Hay.1983. The Exhibit E should ac knowledge thst geothermal en ergy i s i mmu ne to f uel price escalation as is hydropower.We agree with the Exhibit E statement that little is known about the geothermal properties.Until exploration of the geothermal properties of Ht .Spurr has occurred the viability of gpothermal power for the railbelt region is unknown.We recommend that the Exhi bit E be revised to include this information. In summary.~~sppre ciate this opportunity to provide formal review comments to APA on the draft Exhibi t E. Slnce lely yours , L.h'<U/(!tJ~ Es t her Wunnlcke Co..tss1oner At tachJoents cc :Division Directors Special Assistants Part 4 of SUS 347 (also SUS 10043) Comments on Draft Exhibit E of Susitna Hydroelectric Project License Application. Letter to Eric Yould from Keith Bayha, January 14, 1983. • To Eric Yould, Executive Director, Alaska Power Authority • From Keith Bayha, Assistant Regional Director, U.S. Fish and Wildlife Service, Anchorage • 7 p. with 112 p. attachment u ·nited States Depanment of the Interior I'N REI'l y RlFI .. TO; WAES FlSH AND WILDLIFE SEJt VICE 1011 E. TUDOR RD. ANCHORAGE. ALASKA 99S03 (907) 276-3800 I I I I I I I I I I I I I Eric P. Yould, Exec:uthe Director Aluk& Power· Authority 334 West 5th Avenue Anchorage, Alaska 99501 De&r Mr. Yould: 1'4 JAI 1983 The Ffsh a.nd W11d1ffe Servfce (FVS) has been requested by letter cated 15 Novtllber 1982, fr011 Acres '-'"fc&n, Inc., to fo,...lly rev·few &nd c~t on the Federal Energy Regulatory Ca.fssfon (FEAC) draft license applic&tfon Exhfbit E for the Susitna Hydroelectric Pt-oject. This response is being provided as parti&l fu1f111aent of your request &nd fs intended to be a constructive evaluation in reg&rd to fish and wildlife resources. we hope that our ca.ents will be of value fn drafting the final Tfcense application. The following FWS letters were also provided in response to foral pre-application requests on this project: 1. 2.3 June 1980, lett• to E.rfc You1d. z. 17 Oecllllbel" 1981, letter to Er1c You.ld. 3. 30 Declllber 1981, letter to Erfc Yould. 4. 5 January 1982, letter to Eric Yould. Since these letters were forully requested as part of the FERC pre-application coordination proces.s we consider it appropriate that c;ur responses be specifically addressed as p&rt of the E.xhibit E. The following letters were ~rovfded as informal consultation to facn ftate the Susftna Project planning procAss: l. 15 November 1979, letter to Er1c Yould. 2. 16 April 1982, testi.,ny presented to the Alaska Power Authority (APA) Board. 3. 17 August 1982, letter to Eric Yould. 4. 5 October 1982. letter to Eric Yould. -2- we anticipated s•ing in the draft Exhibit E specific responses to the concerns and rec~nciations raised in the letters and test180ny provided. This 1s consistent with advice provided by the F'ERCl!. In that this did not occur, we reco-.nd that the 11A re.spond in the Exhibit E to the specific caa.nts and reca.endatfons wh fch &re contained fn these lett .. s and testi110ny. The response provided by this letter, our previous letters (both those fonully and inforally requested), the testf.,ny .presented to the 11A Board, and the letter recently provided to you on 19 Novelber 1982, constitute the official position of the FWS on this pr?jeet. · The principal authority of the FVS to provide c.-rats and rec:a.endations rests fn the Fish and Wildlife Coordination Act (48 Stat. 401, as ... nded; 16 u.s.c. 661 et seq. >Y. 11te Coordination Act requires that fish and wildlife conservation be given ,~al consideration with oth .. project futures throughout the Federal ead agencies' planning and decision-aking processes. The Act also requires consultation with State and Federal fish and wildlife resource agencies tD asca"'Uin what project fK11itfes, operations, or ...sures -.y be considered necessary by those agencies to •ftfgate and COiilpensate for project-related losses to f1sh and wildlife resources, as well as to enhance those resources. The reports and rec12nendations of the fish and wildlffe resource agencies on the fish and wildlife aspects of such projects wust be presented to action agency decision-akers and ewe. ... applicable) to Congress. The Coordination Act requires ..-e than 1 consultative responsibility; it is &n afffr.ative .. ndate to action agencfes. Like the National Enviro,..,.tal Polfcy Act (NEPA) (42 u.s.c. 4321 et. seq.), ft requires early planning and post-construction coordination and full consideration of reca .. endations made by resource agencies. Our rec~dations, under the Coordinatf·on Act, •st be, •as speefffc as ts practicable w1th respect to features r~nded for wfldlffe conservation and devel~t. lands to be utflfzed or acquired for such purposes, the result~ expected, and shall descr-ibe the dlage to wildlife attributable to the project and the .. sures proposed for •ftfg&tfng or ca.pensattng for Ulese d-ges.• Sf111lar language is found in NEPA • s Section 102 (2 )(B.) that agencies ident.ify and de¥elop Mthods and procedures which will insure that presently unquantiffed enviro,..,.tal a.enities and values -.y be gffen appropriate consideration fn decfs1on..akfng, along with econo.fc and technical considerations. Y Appendix A. FERC Applfca.tion Procedures for Hydropower Licenses, Exa.ptions and Prelf•1nary Permits. April 1982. ~ The Federal Power Act (16 U.S.C. 791a-825r; 41 Stat. 1603), as ... nded, as interpreted in Regulations {F.R. Vol. 46, No. 219, 13 Novelber 1981) specifies requir..ents to satisfy the Coordination Act. -3- Both the Coordination Act and NEPA, necessitate, c~surate with the scope of a pr·oject: (1) A description and quantification of the existing f1s~ and wildlife and thetr habitat within the area of project 1~~pacts; (2) A description and quantification of anticipated project i~~pacts on these .-.sources; and (3) Specific •1tfpt.1on •asures necessary to avoid, •in1•ize, or CCJIIIMI'Sata for these 1~~p~cts. we have revfwed the draft Exhibit E fn consfdwation, of these statutes. The adequacy of the review doc.-at has been eu.1ned fn respect to .e.ether or not the fnforution, analysts, and lrftfgation plan provided would allow the FERC to be in c011pl1ance witt. the requtr..nts of these envfro..ntal .andates if they tssuld a license to the applicant. Our review has been undertaken tn light of our f~ correspondence, includ1ilg the 16 Apr11 1982, testf•ny presented to the •A Board by Deputy Regional Director LeRoy Sowl. Except for ft. (8) we find the testimny as valid today u tt was at tllat tt•. It fs appVent that the consultation process has fa111d tn so far as the intent of the FE~ regulations!!. We have written nu.rous letters on this pro .Ject to assist M'A 1n planning .usures to protect and enha_nce fish and wfldlife resources. Responses to our lettrs have been non-existent, ar too late to deal with the prob1• of concern (e.g., FWS letters dated 5 October 1982, and 19 Nov...,.. 1982). An illustration of .e.at we havt found to be an inadequate level of consu1utfon can be found in the 15 Oeclllber 1982. response to o":r 19 llov...,. 1982. letter. Ve ~sidered our requests to be fully within the fntant of the FERC regulatfons!!. Attached to thfs letter are our for.l c~ts on the F"ERC draft license application Exhibit E for the Susftna Project. C~ts are provided on Chapters 2, 3, 5, 7, a. 9, and 10. We have also revfewed Chapters 1, 4, and 6. However, we do not at th 1 s t 1• have 1n1 c~ts to offer on these chapters. The c~ts provided are organized fnto general ca.ents and specific c~ts for uch chapter. In our attapt to be as responsive as possible w1thfn the 11•1ted tf• fr .. IIA has established for our review and ca••nts, we have not been able to organize our ca..ents into 1 COiprehensfve lfstfng of def1cfene1es, clarfffcatfons, fnforation needs, and reco.end&tfons. Many of these ca.ents have been left W'fthin the context of the HCtfon wfthfn whfch they are raised. We feel by c~tfng 1n this way it w111 assist you fn consistently correctfng the def1c1encfes fdentffied. Y See Footnote 1 • supra. Y See Footnote 1, SUJ!'I• -4- The following ca.ents are generally applicable to several chapt1rs and, tn sa.. cases, are applfca~le to all of the chapters: 1. 2. 3. It fs our under,undfng that the projections of future ~ needs used tn the 11cenu •pp11at1on are generally agreed to be higtl!/ and are being rHvaluated for sublltttal to the FERC after the license application is subllftted {Acres -..ican Deputy Project Manager John Haydet1, personal c~ntcation). The changes in the load forecasts a" dr-ttc. Ig the Acres ,_,.tcan report evaluating econa.ic tradeoffs of flow regt.s!/ the ass-.ct .ad•ate load forecast for the year 2010 is 1 791 geptAtt-hours {&Wh). In the latest Battelle NewsletterTJ the -..ate forecast is 4,986 , ... and the low forecast fs 3,844 &MI. The signtffcant decline in pf"Ojected power d.ands has large illplfcatfons to .any of the project USUIIptions .tlfch have constrained •1tigation planning, for eXMple: available waw for downstre• flows; .ode, t1•1ng, and :•outing of construction access; and sd•edulfng of work. The lfcense applfcatton ~ould fully discuss the tlplicatfons of the latest load forecasts. The intent of the Coordination Act and NEPA is that envfro.-ntal resources be given equal consfd•ation with project features. Consistent with NEPA, as •11 u the IIA Mitigation Policy, avoid&nce of adYtrse i11pacts should have b .. n given priority as a •itigation .. asure. we have found thts generally not to be the ease, for ex.-ple: lOde, ti•ing, and routing of construction access; sehedulfng of work;. type and siting of the construction ca.p/vtllage; recr•ation develop~ent; tnstre .. flow regt•; and filling schedule. Other ex111ples can be found fn our Spec.ffic C~ts. Engineering and environ.ental studies do not s ... to be tnteractfve. It appears that the findings of enviorr•ntal studies have not been integrated tnto the enytneerfng design. This ay be due fn part to the short tt .. fr-estab fshed for project planning. An u•fnation of the sequencing of the studies fllustrates thfs probl•. It is our understanding that the Aquatic Studies Progr•, designed to be the basis for determination of f11pacts to the aquatic syst• and associated •1tigation ..uures, was established as a ffve year study. We are now two years tnto this progr•. The analysis of the data to allow an assesSIInt of i~~pacts and for.ulat1on of •1tfgat1on proposals .ay add another year to thts pr-ocess. N'A elqMCt.s to obtafn a lfcense, and !I Battelle. Nwsletter 14 (Final): Raflbelt Electric Power Alternatives ll Study. Dec:llllber 1982. Acres ~fan. Energy St.ulatfon Stucfte.s to Select Project Drawdown and Mit1gtt1on Flows. October 1982. !J See Footnote 4, supra. -5- blg1n construction fn late 1984, or early 198581. Obviously, this does not alTON for an f~act analysts and mitigation planning bas4d on these studies prior to licensing. Mitigation planning, and an ass~u581nt of tht i~acts of different •itigatfve options needs to be undertaken in regard to project costs, viability, socioeconomic consfderat1ens, and •1t1gat1on proposed for potentially c01p1ting interests. This should all be, cons1dered through the dtvelo.-nt of the enviro.,.ntal fapKt stat ... nt, and clrta1nly prior to license issuance. 4. N.-,.ous tXIIIplts of Tack of coordination and/or ~nicat1on between the groups responsible for the different study el..ents are evident. ~les can be found by e01p1ring discussions concerning lrtni.u. downstr•• f1ow releases tn Chapters 4 and 10 to what 1s found in Chapters Z and 3. Raservoir tellperature .odelfng discussions in Chapter 10 are not consistent with what is stAted fn Chaptws 2 and 3. Another txJ111Ple 1s found fn the •1nf•l level of conc .. n expressed in Chapter 10 r~ socioecona.ic (Chaptw 5) considerations, such as illpKts of lfcen,se den11"~. Mort specific ~nts are included in the attached doc-.nt. Other ExiH~1 ts wwe not provided to us for rhiew although we requested th• by letter d&ted 19 Nov-.r 1982. 5. Research of background uu .... tton is frequently inadequate and inca~~plete. An exuple wouJ~ '"" the discussions concerning subsistence (Chapters 3 and 5). ~1ore adeqaa"e research of this very illlpOrtant area appears Justified. we have lfsttd s~vwal readfly avaflable refereacas which would be of value in f~ovfng this discussion. In Chapters 2 and 3 •int ... l inforation is brought into the discussions concerning physical changes whfch have been observed at si•flfar hydropower projects. We are sure that any of the potential i11pacts that are discussed for Sus1tna (e.g., ta.perature concerns) art not unique to thfs proJect. The State's experience with the Trans-Alaska Pfpelfnt Syst• (TAPS) proJect could have been drawn upon .ore fully as an 1x111ple, particularly in regard to soctoecon011ic (Chapter 5) discussions. Another ex.~ple is the discussion concerning natural gas and geoth.,...l electric generation as alternatives to Susitna (Chapter 10). 'lery ltttle use was •de of existing 1nforut1on bases. 6. Speculation fs n~t alwaJS claa~ly d1st1ngu1shtd fro. data-based conclusions. Thfs probl• 1s 110st apparent fn Chapters 2 and 3 and shou 1 d be corrected. 7. Ladt of quantiffcatfon fs a recurrent probl• fn the Exhibit. Neither b&st lfne data nor f~~pacts are appropTfateJy quantified (e.g •• Chapters Z, 3, 5, and 10). Stat_..ts fn the doc.-nt let us know that, •"'ch of the discussion is based on professional jud~t,• (page E-3-3), and, •f:1any of the sute.nts are speculative ••• and ••• unsupported,• (page E-3-56). Othlf' stat ... nts let us know that ongoing, or planned studies, will fill these nu.erous data gaps to allow a quantification of the resources and i11pacts .tlfch would let us go beyond, 'the conceptual !I Alaska Power Auth,orfty. Request for Proposal No. APA-83-R-QJO Construction Manag ... nt Services for the Wltana Phase of the SUsitna Hydroelectric Project. 15 Novtlllber 1982. 8. 9. -6- •itigatfon plan,• (pa91 E-3-116). Recognizing a probl .. does not, in and of itself, corr"~ ft. We were particularily concerned with this fn our review of Chapt• 3. In the Exhibft E, the existing resources should be· quantified. Tlle potential i11pacts to these resources ~hould be quantified and then evaluated over the life of the project. Only at that point can specific, effective •1tigat1on .. asures emerge. WI consider quantification of existing resources and i~~pacts and a specific, effective mitigation plan essential to the develo,.ent of an acceptable env fror.ental i~~pact mu.nt. The ongo f ng. and p 1 annld studies, _. fch ar-e f-req..,.t 1 y noted (particularly in Chaptlrs 2 and 3) should be fully fdentfffed so • can u.1ne th• fn regard to thefr scope. WI cannot, oth.,..fse, dlt ... 1ne _.at needs to bl done and the tf• fr-for aceo~~plfsa..tlt. Frth• discusnfon is provided fn our Chapt.rs 2 and 3 general c.-nts, and throughout our specific ca.ents sections. In several of the chapters (e.g., Chapte-rs 2, 3, and 5) we are faced w1th •1tigatfon options to contend wfth identfffed (although frequently wtquantfffld) advrse 111paC'ts. For eu~~ple, fn Chaptlr 3 th•e are discussions on the potential value of spiking spring flows far sal-.. out-11fgration and the installation of a fifth portal on the •tt·f-level 1nUke structure to provide wa,..., downstr-t...,..atures during fillfng. If these •itfgatfon proposals have validity, they should have been incorporated into the project design and operational plan. The docuaent does not provide an adequate •itfgation plan as required. In addition, •itigation .. sures which are presented should have proven successful in Alaska, or fn a si•ilar envfron.nt. If the proposals are not proven, then they would need to M daonstrated effective fn the project area. Furth• discussion is provided in our Chapter 3 t~Mral c~ .. ants sections. 10. Tlle need for an, effect1ve 80nitoring progru through construction and tile ~ation phase fs discussed fn •ny of the chapters. However, the progr• fs not adequtely described. we fully support the estab11st.ent af a 80nitorfng progr•. WI believe the progr• should provide for participation by representatives of appropriate State, Federal, and local agencies and be financed by the project. Tbis panel should have the authority to reca..end .o~1~ieation of how activities are conducted to assure that •itfgation is ~.,fectfve. a.a-ndld changes in the •ftigatfon progru should be adopted ~rou~ a 81Cfaanf• establfsMd 1n the license, •tually acceptable to a.l concrned bodies. 11. Unfortunately the rush to a~~t the schedule for the license applfcat1on has resulted tn poor quality control, i.e., countless typographical errors, •issing Tines, •f~refereuced tables and figures, unclear sentences, internal inconsistencies, inadequate doc.-ntation, •issfng references fn bfblfographfes, etc. This should have been elf•inated in a thorough edft1ng prior to release for agency pre-license application review. Our rtvfew for bfologfcal ca.pleteness was s081What haapered by th1s ~,.obl•. -7- In the previously referenced FVS Tetteos and testf.ony, any of the s .. concerns discussed above and fn the attached c~ts were rafsed.. It fs our vf• that unless the issues raised tn this lett.r are sat1sfactorfly resolved we do not believe the application could provide the basis of an acceptable envtron.ntal i11pact stat-.nt. In this respect we consider the license application to bt deficient. We ~nd that you strengthen the license application by including fnfor~atfon resulting fra. a thorough evaluation of the btologfcal data collected during the 1982 ffeld suson. This would enable an usesaent af the adequacy wfth the data base to support a sufffcfentl.r quantified i~~p~ct analysts and, in turn, a spectftc. effective •ttfgatfon plan. We believe a realistic appraisal could then be .. o. as to ~•n any r ... infng deficiencies could be satisfied. Attadl.ent cc: WAES Yvonne Weber, WG-FVS c. Olbeltus/Acres Alerfcan Quentin Edson/FEAC NMFS, EPA, ,.S, USGS, BLM, ADEC, AEIOC • Andlorage A 1 C1rson/ ADIIR. Anchorage AIFI6, Hu. Dh •• Su Hydro Studies, Anchorage Chapter 1. GENERAL DESCRIPTlON aF THE LOCALE: No eo.ents • • Chapter 2. WATER USE AND QUALITY General Cogments In exagininy Chapter Z we were c ~ncerned that sufficient scope and quantifications are not provided to allow a quantified • pact evaluation of the f t sheries and other bfoloyical resources. The infor.ation provided should allow for the developgent of specific and effective .. asures whfch would fully 11itigate for all adverse imp•cts. We are left wfth the definite illlpl"essfon. dlat the project would, through changes fn streua flow, water qualfty, teaper•tures, fee conditions, vegetation, and slough habitats, have significant effects upon the resources of concern to us, particularly the fisheries. However, quantification of Ute potenti•T impacts is generally lacking, as are specific eff'active mitigation •asures. Of course the latter can not be accoe~plished prior to the foraer, despite the atte~~pts found in this chapter. A significant portion of the lack of specificity found in Chapter Z is due to the fact that although two years of data have been gath .. ed (1981 and 1982) the Exhibit E reflects only the 1981 data. We have consistently s~ated that the 1982 data be analyzed and included in .the Exhibit E (SH Deputy Regional Director LeRoy Sowl's 16 April 1982 statement to the APA Board, and our letter dated 5 October 1982 to Eric Yould). Our position reaains the same. The chapter does not identify what studies have been coap1eted, what studies were ongoing 1n 1982, and what studies are proposed. Until this is provided we cannot detergine what studies we would like to see QOdffi~. and what we see as beiny cl'fssed. \lithout this type of infonaatior., the. resource agencies are placed fn a reactive gode, i.e. we can only cogment on what should have been eXIIi11 ned in COIIi1p leted. studies. Howev.,. 1 in so doing, we can bitter faci11ute the applicant's efforts to plan a project we can support. An exU1ple of a proposed study Vhich is not addressed fn this dtapter is the Arctic Environlillntal Inform.at ion and Data Center (AEIDC) study. The following fs a sugaary of this proposed study: The A£1DC proposal is designed to (1) accurately and coaprehensfvely predict systa-wide strea.flow and tS~pQrature effects of the dllil(s). and (2) interpret effects of such changes in terms of aquatic habitats and fish populations . To aCcOiilpHsh these general objectives, AEIOC proposes using a linked systea of si11.1lation .odels which requires data fr011 other project studies, available lfterature soatrce.s, and professional judg .. nt. The study fs a result of the need to consider the special aquatic habitat relationships fn the Susitna River basin and the need to account for the interrelated effects of fee, sedil8nt, strea.flow, and teDperature changes which will aCCOIIIMnY construction, filling, and operation of the selected d&lil or daas. Most assesslilents of hydroelectric projects are based upon impacts associated with changes in mean 110nthly streamflows and temperatures. However, the actual impacts of the project aay not be caused by the gean events but through changes in the natural pattern of streamflow or tegperature variation. Further, a single set of ;ean gonthly flows does not actua tty reflect instantaneous flows ;n the river; the ac.tua 1 predicted .. an monthly discharge wfll probably not occur dur;ng a given uonth because of expected anomalies in hydrologic statistics. Therefore, ;t 1s necessary to predict the range of mean 110nthly flows expected, based on reservoir inflow, ~er yeneration requirements, and dovnstream demands. The AEIOC model system would depend heavily upon a reservoir operation model to generate an exhaustive range of feasfnle weekly or monthly flow regfaes and the expected variation over a 30 year forecast period. The IIIOdel systea would include provisions far fee and sedi..,.t modeling to account for changes fn substrate distribution, bed elevation or Channel configuration which might result fro. project operation. At a •int.u., fee and substrate modeling would support the assUiptions that hydraulic boundary condftfons either remain stable ar change wfthfn predictable lfmfts wfth project operation. The al"l"ay of predicted weekly or 110nthly flows and temperatures IDlY be bfologfcally interpreted fn several ways. The available habitat data base fs heavily weighted at thfs tfae toward know chua and sockeye salliiOn spawning areas fn sloughs and sfde channels fn the Susftna Rfver between Talkeetna and Devfl Canyon. Access and spawning dynaafcs wfth respect to .. fnsteg discharge are the .. jor simulation goals of several ongoing ffeld studies. The AEIOC modeling system could provide a tfme-serfes approach to deterg;ne effects upon crftfcal lffe history stages of these species. It fs possible that the entire rfverfne lffe cycle of chua salliiOn afght be simulated under various flow regimes to predict long-term population trends. A sfgflar analysis of sockeye salmon mfyht be possible. The prfaary concept, agafn, fs ffrst to credibly and c~rehensfvely predict all project operations and thefr effect upon the habitat-related physical parameters wfthfn the systea; secondly, those eff-cts wfll be interpreted, through long-tara farecastfng, fn teras of thl :r influences upon affected salaon populations. We support the proposed AEIOC study. It should provide the bash for determining project fnstre .. flow f~acts and a reasonable assessment of mftfgatfve alternatives. It fs a~parent that the proposed fnstream flow releases are designed for liiUfliUII power production and do not reflect biological needs. The 12,000 cubfc feet per second (cfs) ffgure far August reflects the gaxfmu. agaunt of wat..-that can be discharge without sfgnfffcant econe~~ic effects. It fs our understanding that the project releases would be 10,000 to 12,000 cfs yaar round. no consideration was given to the potential fapact of the project during winter when flows of thfs aagnftude might prove highly detrfaental to the fishery. The potential value of spfkfng flows during the spring to facflftate smolt out-mfgratfon and flush the sloughs of fee and debris fs discussed. However, these flows are not reflected fn the proposed releases. We consider ft very important that the license application contain a specific, detailed flow release schedule, whfch fs designed to mftfgate project impacts, protect or enhance conditions for ffsh spawning, feeding, unrestricted ffsh passaye, out-migration, and provide overwintering habitat for ffsh in the Susftna Rfver. Thfs schedule should be developed through a quantified instreag flow analysis vhich has been coordinated with the FYS, National ~~rine Fisheries Service, and the Alaska Departgent of Fish and Gage (ADF&G). In response to the APA request of 2 September 1982, the FYS, by letter dated 5 October 1982, provided input specific to the draft Exhibit E. le had expected our coaaents to be addressed in the draft Exhibit E. This is in cogpliance with the FERC recoaaendation that inforaation. included at the initiation of foraal consultation, • ••• responds to the preliminary comments and rec~ndations of the agenci~s.•9/ Since this was not done, our 5 October 1982 letter should be made part of our for;al response on the draft Exhibit E. As such, the points raised in that letter should be specifically addressed in the Exhibit E submitted as part of th~ license application. ~~ny of the points raised would be most appropriately responded to in Chapter 2. Avoidance of adverse iapacts should, in compliance with the APA Mitigation Polfcy document, and l~EPA guidelines, be given top priority in the license application. In particular, our concerns as to the decisions vhich led to such project features as the cawp/village, transmission line routing, construction access routing, turbine configuration, filling regime, flow regime, etc., with regard to avoidance of iap~cts should be addressed. Specific Comments 2 -BASELINE DESCRIPTIONS 2.3 -Susitna River Water Quality (a) Physical Parameters (i) Water Temperature -r1ainstem: Paragraphs 1 and 2: Those liiOnths which are being referred to by winter and sugaer should be indicated. -Sloughs: Paragraph 1: The first step in understanding the temperature relationship between the ~instem and the sloughs is to geasure the teap~ra­ tures of both sites. This has been done. The relationship between the gainstem and the sloughs regarding temperatures (as well as other ~ater quality paraaeters) then must be established. This process, apparently, is just beginning. To this end, one slough (#9) has been examined. This exami- nation has focused, correctly, on the groundwater relationship. According to Tony Burgess (Acres Agerican), in his Susitna Hydro Exhibit E Uorkshop presen- tation (12/l/82) on groundwater upwelling and water tegperature in sloughs, the yroundwater regiae can be modeled, but locally the match is not very good: The groundwater t51peratures near the surface do not &atch the predic- ted temperatures. Continued study is obviously indicated for slough #9. After an understanding is achieved for that slough, the program would need to be expanded to other sloughs, possibly sloughs SA, 11, 19, 20 and 21. These sloughs have been r.10re intensively examined than other sloughs in this reach of the Susitna River. Ue rec~nd that this general pro~ram be undertaken. 21 FERC Application Procedures for Hydrop~er Licenses, Exemptions and Preliginary Pergits. April 1982. 4: The difference in tegperatures of the Chulitna ~an~•a~~ee~n~a..;.,r.r-:-:v~er~s~s~o~u:-.-7 be referenced at least by raonth. It vauld appear that the cooler tegperatures displayed by these rivers would be useful in ar. assessaent of post·project tsperatures effects at the confluence and further dawn strearo:~. Ue recOiil:lend th is be exm i ned • J.iiUc! ... Freeze-u~: Parafaph 3: The iQpact of this process should be fully explainidn regar to river raorphology and maintenance of the present riparian zone. (iii) Suspended Sedigents: The percent contribution, by season, froa the llaJOr suspended sid1Dent sources should be indicated. An analysis of the anticipated changes, by season, due to the project operation should be made. (ix) pH: The pH range, from 6.6 to 8.1, is broad and should continue to be aonitored. The potential exists for a lethal pH shock to occur to aquatic life with a change of 1.0 pH. A dlange of this aagnitude lilight be poss fb le frog a reservoir water release. A pH bel~ 6.6 gay be haraful to fish depending on the ~unt of free carbon dioxide present in excess of 100 parts per gillion. Egg hatchability and growth of alevins could be adversely effected at a pH range between 6.5 and 6.0. The need for a predictive water quality model is apparent given the toxic heavy metals that occur in the drainage. We recommend that one be utilized. (d) Other Par ... ters (iii) Others: The railroad right-of-way that parallels the Susitna River has been spr~ with various herbicides for vegetation control for a period of years. Herbicides used include agitrole, Z-40, bromicil, and Garlon (tordon). Streaas of prfaary concern are Chase, Indfan, Lane, and Gold Creeks. A spfll of Garlon occurred in Lane Creek in 1977. Sloughs located along the railroad rfght-of...,.ay could also be recfpfents of sOiiJI of the herbicide spray. flo ffsh and/or wfldlffe tfssues have been analyzed for food chafn herbicide iapacts fn the area. Due to the type of herbfcfde used, we are certafn that detectable IQOunts will occur over a long period of ti~. Please incorporate thfs information fnto your discussion. 2.4 • Baseline Ground Uater Conditions z.s ... Existing Lakes, Reservoirs, and Streags ~-........;,;;,;~---.........,........,.......,........,. ....... .......,,.........,............,......-1: Project features include transaission ne gafntenance roads, railroad staging areas, etc. and should be exaained within the context of this section. The proposed Recreation Plan would lead to the encouragegent of f~acts to n...-ous lakes throu~out the upper Susftna basin. Secondary f&~pacts resulting froa the project would expand impacts to addftfonal systegs. Z.6 -Exfstfng Instream Fl~ Uses (b) Fishery Resources: Reference should be lillde to burbot and Dolly Varden as igportant resident speci~s. 2.7 -Access Plan (a) Flows: Paragra~ 2: The use of regression equations fn calculations of peik and 1~ fl~s n Ifeu of actual discharge data should not be a substitute for the collection Of data, When sfzfng culverts for engfneerfng fntegrfty or ffsh passage. washouts due to undersized culverts resulted on the north slope haul road and, .ore recently, at the Terror Lake HYdro construction sfte. 2.8 -Transgfssfon Corridor: Base Tfne fnforgatfon on the trans.fssfon corridor from tfie dllil s1tes to the Intertfe has been acknowledged as Tacking wfthfn the Exhfbft. As wfth other project features, the Exhfbft E should provide base lfne data, igpact assessgent, and aftfgatfve planning. We recogmend that this be done for thfs project feature. For further comments please refer to our letter dated 5 January 1982 on the Transgfssfon Corridor Report. Ue provided this Tetter as forgtl pra-lfcense consultation and continue to vfew ft as such. 3 -PROJECT It-PACT ON WATER QUALITY AliD QUAHTITY 3.2 -U&tana Davelo.-nt: Reference fs •de to Exhibit A. By Tetter dated 19 t40viiliir 1982 we requested a complete copy of all the Exhfbfts. Thfs fnforaatfon has not be received. (a) U&tana Construction ~f) Fl~s: Paraflaph 1: The sfgnfffcance of the Toss of the one lilfle reach ue to construe on would more appropriately be assessed in Chapter 3, under Fishery Resources. (ii) Effects on Water Quality -Sus~ended Sedfments/Turbfdfty/Vertical Illugfnatfon: Para15aph 2: Antic pated suspended sidimen~and turbidity levels should \i coapared, by month, to the .-bfent condition$. Thfs would allow an ev~Tuatfon and understanding of potential project impacts. The amount 01 spofl whfch would be generated and the extent to vhfch grading and washing of gaterfal would be needed fs not addressed. Thfs has obvious igplications in regard to water quality and spoil disposal. Ue do not at thfs tfme have sufficent data or maps wfth whfch to provide specific input. Ue would recogaend to the extent possible, barr~ gatarfal be obtained from wfthin the future impoundment area. It fs stated that, •downstraaa, turbfdfty and suspended sediment levels should reaafn essentially the saae as baseline condftfons.• This would not appear to be the case during the wfnter, when the ambient condftfons are crystal-clear. -Contamination by Petroleum Products: Spillage of petroleum products fnto the 1oca1 grayling streau would have sfgnfffcant impacts on thfs fishery. An oft spill contingency plan should be presented fn the •ftfgatfon plan whfch is fn ca~:~plfance wfth State and Federal regulations • ... Canaete Contallinatfon: The types of potential praoleas usocfated wfth tfi1s activity Should 6i fdentfffed and a pollution control contingency plan should be developed as a COIIpOMftt af the proposed 11ftfgatfon plans. Such a plan aast be fn COIIplfance wfth State and Federal regulations. The Yut.,.ter l'T"Htalnt section (page E·Z-37) fs a .,ch liiOre appropriate level of analysis. (iv) Igpact on Lakes and Streams fn I:yeundaent Area: Dfscussfons regarding borrow and spofl 111teriats are extra. y general. The potential sftes, quant fty of •terfal to be r..,ved, or deposited, extent af cleaning that wo ;d be necessary, ana biological descrfptfon of the sftes to be disturbed, should all be described. Hftfgatfve analysis should address such issues as tfafng constraints an various operations and measures required to reestablish pre-project conditions for those sftes whfch would not be ~ently lost. (v) Instre• Flaw Uses: Antfcfpated iapacts for flaws greater than the one fn 5o-year event Should b8 described. -Fisheries: Para¥tapt 2: The desirability of avofdiny thfs fishery toss by yatfng the divers on unnel should be discussed. (vf) Facflftfes: General fnput fs provided fn our comments an Chapters 5 and to. the decisions regarding the type, admfnfstratfon, and sftfng·of the construction caap/vfllage were lillde without fnput fr011 resource agencies. In addftfon, the tfmfng constraints placed upon the construction of thfs project are no longer supported by econc.fc studies •• (Chapter 10. General Caaaents). The Exhfbft should be revised to reflect updated forecasts. Reference fs made to Exhfbft F. Although we have requested thfs Exhfbft, it has not been provided. -Uater Supply: It should be noted whether or not the features described fn thfs section were coordinated wfth the Alaska Department of Environmental Conservation. (b) Iapoundgent of Yatana Reservoir (f) Reservoir Filling Crfterfa ... MinfiiUiil Downstream Tar et Flaws: Para ra 1: The factors that went fnta s s ery vs econom cs a eo ana ys s or determining the appropriate downstream flows should be discussed fn detafl. At the Susitna Hydra Exhfbft E ~orkshop (conducted on 29 Nove&Der thrauyh 2 December) it was indicated that the analysis consisted of determfniny at what su;ger flows economic beneffts drop off. Given that the econoaic analysis upon which this is based is generally considered out-of-date (Battelle Newsletter 14, Railbelt Electric Power Alternatives Study), confidence in this analysis from an ecanoaic perspective gust be law. From a fishery perspective, ft is unacceptable. Para~Taph Z: Once we have an acceptable instream flow regime, several gauging stat ons will be necessary to assure proper flows. It should be recognized that at least eight sloughs are located above Gold Creek and that several of these currently support fish. Flows to maintain or, if possible, enhance the productivity of these sloughs should be provided . Paragraph 4: The out-cafgrat fon of sal1110n in the spring is as 1 ikely re.lated to i)hoto-period and development as the other factors 1 isted. Very low flows in the spring could cause ~:~~ny of the juveniles to raaain trapped in backwater pools that are noraally flooded under pre-project conditions. Parafaaph 6: The proposed flows of 12,000 cfs have not been deaonstrated to Ql1n\11n the integrity of slough gorphology and provide the flushing flows needed to clean fines out of gravel . Also, the potential probl .. of beavers colonfziny many of the sloughs, not being naturally controlled by flooding, and therefore interfer.iny w·ith fish usa.ge of the sloughs should be addressed. Cogpeting interests of aquatic and terrestrial project CQiilpOnents such as sa h:10n !! beaver confHcts have been given· mini~al attention in the Exhitiit • . Para~aph 7: Adequate fnstream flows for the winter period should be estib 1Shed according to fish requiregents. This is a critical period for fish and eve n e~inor dewatering ray have siynif icant de.leterious effects. (fv) Effects on U&ter Quality • Water T~erature: The tir;aing and consequences of the filling regime. on downstrea&lecJperatures should be better defined. Just as modeling needs to define operational thereaT changes, the thermal processes should be QOdeled for the filling period. FrOG1 thh we ray be able to consider mitigative lillasures • .. Suspended Sediaents/Turbidity/Vertical Illugination • Watana Reservoir: Paragraph 3: Discussion should be provided on the impact of water quality Chanyes on the photosynthetic process downstrear;a of the reservoir. · Paragraph 4: It is stated that, • ••• the river will be clearer than under natural conditions.• This lillY be true durfny the suLitler, however, it is our understand i ng that this wi ll not be the case during the winter • • \olatana to Talkeetna: \ole believe the increase in winter turbidity r.Jight be gore 1Qportant 1n terms of potential f i shery igpacts . Qua ntification of potential changes should be provided. The methodology by which the suamer turbidity leve l s were established and why it 1s not Applicable to predicting winter conditions needs to be explAined • • Talkeetna to Cook Inlet: AnticipAted chAnges during the winter should be discussed. i!l_Effects on Groundwater Conditions -Iepacts on Slou9hs: Paragraph 1: The potential impacts on slough habitats are not clearly descr16id. The discussion provides the impression that ther~ is a greater understanding of the groundwater relationship between the slo~ghs and .. fnstea than is warTanted by studies to date. Please refer to our c~nts under Section Z.l(a)(i) -Slou9hs. Parasr:s 4: It is indicated that rt-uced ~ging would result from the decrea winter flows. The potential 1~act should be addressed in regard to the potential to diWater s.,_wnfng ud ruring hlbitats. Para~a~ 5: Although the teaperature relationship of the 111inst• and slou s oes not appear to be well understood, discussion should be included on this potential i~act, particularly during the second year of filling when the differences frCIII pTe-project conditions are grutest. (vii) Effects on Instream Flow Uses: Please refer to our comments on Section ~(a)(i) -SfOu~s, and 3.2{b){v) -I~act on Slou~s. The statements of no t8Dperature e~.C s are not supported ~ data or ci~tion. The reduction of flows through these sloughs is not quantitatively defined. The loss of scouriny flows to c'lean fines, r1110ve beaver dllils, and clear ice could result in siynificant loss or degradation of slough habitat for fish. (c) Wlt&na Operation .. f~iniliUII Downstrelli1 Tar~et Flows: The criteria are not provided which led to the development of the 1 arget1 flows. Apparently, no consideration ts provided concerniny raxflilll flows, which may be a rJOre i1111portant consideration during w-inter than estab 11shing a ~:~in f-.. flow leve 1. Sigulations: Para ra 1: The potential igpacts of the wa r year e lliJt rou s ou e fully addressed. The effect of this naturally occuring event should be described 1n regard to Watana operations, how downstrellil flows would be maintained and how it would effect the biological resources. For exllilple, we suspect that higher downstreUIS flows would be necessary to allow entran.ce to sloughs during this pertod • • Daily Operation: In that the Devil Canyon deve.l'o,.ent ay not COfile· on-line ro;:-rany years, if ever, consideration should be given to operations without the Devil Canyon du. A greater level of concern and discussion should be forthcoming on avoidance of potential ililpac:ts to the sloughs above Gold Creek. -F'loocis • Spring Floods: Para¥iaph Z: In that spring floods are part of the pre-project regime, dscussion should be provided as to the igportance of thi's pttenogenon and whether or not post-project simulated spring floods should be il'cluded in the post-project flow regime. (if) Rher l·lorphology: Parayraph 2: The discussion on ice process should be expanded. Parasraph 3: The discussion leads to a view that eventual loss of the slough hib1tats 1s inevitable. The flow regilile proposed does not counteract this potential problllil. Avoidance of this iapact through flow liiOdif'fcations is consistent with the APA Hftigatfon Po 11cy document and NEPA. It illustrates a low level of biological consideration in the formulation of the proposed instreu flow regiGII. (iii) Water Qualft.y -Water T!!perature • Reservoir and Outlet Water Tegperature: Para!]aph 2: 1982 data from Eklutna Lake, Wh 1Ch Watana Reservoir is expectid to 111111 c, was presented at the - Susftna Hydro Exhibit E Workshop. During the winter, Eklutna Lake showed t1111peratures ranging froa oo to 3.60C 1n the upper 2 .. ters, dropping to fsoth1r1111l conditions below this depth. If Watana Reservoir exhibits a sf•flar shallow winter stratification ft would appear that Watana could not be operated to, • ••• take advantage of the temperature stratification within the re sel'V i or. • ParaJlaphs 5 throuJ!!7: Given that the temperature 1010del has only been run forve months an his only one year of data for that period (1981) this discussion •st be, considered speculative. It is our understanding that input for this uodel is lacking because previous data was tailored to an earlier taperature liiOdel which is no longer considered applicable to thfs project. It would seesa· prllillture to place liiUch faith in the new li10de1 based on the mini1111l level of testing to date. We recomaend that data from two full years be inputted to the model and the results be provided fn the Exhibit E. Paragraph 8: This sugyests that winter outflow tegperatures between 10 and 40c can be selectively withdrawn through a multi-level intake structure. This would be dependent upon the thermal proffle of the reservoir during the winter, a. period which has so far not been .,deled. The statement suggesting that one deyree water temperatures can be selectively obtained ~s speculative. It is also in conflict with the information provided at the Susitna Hydro Exhfbit E Workshop where Eklutna Lake was presented as a lilodel for Watana Reservoir. Eklutna Lake showed winter temperatures between oo and 3.60C within the upper two li18ters of the surface. If Watana Reservoir shows a similar winter stratification one should not expect to be able to tap tSJperatures other than 40C with the proposed 1111lti-level intake structure. It would have been appropriate to reference the Eklutna study findinys here as is done on page E-2-61 • • Slough Water rr-eratures: Paragraph 1: Please refer to our coaants on Section-2.3(a)(1 -Slouijhs. -Ice: Paragra~ 1: It should be clarified as to what would be the impact of the reduced con rlbution froa the upper Susitna River. Estitwltions of post-project fee staginy should be c011pared to pre-project conditions and the methodology by whfch the predictions were made should be explained, and/or referenced. Para~a¥h 2: How ice fs lost to the systeD, post-project, would draDatically change ror.1 pre-project condUfons. The fgpact of this rajor change 1n ttlfs riverine systesa should be thoroughly explored, not ~:~ereJy noted. -Turbidity: Para~aph 1: Please provide 1n explanation as to why, •rurbfdfty fn the. top TOO fee of the reservoir fs of prflillry intere.st. • -Nitrogen Su~s.turation: Discussion should be provided specfffc to the fixed-cone vaSVis. It fs stated that the valves would discharge spills up to a one fn SO year event, but we have no fndfca.tfon of the anticipated ext.n.t of their use. Withdrawing water frOiil the hypol1111ion they would often be counterproductive to wt.~t is intended to be achieved through use of' the aulti-level intake. Th~ potential for theraal shock in fishes, or shock due to rapid shifts in other water quality paru.ters, should be evaluated . Rapid water level changes would also be an obvious result of their use, particularly be.tween the d11:1 face a.nd the powerhouse. 3 .3 De.v il Canyon Deve 1 Op!i!!!!t Jii) Water Qua11tl -Concrete Contaginatfon: Please refer to our comgents on Section 3.2(a)(1i) -Concrete Contl£11n~tion. (vi) Fac111t fes: Oe.cfsions regarding the Dev i1 Canyon support facflfties were caade without input fr011 resource agencies. appropriate e described, and incorporated into the (b) W&tana Operatfon/Dtvil Canyon Iapoundment (ifi) Effects on Water Quality -Water Temperature: The ability to contfnue to selectively reaove very narrow tegperatures bands would depend upon numerous unknowns; aSSUiiling the ab111ty e·xfsts with operation of Watana alone. Removal of such a sizeable quantity of water fn so short a period of tfge certainly would have fr.1plications for one's ability to select tegperature bands during certain t1ras of the year. It should be stated that the: teaperature CIOde 1 upon which this a 11 rests only has input frOlil five lilOnttls of one year. -Support Facilities: Please refer to our cort1Dents on Section 3.3 (a) (vi) - Construction, Operation and t-1afntenance. (vi) Instreag Flow Uses: It is our understanding that significant losses to the existing fisheries would result. ·the basis for the statP.r.aent that, •. additional fishery habitat will becOL• available ••• • with Devil Canyon Reservoir should be explained in detail. (c) Uatani/Devil Canyon Operation ( 1) Flows -Project Operation: It is indicated in the Feasibility Report Vol. 1, page lJ:li, that compensation flow pugps would be installed. An explanation as to the function of these devices, their purpose, the flows which they would prov fde, whether or not they are to be insta Tled in one dm or both, how ~ter froa this source wuld effect the wate-quality p&rllileters of the watw released frOiil the powerhouse, and the basis for the flows which would be provided ~roa this source should be provided. We would also 1 ike to Sft an explanation of the fixed-cone values regarding their expected periodicity of use (at least by gonth) and impacts on water quality pararaters and flow levels. (ii) Effects on Uater Quality -Uater T~eratures: Since Devil Canyon Reservoir has not yet 'been liJOdeled, the ratforile for this discussion should be presented. The therul fiJOdels for Uatana. and Devil Canyon should pro.vide infonaati·on on the following: (1) The tegperature profile, depth to isothergal conditions, and tiaing of mixing; (2) The timing of wint,er stratification; (3) The extent of turbulence that would be generated at the reservoir intake; and (4) The capability of the intake structure to select fr01i1 one te~~peratu" layer in a stratfffed reservoir. This should be included in the Exhibit E. -Ice: Please refer to our cOGI:Ients on Section 3.2(c)(i1i) -Ice. Inforgation should be provided on the extent of scour in the sloughs under winter and spring break-up conditions. Discussion should address where the ice front would deve.lop under •worst case• conditions for post-project Watana and Uatani/Dev11 Canyon operations. Fluctuating high power d1111nd in a record co 1 d year and a record wana year should be d 1 scussed. Scenarios which wou 1 d produce over-topping of rfver fee and ;ultfple break-ups which gay scour the river channel should be described. -N.itro~en Supersaturation: Please refet" to our ccaants under Section 3.3(c)( ) -ProJect Operation. -Facil ft1es: Erosion control a.asures should be described and incorporated into the aiti~ation pta~. 1 fcense (a) Flows: Accurate dfsdhar~e 1nforaat1on on the creeks fs needed to insure proper culvert sizing for fish passage. Ut111zat1on of culverts rather than bridyes could result fn r.JOre blockages to grayling li11gration due to beaver activity. 3.5 TranSiilfssion Corridor Inacts: Please refer to our letter dated 5 January 1982 reyard1ng the Tran~iss on Corridor Report. 5 • tUTIG.ATIOff, EfttAICEMErrr, AlfD PRO'TECTtVE JIEASURES 5.1 Introduction: Paraltaph 2: It fs stated that, • ••• •ftigatfve iiiasures, 1 were 1ncorporaed, 1 ••• fn the preconstruct ion planning, design, and schedu11ny,• yet we see construction Cllilps/vfllages which were ~tanned wfth no outside coordination with resource agencies, or even consfd•ation of .alternatives. The transaission corridor fr011 the 'latana diiiJ wu also planned with essentially no resour~e agencies input. Ue see scheduling, (based on an out-of-date econoaic analysis), deter~~fning access routing, tf•fng of construction activities, and reservoir filling with no input fr011 reso-.rce agenet•s. This hu precluded an objective ex•ination of a'lternat1ve mitigation geasures. IHn ili'IJr.l flows are proposed with the impress ion that they were arrived at through an as yet undisclosed fisheries vs. econ01:1ic tradeoff. In the draft Exhibit E we have an evaluation of econ011fcally determined flow release,s, the basts for which are no longer accepted by the econOGJists that deve.loped theca (Battelle Newsletter #4 (Final), Railbelt Electric Pow&r Alternatives Study, December 1982), coctpet1ng against flow releases. The 12,000 cfs flow release is apparently the rax1IUI d1scharge for August without significant economic effects. Ue suspect that the flexibility for providing 1nstreaa flows, once thfs issue has been resolved, is highly dependent upon the hydraulic turbines which are se 1 ectad for the project. We recCXi&llnd that a tradeoff ana lys fs be presented to display the relationship of different hydraulic turbine configurations wfth both a one daa and two dam configuration related to aaxi•fzfng flow release options !! more fle,xiblt! turbine systeg alternatives. If tJte proposed turbines, in either du, would adversely effect future instreaa flow options then the, decision as to the preferred turbine configuration shou.ld .be deferred until a specific, detailed flow re.leue schedule, developed throu~ a quantified .nstreaa flow analysts, is ayreed upon whfeh would •1tfgate igpacts or enhance conditions for spawning, feeding, passage, out-li1fyrat1on, and overwintering fn the Susftna River. The proposed 1i1Ult1-1evel intake structure would provide the flex fbi Hty to se 1 ect a des 1rab 1 e tegperature reg 1• on 1 y if the tllilperatUl"'e bands exists in the reservoir .of suff1ctent s1ze and of sufficient depth. It has not been established that the wltf-level intake would provide sufficient tea~perature control. At present, Watana Reservoir has been thermally modeled for five 1:10nths of one year. It fs our understanding that this fs insufficient to even test the liiOdel for the five gonths for which ft was run. Devil Canyon Reservoir has not been modeled, yet the recent incorporation of a 1i1Ultf-level intake here leads one to believe the a'pplfcant expects this reservoir ~;ight stratify. Ue recoggend that li10deling be carried out for both reservoirs, throurout the year, and the resultant data be incorporated into .1 river tegperature wodel. This sbould be based upon two years of data (e.g. 1981 and 1982) and pr~sented in the license application. ReJerence is ade to the incorporat1or of fixed-cone values to prevent. nitrogen1 supersaturation. The frequency, perfodic ·fty, and anticipated voluae of use is not addressed. Since they would be drawing upon water very low in the dag and then d~ing an unknown voluge of this water Into an essentially ury riverbed we would expect potential ad~erse igpacts to the gftfgation flow and tegperature regir;aes. The potential effects upon icing conditions and, depending upon the tf• of year, salreaon ~mvements needs to be assessed. We recog;end that these potential impacts be discussed in the Exhibit E. Paragr~ 3: The 11!'portance of aon1tor1ng construct,fon practices, operation and ga n enance and gonitoring of gftigatfon 1s recognized 1n the APA Mitigation Policy docuaent. How this will occur needs to be exaafned 1n the Exhibit E. "e recocaend that a panel of appropriate State, Fed.-al, and local agency personnel be established, at project expense to roaonftor project construction, operation and af ntenance. The .,~ :tori ng p&nel , randate, and operat i onal mechanisms should be discussed in the license application. 5.2 -Construction: Please refer to our comaents above, Section 5.1 : Paragraphs z and 3. Paragraph 2: Please refer to our discussion of instreu flows undeT Sections 5.1 : Para~ph 2, 3.2(b)(i)-f·tiniiiiWil DownstTeu Target Flows, and 3.2{c) -Minfgugnstream Taryet Flows. Additional pertinent coagents can be found throuijhout. The statements contained fn Section 5.3 can only be considered speculative, to date there are no studies to support thera. Only one slough, identified as #9, has received detailed study. In the Noveri1ber 1982 draft report 9rovided at the Susitna Hydro Exhibit E Workshop, Preliminary Assessgent of Access b S awnfn Sallilln to Side Slou · Habitat atiove a ee na, e au or no a un e e a a are ana yzed, any statllillnts regarding stremf'lows necessary for ch• salliiOn access to the side slou9hs are provisional. It should also be recognized that the examination of slough access flows 1s not only without support, but one dimensiona l . Uo analysis is put forth to examine other life phases of fish, or project related changes in water qua lfty parUileters. Paragr~h 5: 'Changes in downstream river· GIOrphology have no·t been fully assess • It is presature to conclude that no mitigation would be necessary. The lack of fee scour and flood flows .. Y cause sloughs to s11t in and ~Y reduce natural cleaning processes necessary to u1ntain productive spawning substrate and rearing areas. Paraytaph 6: It would seeo appropriate to exa;ine, in the Exhibit E, gethods of r&J 1gating the potential therral effects anticipated during the filliny period, to include extending the filling period. 5.4 -rt1tigation of Uatana Operation Iepacts (a ) Flows: Para~~h 2: Please ref er to our coggents under Section 5.1: Paragraph Z and .ion 5.3: Paragraph 2. Paragr:Sh 3: It is stated that, •watana, when it is operating al :,e, ~i ll be operat prfgarily as a base load plant.• Pl ease discuss the extent to which it is intended to be operated as a peaking facility. Of particular concern would be how it gight operate under worst case conditions, such as fluctuating hiyh power degand during a record cold year. The imp l ications of scenario s lfke this should be explored in the Exhibit E if \latana is being proposed for periodic peaking use. (b) T!;!erature and D.O.: Pl ease refer to our ca.aents addressing the cautti:eve.T 1ntike i&ucture and reservoir teaperature IIOdelfng fn Sections 5.1: Parayraph 2, and 3.3(:•i(ff1)-Water T§h:erature. We have provided additiona C:Oiiants on thel:te subjects throu out. - (c) Nitrogen SUpersaturation: Please· refer to our d1scussion of the Trxed=ctlne valves una .. sections 3.2(c)(iii) -rutrogen Supersaturation and 5.1: Paragraph 2. 5.6 ~11tfgatfon of Devil Canyon/Uatana Operation {b) Tegperature: Discussio. should be provided as to why ;ultf-level intake ports are proposed a.t Devil Canycn. It would appear that ft has been concluded, without benefit of a thermal reservoir ~del, that Devil Canyon would. strat tfy. Chapter 3. FISH, UILDUF£, AUD BOTAIUCAL RESOURCES General Comaents Fishery Resources of the Susitna River Drainage Periodically in the Fishery Secti'on are dfsclairars such as, •Much of the discussion is based on professional judgeaent,• (Section 1.2, page £ .. 3-3), or ·~~n~ of the statements are speculative ••• and ••• unsupported,• (Section 2.3, page E-3-~6). Other statements let U$ know that ongoing, or planned studtes, wt l l fill these nuaerous data gaps to al l ow a quantification of the resources and igpacts (Sections 2.2(b)(11), 2.4(b)(ti), z.s, 2.5(c}(if), etc.} and let us go beyond, "the conceptual •1t1gation plan,• (Section 2.5, page E-3-116) which is provided tn this chapter. Recognizing a probls does not, in 111d of itself, correct ft .• We are concerned that the Fishery Section generally fa 11i s to quantify the existing resources, fails to quantify the potential igpa<:ts, and fails to provide specific lilitigation aaeuures to dea.l with identified, quantified, adverse igpacts. Once we have potential gitigation CIHsures .. these pr oposals would need to be evaluated, for exagple, in regard to potential fgpacts on: project costs, design, and feasibility; socioeconcGfc considerations; and fish and wildlife resources other than those for Which the gitigation is targeted. This type of evaluation would fona the basis of an acceptable environGJental impact statement and should be provided as part of the license application. The ongoing and planned studies which are frequently cited (Sections 2.2(b)(ii), 2 .4, 2.4(b)(ii), 2.5, 2.5(c)(ii), etc.) showld be fully ident·ifted so we can exmine them in regard to their scope. We cannot, otherwise, deteraine what needs to be done and what is being done (with assurances that it will be done). Potential igpacts are frequently Identified in the Fishery Section, such as loss of the apparently ililpOrtant high spring flows for out-migrations (Sec-tton Z.3(a)(i1)), and 40C flows during the second sUiiiDer of Watana Reservoir ·filling (Section Z.J(a)(fi)). Potential r.~itigat1on to contend with these anticipated adverse i'gpacts ar e suggested, such as sp~king ·spring flows (Section Z.4(b)(ii)) and installing a fifth portal on the multi-level intake structure (Section 2.4(b)(ii) [SIC, iii]). If these r.aftigation proposals nave validity, then they should be incorporated into the design and operations proposal. ~1itigation lileasures which are proposed should have proven succ.ess in Alaska :, or in a s igflar env1rongent. If the proposals are not proven, then they WO\Ild need to be degonstrated effective in the project area. For example, hatchery propagation of grayling may need to be d~nstrated as an effective alternative since grayling hatcheries have not been particalarly successful in Alaska. Likewise, the proposed slouyh li:IOdifications are unproven and thus should also be deliiOnstrated in the Susitna systs before project operation. Ue support the establishlilent of a G'Dnitoring progrm funded by the project, contai~in~ a board of representati~·s fro• appropriate State, Federal, and local agencies. The board should ~.:ave the authority to recoalilend project ri10dification raeasures to assure th •. t Qftigation is effective. The p~·ocedure by which this would occur should be incorporated into the license as an article. This type of gonitoriny prograg should be discussed in the r.1 it i gat ion p 1 an • Botanical Resources At the recent Susitna, Hydro Exhibit E Workshop, 29 r~oveaber to 2 DecSiber, we were pleased to learn of the recent efforts to coordinate botanical and wildlife data needs •. Vegetation types within the project area are apparently now being subcategorized and r1111pped on th.e bas·is of gore recent, larger-scale photography and additional field work. Analyzing the value of vegetation as part of wildlife habitat, an infonatian need we have consistently cited (e.g. rws letter to Eric Yould, APA, 5 October 1982), w~ll better allow quantification of project igpacts and the develo~nt of r:~itigative r01easures. However, these efforts render the current Botanical Resources Section at least partially obsolete. Because there is no explanation of ongoing studies, the readeT fs left with the perception thal vegetat.fon studies have been coe~pleted. \la reca.end that descriptions of the following be provided in the Exhibit E: (1) current regappfng efforts for both overall vegetation and wetlands; (2) plans for sucger 1983 ground truthing of this data; (3) 1984 field work which gay be necessar:~ for verifying wetlandsi (4) proposed productivity studies relative to project moose studies (see Section 4.Z(a)(i), page E-3-204, paragraph ~and Section 4.3(a)(i), page E-3-281, paragraph 3); and (5} schedules for cogpleting these investigatio·ns and analyses in conjunction with overall !:litigation and project planning. Such fnfon:atfon is provided, to some extent, relative to the Aquatic Studies Program, Section 2.5. In general, the description of vegetation types and potential project impacts is tnorough. Still, a rajor probleg with th1 5 ~ection i~nvolves 1ncoe~plete coverage of wetlands. Minor problegs involve the need for soae additional raps and tables, and conflicting citations of f igures and tables (e.g. referring to Figure Wl And Ta.ble W3 as. Figure E.3.Wl and Table E.3.WJ in the text). Wildlife We found the \lildlife Section both too general and incDq)lete. Jud~ntal stater.~ents are rarely referenced (e.g. page £·3-376, last paragraph) qualitative ten.1s are seldOGI defined (e.g. page 'E-3-315, last paragraph; page E-3-310). Perhaps QOst critical fs the ;;a1niral detail and coverage of the mitigation plan. Lack of quant1ficat ion is a serious prob Teaa throughout this section. \lh i le baseline populations are occasionally estimated, impacts are typically qualif1~~ only as ~:~ajar or r:~inor, and no values are provided for those r:aitigation geasures which are. recocanded. Ue are highly concerned with the lack of attention to habitat values, although we have repeatedly cited the need for project evaluations to consider habitat values as well as populations (please refer toFUS lette~s to Erfc Yould, 5 October 1982., 5 January 1982. 23 June 1980, and 15 r~o·veaber 1979; and test it10ny of LeRoy Sowt, FWS, before the ~A Board, 16 April 1982.). We a~preciate the initial efforts to evaluate habitats for furbearers and birds, and the reported plans to godel carrying capacity for goose. Yet we see no evidence of how such evaluations wi t1 be continued, expanded to other species, and r.aost ir.Jportantly, used in developing tili1lly, coraprehensive lilitigation r.M!asures, which are an integral part of projec.t plans. Where population inforgation is pr~v1ded, it is for the curTent situation. No accounting is given for long-term habitat potentials, for example, (1) habitats ray be able to support greater populations over the long-ters (e.g. pine carten near watana Creek); (2) habitat values ray decline a·s, through suc~ession, vegetation proceeds to gore aature stages which are less productive for GIOose; or (3) harvest manag-nt goals ray be liiOdified and caribou popuh.tions allowed to increase to wttere available habitats are 110re cogpletely stocked. We recoaaend providing information on continuing studies (including habitat GIOdeling) and how data gaps identified here, in previous agency cocments, and the August 1982 Adaptive Environfillntal AssesSG1ent (A£AJ Workshop will be answered. Our Specific Cor&1ents below, further address this need. Another r.ajor probTs is that the Wildlife Section is not integrated, nor is ft consistent relative to impact potentials and .mitigation options with other sections in Chapter 3 or with other chapters in the Exhibit E. For exagple, in Chapter 3 the impacts discussions are based on no access along the transaission corridor; in Chapter 5, such access is assuced (Section 3.7(c)(i), page E-5-84). rtot only do we l'"ecoa:~end tha.t this probler:a be corrected, but that evidence be provided as to this section has been integrated into project designs and scheduling. That integration is gost critical with regard to the mitigation plan. Information should be provided on the mechanism for notifying project engineers of key wildlife areas and at the sage time for the engineers to notify the environgental consultants and resource agencies of design changes or gitigation geasures they believe are unfeasible. Additional fnforgatfo~ should be provided on the process ta be followed for finalizing and then irnplegentin9 mitigation requiregents. Integration of the various report sections would be aided through an overview discussion of overall project objectives for wildTife, fisheries, vegetation, recreation, land use, and socioeconomics. Presently we find apparent objectives of the Wfldlffe Section often contrary to recreation or socioeconomics; within the ~ildlife Section, objectives for one species ~Y conflict wi th tho~e for another species. Because of the volurninous nature and cocaplex1ty of CJater1al involved, it is difficult to assess population status, habitat values, impacts, and mitigation for each s,pecies relathe to all other species. This 1s particularly important where gftigation for one species may be at the expense of another, as above. Thus we suggest sage type of sugmary chart which would show, by species: (1) populations; (2) habitat types and values; (3) status (f.e. 1ncreas1ny/decreasfng, upper/lower basin, etc.); (4) values (comaercial, recreational, and/or subsistence with ~netary figures where possible); (5) past and present harvest effort, success, and lillnag~nt restrictions; (6) iFSacts; and {7) mitivation alternatives. Please refer to our suggestions • under Section 3.4 for evaluating ~itigation alternatives as prioritized under !~EPA guidelines. The schedule for fH ling resultant tJata gaps could then be o~tlined; additional Qitigation needs or tradeoffs i~ benefits/impacts would also be obvious. We rec~nd quantifying the level of Qitigation to be achieved by different measures. This is particularly important where ~nagement policies are unclear (e.g. hou:ing and transportation of workers, harvest regulations, and prohibitions on use of the access road pre-and post-construction will determine the ~gnitude of project impacts). Finally, we are concerned that although the fragmentation of project impacts by project feature allows for a more comprehensible analysis, the report lacks a broad overview. Cualative i~:~pacts are generally ignored. We recoaand that such iupacts be cogpiled in conjunction with a list of unavoidable adverse i~:~pacts. Lack of key data has made it essentially impossible to QOre than outline the types of Qtasures which shoijld be included in the mitigation plan. In many cases, no evidence is provided for the proven success of recommended geasures in Alaska or similar environments. For such unproven measures, demonstration projects should now be established or back-up gitigation measures outlined for i~pleaentation if unproven measures fail (e.g. blasting to enlarge the Jay Creek mineral lick, provision of artificial raptor nests). The wonitoring progr~ we recoggended under the Fishery Section should also be extended to wildlife resources in the project area. Specific Co.ments 1 • IrfTRODUCTIQfj 1.2-I 1: Please refer to our Fishery Section-Gener~a~~~~~~~~~~rii~Tc~ation and the status of the project studies. Paragraph 4: Several of these references do not appear in the bibliography. 1.3-Mitigation Plans: Para¥ta~h 8: Avoidance of adverse impacts rarely appears to occur, particular y n regard to project features. For example, missed opportunities to avoid adverse fish and wildlife resources impacts exist in: project scheduling; mode and routing of construction access; recreation planningi siting, administration, and type of construction cagp/village; and instream flow regime. The wonitoring program, which has been supported in several chapters, should be fleshed out. The program should provide for participation by appropriate representatives of State, Federal, and local agencies, be supported by the project, and be able to recogmend changes in the gitigation proyrag to be adopted through a gechanism established in the license, gutually ~cceptable to all concerned bodies. Z • FISHERY RESOURCES OF THE SUSITNA RIVER DRAituu;E 2.1 • Overview of the Resources (d) Selection of Project Evaluation Species: Para!fa¥" 4: Igprovfng habitat cond-ftions f\)r an evaluation ~~c!Cfes woutd be help u to other species wfth sfgflar habitat requfsftes. However, we would expect other species, wfth habitat requfreaents that conflict wfth evaluation species, to be adversely affected. In lddftfon, we recaa:~end Dolly Varden and burbot be fnclucled as evalutfon species for the Susftna Rfver downstream of Devil Canyon. Para~~ 6: It fs stated that, •tgproved condftfons fn the rafnst• are expeC to provide replacement habftat .•• Juvenfle overwintering habitats are not expected to be adversely affected.• We are unaware of specfffc data to support thase stataaents. Para~aph 8: Evaluation species and lffe stages should be lfsted for the Cook Inle to Talkeetna reach. (e) Contrfbutfon to Comaercfal, Sport, and Subsistence Fishery (f) ~omGercfal: Species specf~fc cogparfsons are ~de of cr~rcfal harvest to escap~Gent. Perhaps a better gauge would be to provide estimated contrfbutfon to the coararcfal harvest, as fs assessed fn Chapter 5 (page E·5-70), or estf~a~ted contr;but;on to the run. This, howe'ter, also would timplify the systems contribution, but would at least provide reviewer~ wfth a better understanding of production. (ff~ Sport .. Ffshfng: ParagraC 2: If 110re recent surveys are available, thfs section should incorporate em. (fff) Subsistence Harvest: The following three A~&G reports would allow for a-gore ~xpansfve dfscuss1on of t~fs faportant topfc: 1. Foster, Dan. Noveaber 1982. The Utflfzatfon of Kfng Salaon and the Annual Round of Resource Uses fn Tyonek, Alaska. ADFIG. 55 pp. + appendices. 2. Stanek, Ronald, J1111s Fall and Dan Foster. March 1982. Subsistence Shellfish Use fn Three Cook Inlet Villages, 1981: A Prelf•fnary Report • AIF&G. 17 pp. + append f ces. 3. ~ebster, Kefth. Aprfl 1982. A Sumaary Repor~ on the Tyonek Subsistence Salaon Fishery, 1981. Upper Cook Inlet Data Report tlulilber 81-3. ADFIG. 16 pp. + appendices. 2.2 -Species SfJlogy and Habitat Utflfzaton fn the iusftna Rfver Drainage (a) Species Biology J)l!) Resident Species -Arctic Grayling: Parayraph 8: The stateaent that, •Assugfng other conditions ror spawning are favorable, ••• • should be expanded to allow an understanding of what these other conditions are and why we should assuae they would be favorable. (b) Habitat Utilization ( 11) Ta Jkeetna to Dev f1 Canyon • r.tainstaJ and Side Channels: References are ~ade to low flow and raxf .. now.-,. flows Should Iii quantified so that an understanding of potential .. project igpacts and Llftfgative flows can be related to how it, would influence h&bftat. ~ec ·fes Occurrence and Relative Abund.ance: The baseline infol"'l&t1on and analysis should incorporate the 1982 field season data. -Slou~ Habit~t: Paragraphs 2 and 3: The effects of various flow levels Slioiild e riferenc:id by the nliibir of sloughs which would be iapacted by the particular problea and the relative importance of the effected sloughs 1n teras of salmon habitat. P!ra~aSh 4: The basis for the intragrave·l tefi1Perature statements should be prov e , Whether conjecture or based upon a study of X number of sloughs. ~Sjgnificance of Habitat (liiOuths?) '!.S (a)_ Anticipated Ilill!acts to Aquatic Habitat Associated with Yatana 0111 .!.!) Construction of Watana OM and Relateci Fac1iftfes -Watana Ollil .Chanwes in Water iuality: Although turbidity levels •Y be decreased, on the average, througtiou the year, a r.JOre appropriate impact ev·aluatfon would be to examine turbidity levels by season or month !! aquatic life stage. Para~a~ 11: ExUiples of • ••. ;ood engineering practices, and a, thorough SPCC pfan:ould be provided in .;~e •1tfgation plan. The abbreviation of the plan ~hould be spelled out. 1: Haterfal sources should gene~-.~y~~e~co~n~n~e~.~un~e~s'="s-un~_~av~o~~~e~,-ro that area whfch would be 1nun~ated by the fgpoundlent, or upland sites. In that the Devil Canyon dlQ fs not~ cert&1nty, rehabflftatfon of Cheechako Creek should be planned. Joyce, Rundquist, and lloulton (1980) is referenced several tfr.Jes. ~e reque.st that this reference be provided, and the pertinent discussions from this paper be incor~orated into this section. ~ Uatana Car.ps, Vi flage and Airstrips •• Indirect Construction Activities: We expect secondar'y i~acts, avoidable and· unavofdible, to be li1UCh greater than that indicated by this discussion. We provided coaants on this topic in respcmse to ippropriate Chapter 5 sections, where this topic is also inadequately discussed. i!i) Filling ~atana Reservoir -Watana Reservoir Inundation .t~insteg Habitats: Paragraph 4: Although overwintering habitat would be lncreased, a •• overall igpaet would probably be a net loss of habitat value. The disc.ussion does not identify what species might benefit frol'il this increase in overwintering habitat. Ptr~graph 5: The bas 1s for the statement, •Reservoir temperatures in the top Too ft are expected to be in the range of 10 to zoe.· should be provided. First, the reservoir temperature model has not been run for the period r~ovember throu9h 1-~y. Second, the statement fs in apparent conflict with the informtion provided at the Susitna Hydro Exnibft E Workshop in which Eklutna Lake was presented as a godel for ~atana Reservoir. Eklutna Lake shows winter tenperatur!s between oo and 3.60C within the upper two meters. -Talkeetna to ~atana Dam .~11insteGJ Habitats: Paragraph 1: In that the river would no longer be clear, tne effect of this Change fn turbidity upon QOVement of juvenile salmon and resident fish should be addressed. Par~graph 4_: n.e arparent importance of the reced fng 11mb of h fgh spr fng f1ows to stfli1Ulate Out-cafgratfon iS noted yet we SM no effort to SiCIUlate th 1s fn the recoa:aended in stream flow regime. Paragrafh 9: It is recognized that the outflow tegperatures during the second open-wa er season could have substantial adverse ir.1pacts. This problllil fn relationship to how ft was handled at other hydropower projects should be discussed • • Side-Channel Habitats : Paragra'h 3: Until an adequate instreag flow study is conducted, these stat~nts w1l regain speculative. Par!graph ~: It shuuld be stated whether or not rearing habitat is considered Tlro~lted. Paragraph 5: The decreased teaperatures expected would probably counteract any Dinefits derived through decreased suspended sediments • • Slough Habitats: The poten,t1a1 impacts during filling should be discussed. Flows and teraperatures would be cha,nged from ambient. Until the ground water relationship, in regard to flows and temperatures, fs adequately established the potential for impacts should not be dismissed. Whether or not the colder second year releases would have a delayed teaperature effect upon the sloughs should be examined. ParayraJ!!!..1: It should be explained that the basis for these stateaents 1s preliminary results from an examination of one slough (19). Para_gr-t~s 4 and 5: The slough which had a backwater fona abov·e 14,000cfs should bi identified. It is not explained whether this is tYPical of all slou~s. sOQI sloughs, or. even just that one unidentified slough. It is apparent from this section that lZ,OOOcfs would hagper or restrict passage of adults 1nto an undisclosed proportions of the sloughs cand wo"ld not create a backwater effect for an unknown proportion of the sloughs. T~e biological basis by which 12,000cfs was chosen as the preferred flow for August should be explained in li9ht of the discussion of this section. 4: It is noted that some creeks naay become ..;.pe.:..;r~..;.e~u ... n-rer~:.r.-e~p-r...;op~o~s.;;;e...-..;"""'"ng schedu 1 e. The des irab ili ty and feas i b f1 tty of altering the filling schedule to avoid this impact should be discussed. -Cook Inlet to Talkeetna Reach: It has not been clearly established that the project ~auld not adversely impact fisheries below Talkeetna during reservoir filling and project operation • • 1·1ainstem Habitats: It is our understanding that millions of eulachon spawn 1n the lower river. If this spawning run is stimulated hv certain ter.Jperatures or peaking spring f'lows the project could :.ignfficantly impact this species. Secondary impacts would occur to those species, such as bald eagle and belukha whale, which feed on them. This potential problem should ba discu,;sed • •• Tributary Habitats: Paragraphs 2 and 3: A 10 percent reduction in flow$ could uean a zero reduction in hib1tats of concern or TOO percent reduction or somethiny in between. We recoa:aend that these flow reduction percentages be related to their effect on habitats of iQpcrtance to life stages of those species of concern. (1ii) Operation of Wata11a Dam -Talkeetna to Watana Dam .~~1nstem Habitats: Discussion should be provided specific to the fixed-cone values. There 1s no indication of the anticipated extent of the,ir use. In that they would be withdrawing water from the h(pOlimnion they would often be counterproductive to what fs intended to be achieved through use of the gulti-level intake. The potential for thermal shock, or shock due to rapid changes in other water quality paraaeters, should be evaluated. Rapid water level changes would also be a potential problem that should be explained. Para~raph 8: Di'scussion appears to be in co.nflict with Paragraph 16 of this secbon concern.ing suspended sediment transport. Para~a~h 9: Sediment load and turbidity 1re not synonygous. Turbidity shou ncrea.se substantfa.lly over Ulbient winter levels. Para,ra~ 16: The observation that fish apparently overwinter in the turbid Kena R ver allows. one to conclude that, over a long period of ti•, these (unidentified) species can adapt to turbid conditions. The conclusion that the Susitna stocks can, in one year, adapt to Kenai River like conditions is a bfg step. Please 110re fully discuss this potential problem. -Cook Inlet to Talkeetna Reach: Please refer to our comaents under Section 2.J.(a){ 11) -CoOk Inlet to Ta Tkeetna Reach. (b) Anticipated Impacts to Aquatic Habitat Associated wfth Devil Canyon 1.1) Construction of Devil Canyon Dam and Related Facfl it ies -Devil Canyon Da. .Disturbance of Fish Populations: Please refer to our c~nts on Section 2.3\a)( f) -Watana bu . Direct Construction Activities. --Devil Canyon Camp and Village and Villa e: Para ra h 1: Reference is made to E , c we reques • as no een provi ded. Ue have not had input into the decisions regarding the type, ad•inistration, or siting of the construction cmp/vfllaue. Avoidance of impacts to fish and wildlife resources should have been a .. jar consideration fn these decisions. In that we dfd not participate in these decisions and no alternatives to those which are considered •preferred.• are examined fn Chapter 10 we can only conclude that little, or no, consideration was given to this gftigation procedure. (iii) Operation of Devil Canyon Dam -Talkeetna to Devil Canyon Daca .Hainstem Habitats: Paragraph 1: We assume that the SOOcfs flows in this reach uou1d be provided by cogpensation flow pumps, discussion of which does not anation should be ided as to the function of these devices, their purpose, and how water fro. th;s source would effect water quality parameters of the water released froa the powerhouse and the fixed-cone values, and the basis for the flows which would be provided from this source. Please provide the rationale for the stateaent that a reduction in flows of the magnitude which would occur would not be expected to adversely affect fish populations in this portion of the river • • Stough Habitats: An explanation should be provided for the stata.ent that changes fn streimflow during the open-~ater season are not expected to affect s tough habitats. We consider the potential for s 1gn1f1cant adverse. effects to this habitat type to be high. • Cook Inlet to Talkeetna: S..ll changes in flows can have dr..atfc i~acts on habitat. The relationship between flows and impacts on habitat must be established before one can dis.iss s.atl changes in flows. We expect the AEIDC instreaa flow study will suffic i ently define this relationship . · (c) Iepacts Associated with Access Roads and Auxiliary Roads Jj)_Construction • Construction of Watana Access Road and Auxiliary Roads: Once an acceptable access routing is agreed upon, studies would need to evaluate the existing resources. Only at that point can specific mitigative ~aasures be satisf~ctorily addressed, based upon quantified fgpacts. We recOCJDend that you prucede in th h manner • • Alteration ~f Water Bodies: The potential problem of b~~vers daag1ng culverts and thus interfering with fish passage needs to be addressed. -Construction of Devil Can~on Access Road and Auxiliary Roads: Paragraph 1: We asswa that APA has dec1 ed on a preferred access plan-toDev·fl canyon- consistiny of road or rail access, or both. Whatever ft is should be stated. Paragra~h 3: Althouyh we have previously expressed our preference for raft access n lieu of road access, proper siting of raft fs highly important to minimizing impacts, primarily through avoidance. Coordination specific to this 1 ssue shou 1 d occur· when s 1 t 1 ng dec fs 1 ons are being raade. (11) Operation and Maintenance of Roads -Operation of Watana Access Road and Auxiliary Roads In that • the increased (d ) Transgfssfon Line Impact! if) Construction of Transr.11ssion Line -Uatana Dam: Para~aph 1: Base line information on the transmission corridor TrOQ the daa .sites o the Intertie ha.s been adc.nowledged as la.ddng within the Exhibit. As 'fith othar project features, the Exhibit E should provide base line data, igpact assessgent, and attigation planning. Avoidance of adverse iapacts would occur by a COIIIbined construction access/trans•iss ion lint access corridor north of the Susitna River between the· two daa sites. This fs our pr-eference. For further co••nts pl ease refer to our letter dated! 5 JanuaTy 1982 on the Tr&nSIIisston Corridor Report. Tb 1s letter was ,provided as fona 1 pre-ttcense1 consultation and we continue to view it as such. (fi) Op!ratton of the TranSII1ss1on Line -Wltana D• .Alteration of waterbod1ts: Please refor to our coaaents under Section 2.31d)(f} -Witana o ... • Dt~turbance tD Fish Po~lations: Please refer to our coa;ents under Chapter ~.Section 3.7(c){f} ~ _uatfc Species • Igpac!S_9f the Project 2.4 -Mitigation Issues and Proposed r1itigatiny Measures Please 1i) Streaa Crossings and Encroachments -Mitigation: Please refer to our coggents under Section 2.3(c)(i) - Constructlan of Watana Access Road and Auxiliary Roads • Alteration of Water BOdies. it 1) Increased Fishing 'Pressure. -I~act Issue: If the construction access and transmission line between the two u sites were in !:Jte saae corrid.or the fiiiiPact could be partially reduced or avoided. Please refer to our letter dated 5 January 1982 on the TranSIIisson Corridor Report for additional coagents. 1iv) Material Removal -t1itigation: Please refer to our COGiillnts under Section 2.3(a)(i) . Direct Construction Activities: Paragraph 1. Parairaph 3: Mfning should be scheduled to avoid conflicts with fish r.afgratfons, spawning, or other i11port1nt occurrences. Para~raph 6: Please refer to our cagwents under Fishery Section -General e~maents ~eyardfng monitr~ing. (vifi) Susitna River Diversions -rHt.fiation: G.rating of the diver ·s~on tunnel would prevent losses to fish and shouldDe considered as a r.11tigative measure. J.!) C 1 earing the Impoundlaent Area -t1it1gation: If it would cainimize these iiiJ)acts, then clearing should occur during the winter. (~)_Mjtigation of Filling and Operation Impacts ( i )_A~oach to ~11tigation: Although, •Avoiding ililpacts through design 1iatures or schidu11ng activities to avoid loss of resources,• is lhted as top priority, in reality it has not received this type of emphasis. (if) fHt.igat ion of Oownstreua Impacts Associated with Flow Regi1111: Under General Cogments for Chapter 2 we have ~rovided i synopsis of the AEIOC 1nstreiGI flow proposal which has been contracted by NJA. We believe that this proposal would provide the basis for a reasonable, quantified instream flow impacts analysis which would allow an assess.nt of mitigative alternatives. Since NJA has contracted this study, we assume that APA agree:s with our view. The AEIOC proposal should be fully described in either Chapter 2 or 3. It seems prllil&ture to discuss mitigative flows prior to quantification of potential igpacts. -Impact Issue: Paragraph 1: Re.ference is 1111de to Exhibit A. A 1though we nave requested this, as well as other Exhibits, it has not been forthcoming. -Measures to Minimize I~acts: Please refer to our coa:~ents under Sections 2:3(a)(f1) -Talkeeta to atana Dam. Slough Habitats: Paragraphs 4 and 5 and 2.3 (a)(11) -Talkeetna to Watana o ... Ma-rnstim Habitat: Para~h 4. It is apparent. that the flow release sChidu1e neither rain fmizes loss OfCfownstreae~ habitat nor maintains normal timing of flow-related biological stimuli • • Winter Flow Re~fme (November· April): Para~h 1 ~ Please refer to our COCIDints un.dereetion 2.3 (a)( 11) -CoOk inlet t!! Talkeetna Reach • Tributary Hab1t~~s: Paragraphs 2 and 3. ParagraP!:!._l: We also feel strongly both ways. 3: Discussion should be ~-r---.,_,...,..._~~,._-r-~..-,..~-~,......;....;..!o.r-.~ch 1 ead to the cone 1 us ion that to allow rectification of project icapacts. -Rectification of 1r.1pact .Winter Flows: We stronyly disagree with the conclusion reached in thfs section. How this conclusion can be derived frOfil the inforlilltion provided in this chapter and Ctapter 2 needs to be. fully explained • • Su~r Flows: We fully ayree that the proposal must be dewonstrated effective before it can be incorporated into a mitigation plan. -Reduction of Ir.tpacts Over T11:11: Please refer to our cOGiiJellts under Sect·IJn 2.0l(a)(1V) -M1bgabon: Paragraph 6. Para~raph 9: Discussion of the developraent of a hatchery should be expanced • .If oller gftiyation alternatives prove not to be feasible then we will neui to fully understand what could be achieved through hatcheries. (if} Mitigation of Downst""tllll Impacts Associated with Altered W.ter Temperature Regfge -t1easure.s to t·11nimize Impacts -t1easures to Rectify I111pacts: DocUC~entation should be provided on the success on th1s tYPe of proposal in Alaska, or other sub-arct1c syst .. s. Degonstration of the techniques would need to occur prior to incorporati~ into the mitigation plan. In that the sloughs are also utilized for· rearing by chinook and coho juveniles, discussion should be provided on how chum saloon (we have assuwed th~t chwa is the species which is being managed for although it is not stated) would interact with the other species. Alsa, t1e rnechanislils which gfght allow entrance to chinook and coho ulman into the sloughs while holdiny the chums from eyress1ng needs to be explained . . , Chdensation for Irraacts: Documentation should be provided on the SUCCI! S of a chery propayat on of grayling. (fi} Operation Mitigation Z: Ue t~lly support the -s"""a...;.p...;er;ae....;....,&,n~ ........ a""''"",-... o-n...,....,_nu-....n_g--..re ... s'-e-r-vo ... ,'!'"'r""'""'"'""e~r .... ma...,._li10..-de ling w i 11 a i1 ow an evaluation of available water temperatures throughout the year so that a detailed release plan can be developed. The release plan will need to consider both water temperature and volwae in order to e~inigfze impacts.• ~t! recocmend that this be carried out and the proposed release plan be included in the license application. !I ~I z.s -Aquatic Studies Prograg: Please refer to our coaments under F;shery sect1on -General Co~nts. Z.6 -llonitorin~ Studies: Please refer to our comDents under Section 1.3: Paragraph 8. 3 -BOTANICAL RESOURCES 3.1 ·Introduction {a) Regional Botanical Setting: A ~re complete description should be provided for veyetabon north of the Susitna River to the Denal i Highway, through which the proposed access road is to pass. The primary importa.nce of botanical resources as a key component of wildlife habitat should be restated here as the object of this report (s.t-: s~ctfo·n 1.2 , page E-3-3, paragraph 1). {b) Floristics {f) General: Paragraph 1: We suggest that the difference in numbers of plant species between the upper and lower basins are a result of the following: larger study area; greater time spent in sar.apling the upper basin , and the numerous vegetation communities associated with elevation changes and topographical diversity. Parayra~h 3: Please explain the quantification of plant species for the Willow-o-Cook Inlet and Healy-to-Fairbanks transmission corridors, when no floristics work was done in that area. {Section 3.2{e){i) and (i i) and Tables W24 and \125) • (c) Threatened or Endan~ered Species : Since no plant species are officially listed, we suygest addi ion of the word •candidate• prior to any dfscussf .on of •threatened or endan9ered• plant species. In r.1any places the discus s ion would be more accurate by referring to •plant taxa• rather than species since these plants are generally varieties or subspecies rather than distinct species. Please clarify that the ca1cfphi1fc plants referred to in paragraph 4 of subsection (1) refer to Uurray•s, not FWS, categories for threatened or endangered. (d) Contribution to \Jildlife, Recreation, Subsistencet and Cor.aerce: Because of their key functions both as habitat for fish and w1ldlife resources and in maintaining water quality relative to drainage, high water energy dissipation, flood storage, ground water recharge, filtering surface runoff, etc ., wetlands and floodplains have been protected by Executive Orders (11990, 11998) and national legislation (e.g. Clean Water Act as amended in 1977). Since vegetation fs a characteristic c01:1pone.nt of any wetlands, we suggest addition of a general section here on the prevalence of wetlands fn the project area and their widely re·cog ni zed biological and water quality values (please also see our following cor.r.Jen -t.s on Section 3.2(a)(vi), Wetlands. (iii) Subsistence : Use ,f area tir.aber resources for buflding or heating h01i1es is an additional subsfst~nce use which should be mentioned. fro~:~ Para~aph 2: A brief description should be given as to sampling intensity. Qhet~r vegetation do~inance within the project area and/or susceptibility to project impacts were considered in study design should be explained. General info~ation on elevation, slope, aspect, and land for~ should be briefly rQlated here and in subsequent sections of the report to better define areas and thefr vegetation cover. The prevalence of permafrost, a determining factor in sorne project impacts (e.g. pages E-3-166, paragraph 2 and E-3-170, paragraph 3), should also be considered. Para~aph 3: Successive descriptions of vegetation types by project area woul be clarified here by defining closed, open, and woodland forests, tall versus low shrublands, and wetlands (also see c~t under Section 3.2(a)(vi)), rather than defining theg in the following sections (a) and (i). The discussion would also be aided by including an overlay of project features on the vegetation map, Figure ~1, as well as restating information on the elevation range for each proposed impoundment area. Ye recommend the license application ir.r.lude a laryer, more readable vegetation map and that quantitative data on how co~n or uncogmon specific vegetation types are, as well as the occurrence of various types relative to elevation or aspect, be presented in the text as well as tables. In so describing the revised vegetation classification, ft will be possible to better evaluate potential project impacts on vegetation, and thus wildlife habitats, by project feature. This recogmended level of effort also applies to the proposed access and transmission corridors. (a) Yatana Reservoir Area (i) Forests: Please see comment under Section 3.2 re including quantified information in the text as well as tables. Providing the range of elevation fn which these types were sampled rather than one average would show the extent and overlap in distribution of each forest type. -S¥ruce Forest: Paragraph 5: Black spruce forests on poorly drained soils wou d mcst likely also be classified as wetlands. Please refer to our co~nts under Sections 3.1(d) and 3.2(a)(vi). (fi) Tundra: Please refer to coaments under Section 3.2: Fara~aph 3 re providing quantitative data on the prevalence of different tun~a types and of ranges rather than average elevations. The wet sedge-grass tundra should also be described as a wetland type, see Sections 3.1(d) and 3.2(a)(vi), as above. (iff) Shrubland: Refer to c~nts under Sections 3.2(a)(i) and (ii) above. (iv) Herbaceous: For consistency with the rest of the report, we recommend describing common species within the referenced herbaceous pioneer c~.runities. Corresponding tables on the herbaceous vegetation types are missing. (v) Unvegetated AJ·eas: Ayain, quantification of the extent, and thus i~portance, of these areas should be provided. (vi) Wetlands: Thfs section is significantly lacking in three areas. First~ the legislatively recognized i~portance and protection of wetlands should be described, including the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers• (CE) definition of wetlands and regulation of activities on these areas. (Please also refer to our comgents under Section 3.1(d) regarding this concern.) Secondly, th~re should be a discussion of how wetlands may be a second level of classiftcation applied to the vegetation types previously d;scussed. Finally, as with other ongoing studies, this section should cover the wetlands delineation schege agreed to at the Z December 198Z wetlands session of the Susitna Hydro Exhibit E Workshop. This agreement included the following: project consultants will geet with the FijS and CE to identify the appropriate detail for wetlands mapping; existing wetlands ~ps will be improved on the basis of additional aerial photography and overall vegetation remapping; soils information will be obtained from the CE; ground truthiny. in consultation with FijS and CE, will be undertaken in sugmer, 1983; final ~ps should be available by fall, 1983; and additional field checks gay be necessary in sugaer 1984 (see page 5 of Wetlands ~~t;ng notes, received from John Hayden, Acres AYerican, Inc.). Given the doubtful accuracy of existing wetlands maps~ it would be inappropriate to include those maps in the license subaittal. Redefinition of wetlands to properly include such types as black spruce bogs. willow and poplar along watercourses, and herbaceous sedge-grass marshes, in addition to the gore completely aquatic types now described under the wetlands section. A definition of -wet tundra• (paragraph 6) should be included. The final paragraph of this section would be a better opening statement to the expanded discussion needed on wetland values and types. (b) Devil Can~on Reservoir Area: Please refer to c~nts under Section 3.2(a) re nee for a brfef elevational and landform description. Again, there will be need for an overlay of the impoundment area on the (revised) vegetation type map. We appreciate inclusion of the percent of the igpoundaent area covered by ~jor vegetation types. Please refer to our previous comgents re need for a coaprehensive discussion and definition of wetlands. (c) Talkeetna to Devil Canyon: Clarification of this specific area is needed. Again, refer to co~nts urider Section 3.Z(a)(i) and (ii), above. While earll, mfd, and late successional stages appear a suitable categorizaion for floodplain vegetation, these stages should be correlated with the forest, shrub, tundra, wetlands, etc. classification previously used. (d) Talkeetna to Cook Inlet: Please refer to comgents under Section 3.Z(a)(i) and (11), above. we believe that existing data do not substantiate the conclusion that the project will have mfnigal fgpacts on vegetation in this area. Thus we recomgend mapping the area within the 10 year floodplain downstream of Talkeetna at least to the Delta Islands. Further discussions on expected igpacts should be initiated to better pinpoint the precise area which should be covered. (e) Transgission Stubs and Intertie: Again, we suggest adding a map, and elevation 1nforaation, as well as quantifying the vegetat;on type, for each of the following four subsections. (ii) Uillow to Cook Inlet: ParagraGh 1: Here too, •wet sedge-grass marshes• should more completely be rliscusse as wetlands, see Section 3.Z(a)(vi). Paragraph 2: The first sentence is contrary to data provi~ed in Table W25, please clarify. Paragra~h 5: Placement of this paragraph between the first and second paragraphs would be gore loyical. (iii) Willow to Healf: The compatibility of vegetation tYPeS as mapped by Commonwealth Assoc1a es, Incorporated (1982) with those mapped by McKendrick et aT. (1982) should be described. {iv) Darns to Intertie: We question the comparti)ility of vegetation types mapped here at a scale of 1:250,000 with those 1~ all other transmission corridors which were mapped at 1:63,360, e.g. Tables WZ7 and ~8 doc~nt difficulties of ~pping closed birch and balsam poplar types at the 1:250,000 scale. This transmission corridor should be separately mapped during ongoing mapping. 3.3 -I~pacts: Fragmenting this analysfs into a project feature by iQpact issue format is useful for a first overview. However the section lacks a comprehensive picture of cumulative impacts to vegetation. That cumulative picture is essential for understanding overall i~acts of the project on fish and wildlife species occupying areas within and beyond each project feature. Although this section identifies the full ranye of vegetation ifl~act issues, there is no attegpt to quantify areas which may be potentially affected by chan~es in vegetation cover. A given change ~ay be both beneficial to one spec es of wildlife yet adverse to another. By not completely prioritizing mitigation in the previous Fishery Section and later Wildlife Section, the report fails to identify the tradeoffs or objectives of a project-wide mitigation plan or mitiyation plan alternatives. For exagple, information should be provided here on the tradeoffs analysis relative to fish, wildlife and botanical igpacts, as well as cost and design considerations in the siting of project support facilities, roads and trans~ission lines. We remain concerned that we were not consulted in the siting of project support facilities. (a) Watana Developement {i) Construction -Vegetation Regoval: Para¥Qaph 1: Again, we suggest restating the elevation range within which vegetat on w111 be removed. Spoil areas should also be described. Paragraph 2: Please provide the percent loss expected fur birch forests as shown 1n Tible W27. Loss of a vegetation type relative to its abundance within the basin is half the issue relative to the loss of vegetation; however the value of each tYPe relative to other tYPeS for selected wildlife species should also be provided. In soae cases habitat factors would also be considered; see our co~~nts throughout the Wildlife Section. Paragra~h 3: So~ relatfonshfp should be ~ade between referenced possible delays n snowmelt and vegetation tYPeS which may be affected. Similarly, increases 1n cottongrass and decreases in mosses and lichens should be related to thefr occurrence in vegetation types adjacent to impoundment and borrow areas. Such relationships should be the basis for fully considering the impacts of project-induced ch1~ges on vegetation relative to wildlife (see our comments under Sections 4.3(a)(f), {ff}, (iv}, and (v)). {if} Filling and Operation • Ve~etation Succession Follo~ing Removal: In order to understand the rnagn tude of vegetat1on alterations, sage quantification should be presented for the areas of forest, shrub, tundra, etc. whfch will be rehabilitated durfng project ff111ng and operation. A scenario should be developed outlinfny potential acreages of each affected veyetation type and the various successiona~ ~tages they will pass through during the life of the project • • Forest Areas and Shrubland: Anticipated heights of each vegetation stage, over tfQe, should be 1ncluded here • • Tundra: The extent of pen~afrost should be described, please see our corJment under Section 3.2. Information fs needed on successional patterns in herbaceous vegetation types and on wetlands withfn ~ach tYPe, for consistency with Section 3.2(a). An additional concern is the nutritional qua~fty and quantity of plant regrowth relative to wfldlffe. and y the aerial extent of -Effects of Altered Downstream Fl~ws: Overall, this discussion is too general. Consideration of dafly flow fluctuations in response to peak power needs is neglected. Several other potential project impacts are left unclear; especially those related to wetlands and floodplains. For example, please provide the extent of floodplain areas, (1} now subject to annual, 5 year, 10 year, etc. flooding, 1nd (2} which will becoQe exegpt from flooding. Gfven the successional fnforQatfon depicted in Figure W3 and revised vegetation ~aps, 1t should be possible to quantify expected changes 1n vegetation, over tige, for a variety of flow regimes. Such information 1s necessary to fully determine project impacts to wildlife and gake mitigation recoQmendations. If existing hydrologic or vegetation information is considered insufficient for developing such models, additional studies should be initiated. ------------ • ~atana to Devil Canyon: A r.10re detailed treatment of the potential for r 1rne1ce or fcefog formation is needed here. For example, ice buildu8 on vegetation has been found to keep the soil surf&ce open in forests.l_/ Sapling tree stands heavily damaged by ice produced more brush whereas ice damage in mixed-oak .tree stands resulted in loss of understory sapll?gs and low tree branches ~nth herbaceous plant growth enhanced in sunaer.__. Such changes fn understory or reduction in winter browse availability could be particularly crit i cal to wi'ldl i fe subject to extensive adjacent habitat losses. The types of vegetation wnfch may form, over the project life, on •newly-exposed areas with adequate soils• should be described relative to adverse or potential benefits fo!' various wildlife species • • Devil Canyon to Talkeetna: Paragr~h 3: This quantified description of expected vegetation type Changes ise type of detailed impact analysis necessary for other project areas (e.g. preceeding sect ion on \Jatana to Devil Canyon and following section on Talkeetna to Yentna River). Once the revised ve9etation mapping and analysis is corilpleted, this type of analysis should be the basis for exar.1ininy the positive and/or negative impacts to wildlife of these vegetation changes, over the 1 ife of the project. Paragraph 4: The statement that, •post-project ice fono1ation in this reach will be si~ilar to present conditions,• appears to conflict with previous descriptions whereby fee forgatfon will not occur until approximately river mile 130, slightly more than half way to Devil Canyon fro~ Talkeetna (Section 2 .3(a)(iii), page E-3-90). In order to understand how area vegetation gay be less-influenced under post-~roject break-up, it would be useful to explain present flilpacts of break-up on the vegetation. Please address the change fr'lm a bank-ful l flood interval of 1 to 2 years for this section of the river. Quantification is needed of the area over which vegetation could be established with this schedule for less frequent disturbances • • Talkeetna to Yentna River: Para~aph 2: Again, the vegetated areas and types which could become establish on the actfve gravel floodplain under less frequent bank-full floods should be described. Para~aph 4: \Je question the suggested vegetation changes between Talkeetna and e Yentna River. Vegetat i on allowed to establish over a longer period of tige (e.g. 5 to 10 rather than 1 to 2 years) would see11 le·ss likely to be disturbed when the bank-full flood does occur. Given the annual flow 1Q! Butler, R.~-1., tl .H. Wooding, and E.A. Myers. Spray-Irrigation Disposal of Wastewater. Special Circular 185. The Pennsylvania State Un1ver·sfty, College of Agriculture Extension Service, University Park, Pennsylvania. 17 pp. 11! \Jood, G.W., P.J . Glantz, H. Rothenbacher, and D.C. Krodel. 1975. Faunal response to spray irrigation of chlorinated sewaye effluent. Research Publication t•o. 87. Pennsylvania State University, University Park, Pennsylvania. 89 pp. variations over thfs stretch of the rfver, ft would seem possfble and necessary to predict areas of vegetatfo~ change for maxf~ and minfgug flow scenarios. Para:laph 3: Ye recoamend calculating the potential vegetated area and types there n within the referenced 2.5 km area downwind of the reservoir within which air temperatures may be affected. Resultant 1apacts on timing of veyetation yreen-up or leaf-drop could be important for area wildlife. Para~~h 4: A more extensive treatment of foy bank development should be 1nc1~ here, please refer to our cougents under Section 3.3(a)(i1)-Effects of Altered Downstreag Flows • Yatana to Devil Canyon. Also see c~nt above re calculating the area within 3 km offshore which may be affected by fee development. -Effects of Increased Human Use: We have repeatedly cited the important opportunity for m1n1~1zing project impacts on ftsh and wildlife by carefully sftfng and regulating access (see FWS letter to Eric Yould, APA, of 17 August 1982). The potentials for off-road vehicle (ORV) use and accidental fires with project access described here confirm that such use cay need to be effectively controlled as fish and wildlffe rn1t1gat1on. Please refer to co~nts under Section 3.4(c)(11) re our recommendations to eliminate the Denali Highway access route and to restrict worker and public use of project access routes. we are concerned about 1nconsistencies wfth the first sentence here, re greater access opportunities, and with points made fn the Yildlife Section. That section appropriately contains repeated descriptions of (1) the significant negative fgpacts from increased use and access; and (2) the need to carefully control project area use and access (e.g. Sections 4.4(a)(i), (fi), (iv), and (r) and 4.4(c)(ii)). Please clarify • • Off-Road Vehicles: Para a 3: In view of previous incogplete coverage of we an s see our caygen s un er Section 3.2(a)(vi)), we question the definition behind use of the terg wetlands here. This discussion illustrates the need for the improved wetlands .. P which 1s to be developed. (b) Devil Canyon Development (f) Construction: Other than quantifying direct vegetation losses frog reservoir inundation, the section fails to provide any indication of the relative magnitude of other potential losses or alterations in vegetation. · Vegetation Removal: Please refer to our concerns under Section 3.3 re lack of consultation in siting camp, vfllage, and borrow areas. -Vegetation Loss b~ Erosion: Again, a gap of peraafrost areas would be useful. G1Yen the1kely ineffectiveness of replacing topsoil and re~ontouriny (Section 3.3(b){i) • Indirect Cons~uences of Vegetation Removal), we suggest that clearing gay be a sign1ficant source of erosion. -Effects of Altered Oraina~e: We recor;aend that this section include the area of lakes, ponds, and o her wetlands which gay be affected by proposed borrow areas. (fi) Fillfn¥ and Operation: Paragraph 3: The potential for GIOverant ~f the _____ _ large lands 1de at river Qlle 175, causing upstreag flooding and Toss o~ mTd- and late-successional vegetation in valuable riparian areas, should be described in IJOre detail. For example, the p\ltentfal .size of the area to be impacted should be described. • Vegetation Succession Following Clearing: Please refer to our previous coggents, Section 3.3(a)(ii). • DcM1stre11:1 Effects: The unknown consequences of frost buildup on vegetation adjacent to the reservoir represent a significant potential change in vegetation and thus impact to wildlife (see our coaments under Section 3.3(a)(ii)). These consequences should be the subject of continuing studies and quantification. (c) Access (f) Construction: Paragraph 1: Please refer to our comgent under Sect)on 3.2 regarding or.tission of base line data on proposed access corridors. Beca.use of this oc1ss1on, the exact areas which would be cleared within the 34 rater (&J) x 67 KW access corridor 4escribed here are unclear. Please explain why this description appears to conflict with earl f.er descriptions of road width and length (Section Z.3(c}(1)). Inconsistent ~e of both getrfc and English units within the same report adds further confusion. (ii) O¥erat1on: Paragraph..!: Our cOGJaents under Section 3.3(a) (11) a.pply _ here a so. ParaKaph 2: The potential for fee buildup on the ra.f'lroad tracks and resu ant iGJpacts on vegetation should be examined. (d) Transgfssfon Corridors (i) Construction: Paragraph 1: Please clarify the differences among hectares to be impacted by the transmission corridors as cited here and in Tables '"24, W25, and W26. Moreover, referenced Table W29, has nothing to do with trans~fss1on corridors. Para~aSh 2: Wetlands, as used here, should be defined. Precalculation of affec e vegetation types will need to be undertaken after the ongoing yegetation remapping. rwtatfon should be gade that, (1} low-lying vegetation types will remain largely undisturbed, and (2) beneficial iapacts of i.ncreased browse productic,, will be realized, only if access and ORV use along transr.Jfssion corridors are effectively controlled. Quantification of pptsqt1e1 ipsreases tg brpwse shou14 be possible on the basis of succession ~~dels and continuing classification studies. Such quantification is needed to ccx.1pare overall losses and thus li1ftigation requirero~ents for the project. (if) Operation: Our comments above under Section 3.3(d)(i ) apply. (e) IriNact ·SW'i51arf An explanation 1s needed for the process or criteria for deterg n1ng 1mpac •priorities of i~ortance.• (i) thou~ (v): This qualitative su.ary describes several data gaps which we believe s outd be answered, e.g. the vegetated area ~J ieh may be l ost with land sTumpage fr011 pen~~frost, changes in downstreua floodplain vegetation., etc. Overa 11, we are concerned with lack of' attention to caaalative f~~pac:ts, an inattention gade gore acute by nonquantif1cation of most i~aets. The nugerous •~;~in imaT• and •minor• 1mpac.ts for each project feature aay CUJ:IUlltively represent significant alterations or Toss of vegetation. FrOiil the standpoint of fish and wildl if'e habitats, project-related activities throughout thfs primarily undisturbed area represent the first intrusions similar to those which have Ted to significant and Tosses of fish and wildlife throughout the contemfnous United States. A serious Olilission fn this section is consideration of impacts to wetlands and floodplains. (vi) Prioritization of Jg~act Issues: We concur with the evaluation of acreage losses for a vege ation type relative to the proportion of' that type __ _ in the region. Since vegetation is a key coraponent of wildlffe habitats, the basis f or evaluating whether c.011111unity changes are •good• or •bad• should follow in the Wildlife Section of this chapter. However as discussed there, an inteyrated evaluation of all species is lacking. There is Tittle basis for makiny decisions on prioritizing spec.fes concerns or resultant tradeoffs in project impacts or mitigation alternatives. Our pr-evious coc.nts on each impact issue identified here apply. Addftfonally, we have a few specific cOLDents. -Direct Losses of Vegetation Access Roads: While the act~al area covered gay be small relative to other project fgpacts, access routes indirect l y impact a guch larger area because of their linear nature • • Transgfssion Corridors: We would like to be assured that the reference to a 1 iidfan strfp for transport of personnel and gaterials•, is consistent with the environmental guidelines for transafssion corridors (Appendix AE - Trans;1ssion Corridors, item 1) with whfch we concur. As with access roads, above, tranSiil1ss1on corridors indirectly f111pact a very large area . -Indirect Losses of Vegetation: The cumulative 1gpact of project features mentioned previously, ;s Of particular concern here. ~~ny of the identified losses wiTT be in riparian corridors which are of particular significance to wildlife species. -Alteration of Vegetation TyPes: We ayain recomgend that successional type changes over the proJeCt );fe be quantified in the license application. 3.4-:1itit0tion Plan: We find the proposed plan incomplete and too general. There are o main problems with this plan. First, because impacts are incompletely quantified, it is not possible to determine the value of recomgended/accepted mitigation measures or the magnitude of unavoidable, adverse impacts whfch will not be mftfgated. Not integrating thfs plan wfth the fish and wildlife mftigatfon plans fs the second main problem. Thus there is no coaprehensive picture of overall project impacts, prforftfes for gftfgatfon, potential for achieving those prforftfes, or tradeoffs among ~ftfgation options for various area resources. An approach similar to that for the Fishery Section mftigatfon plan (pages E-3-120 through E-3-144) would be ;ore appropriate. Ye recomaand restating the full range of mftfgation alternatives here, prioritized fn accord vfth NEPA guidelines: avofd, mfnfmize, rectify, reduce or eliminate over tiaa, and finally, compensate. Thfs approach should be expanded to include reasons for rejecting high prforfty mftfgatfon in lieu of lower prforfty measures (e.g. proposing regulations on access rather than alternate siting or scheduling of access). A mftf~atfon plan, incorporating specfffc, effective measures whfch have been selected through thfs process. should then be presented. ~~ny of the identified fwpacts are not addressed fn the aftfgatfon plan itself. In those cases, fapacts should be clearly fdentfffed as unavoidable, short or long-teru, adverse ili1pacts. · Moreover, we ffnd the report lacks information specfffcally required by FERC regulations (F.R. Vol. 46, No. Z19, 13 Novegber 1981), Section 4.41(f){3)(iv), f.e. there are no implementation, construction, or operation schedules for recommended mftfgation ceasures; which measures have actually been incorporated fnto project plans fs unclear; and neither replacement lands nor habitat manipulations have been identified as to either suitable sizes or locations. Generalities of the plan are exempli~ied by references to using, •depleted or non-operational upland borrow pfts ••• as overburden storage areas where feasible• {page E-3-187) or reference to •a feasible haul distance,• (page E-3-187). . (a) W&tana Developsent (f) Construction: Paragra~ 1: t1itfgat1ve fHtures whfch have been incorporated fnto ~ngfneer ng design and construction planning should be clearly stated. Reasons for rejecting our recoaaendatfons have never been for~ally provided (e.g. access road siting). Location of the construction camp and village on shrublands (per Table ~7) rather than forestlands may not minimize igpacts, depending on the wildlife species of concern, erosion potentials, proximity to construction and access facflitfes, etc. Again, since we were not consulted in siting of those facilities and have not seen Exhibit A, we cannot fully understand the situation. A aechanfsm for enforcing the referenced prohibftfon of off-road or all-terrain vehicle use should be included (see FERC regulations Sections 4.41(f)(3)(iv) in F.R. Vol. 46, tlo. Z19, 13 t4ovser 1981). Paragraph 3: We suggest that facility siting to avoid wetlands be rerevfewed fn consultation with the FYS and CE and proposed revisions to th~ wetland ~s. As with similar points about •minimizing• or •reducing•, there fs no quantification, particular!y relative to the agount of wetlands, or other irnpacts in other report sections, which will be iapacted and which can be avoided. Paragraph 5: We concur that spoils should be placed in the inundatio·n area as long as such placeaent will not create a sediaentation probleca. Parayraph 6: We recoamend explaining whether project engineers have confirmed that floodplains or first-level t errace locations will not be needed for borrow for ancillary project rae iT it ies. Parayraph 7: We recoggend that siailar detailed inforgation be provided throuyhout the report. (if) Filling: Please refer to our General C~nts, Botanical Resources, re identifying feasible habitat enhanceGJent 111easures or replacerJent lands. The contention that 11100se winter browse •may be c01o1pensated• is useless, given that (1) there is no guarantee in this plan that enhancegent or land acquisition will ever occur; and (2) quantification for how lilUCh/where/what type. of land must be enhanced or acquired is lack iny. Moreover, tradeoffs re cogpensatio· for moose to the neglect or adverse impact of other species have not been settled or even discussed. Para~aph 3: Because of internal inconsistencies, the overall effect of si1ti:ion is unclear. Paragraph 5: Whether rectification will be one percent or 99 percent is unclear. Paragraph 7: We concur with revegetation plans to egphasize fertilization and ainim1ze seeding where erosion will not be a problea. Parafnaph 8: We strongly support plans to rehabilitate all sites by the first yrowny season after they are no longer needed. A.ssurances s"ould be provided that sufficient quantities of seeds would be stockpiled and regrowth potentia 1s of available native strains will be tes i.ed prior to project abandonment of disturbed sites. Choice of plants for site rehabi 11tation should be in consultation with Federal and State natural resource ayencies. (iii) Operaticn: Paragraph 1: We concur with the proposed aonitoring of downstream veyetabon Changes but note that monitoring fn itself fs not aftigation. Periodic controlled flooding to gafntain primary and secondary successional stayes aust be coordinated with the Fishery Section and Wildlife Section mitigation plans. Parasraeh z: We have assumed that nonessential portions of the disturbed areas w1ll be promptly rehabilitated. Please specify. (b) Devil Canyon Development (f) Construction: ParaJ1aTh 1: Our comgents relative to the Watana developraent (Section 3. a {if)) mitigation apply here also. An additional ~itigation need fs monitoring and enforcement relative to ORV and unauthorized access uses. Spoil disposal described here was not discussed or previously covered in the igpacts Section 3.3(b)(i). (if) Fillinf and Operation: Again, our c~nts under Watana Developaent, Sect1on 3.4 a)(11) and (tli) apply. (c) Access (i) Construction: Paraflaph 1: Please clarify why avoidance of closed forests was tiriiid as a mitiya ve ••sure in siting of the Denali Highway to watana access road. Section 4.4(b), paragraph Z supports this siting re minimization of project frapacts to pine lillrten. If this fs the reason, that reference should be rade here and further infonatfon 1s necessary on other species adversely affected by this siting and adverse/beneficial iapacts of alternative sitings which were eliainated. Wetlands will need verifying per our previous cogments (Section 3.4(a)(i)). At least one line of this paragraph was omitted. Paral}aph 3: We refer you to our previous coaaents on wetlands, Sections 3.2(a (vi} and 3.4(a)(i). Para~aph 4: Information fs too general. We concur with the intent but do not ~ve necessary specifics as to the extent of mitigation which will be achieved. (ii) ~eration: The referenced management provisions should be ~escribed here 1nc1u~ng busing of workers and restrictions on non-project-related uses. Para~aph 2: The extent of ~itigation which can be achieved for gany project fgpac s will depend upon the ~nageDent options under review by the APA. In the APA f·1itigation Po lfcy docUiillllt and under NEPA guidelines, avoidance is to be the first priority in i&plllillnting ~:aitigation. Threfore we refer you to our previous correspondence on this tssue (letter to Eric Yould f~u. FWS, 17 August 1982) as part of our pre-license consultation. In brtef, th~ necessary avoidance should include eli~:aination of the Denali Highway to Watan& access road and prohibiting use of other project access routes for non-project-related access. Instead, construction access should be by rail from Gold Creek, along the south side of the Susitna River to Devil Canyon, and access on the north between the two dams. Non-project-related use of these access routes should be prohibited during project construction. A thorough analysis should be provided here of public access from the standpoint of adverse irapacts to fish and wildlife and their habitats in comparison to any positive igpacts for recreational and subsistence fish and wildlife uses. Ue note SOiill conflict betveen the statesaent that the IIA is reviewing a variety of access management options with the suggestion that the project access route from the Denali Highway may be eligible as a National Scenic Highway. That designation would stimulate public access to the increased detriment of fish and wildlife, effectively foreclosing soae mitigative ~nagement options. Paragraph 3: Please refer to our gore extensive c~nts on the Recreation Plan re consistency with fish and wildlife protection priorities. We strongly concur with the proposal to gonitor fish, wildlife, and vegetation igpact but again note the report•s deficiency in not describing how and by whom gonftoring will be completed (see our General C~nts, Fishery Section). t~reover, the process for modifying proJect operations or the Recreation Plan to better effect r.1ftiyat i on is not described. (d) Transgfssion (f) Construction : Please clarify what criteria were used for siting of transmission corridors. Assurance is required that project plans include construction by helicopter or winter access. Paragraph 2: Again, refer to our previous coaments on wetlands. ~· reca.aend lilin11i1111 150 11 buffers between swan nests and any port.ions of the tranSiil1ss1on corridor. ~if) Operation: ~e concur with this plan but are concerned that it 81Y not be mplemented. We hope to avoid a repeat of the Intertie situation where on-ground access was later guaranteed to the operating utilities contrary to residents' and agencies• recoggendations. That guarantee already contradicts this plan, given the dependence and interrelationship of the Susitna project with the Intertie. Since habitat manipulations, including fire, crushing, etc. (Section 4.4(a)(1) and ( 1v)) are beiny suygested as a prfe~e mitigation geasure for w1Jdl ife, we recor.E~end that potential effects of those activities on ve.yetation types within different project areas be discussed here. The potential value for rJitigation of various habitat manipulations should be explained similar to the discussion on fire, Section J.Z(a)(ii). Two additional iteas which should be covered in this r.1itigation plan are the r.JOnitoriny and surveillance plans referred to earlier and an erosion control plan specific to project features and schedules . Specific comaents on tables and figures relative to the Botanfchl Resource .s Section follow: Table \13: Please change in accord with our reconaenda.tfons under Section 3.1(c), to •candidate endangered and threatened plant spec ies•, etc. Ta.bles W5 throu~ W19: We suggest including a footnote or appendix briefly descr161ng how ese data were collected with sOGte explanation of whether sampling intensity was coaaensurate with the avaflabfHty of the vegetation type wfthfn the project area and potentfa.l for that type to be impacted by the project. Ta.bles \121 through U23: The number of sites saapled 1n each type should be included. As in our COiililents on the text. information should be provided on how these categories compare with the vegetation categories Sllilplett within the upper Susitna basin. T'ab 1 es U24 throu~ '11126: P 1 ease c 1 arify whether the 400 to 500 foot right-of-way orb foot cleared centerline area was used in these calculations. Per our previous cogment on the trans~ission corridor, a similar ta.ble for the Intert1e portion of the transmission corridor should be included. We also suggest a SUiililary table showing the vegetation impacts fro~:~ a 11 seg~:~ents of the trans~:~ission corridor·. Please refer to our cogments in the text on need for an additional table showing vegetation types to be i~:~pacted by all access corridors, preliminarily identified borrow areas (e .g. borrow area G is not included in Table W28) and spoil areas. Where questions reaain on the size of borrow/spoil areas to be used or the necessity of a 1? potentia.lly identified areas, notation should be rade of potential maxilllllil and miniiiiUII sizes and any ordering re use of these areas. Figure Ul: Granted, it is difficult to reproduce such a ~ap at this scale. However, we recoamend a larger reproduction be included fn the final application. That •P should include an overlay showing reservoir inundation areas, acce.ss roads, transmission corridors, and other project features. A correspondfny map of downstream vegetation and overlay of transmission corridors is also needed. Figure W3: Once the reupped vegetation classification is completed it should be correlated to this table tD quantify potential vegetation changes and types over the 1 ife of the project. Figure U4: As ahove, this figure should be a basis for analyzing downstream successional trends given the projected longer times between floods. Maintenance of habftat JDanipulations should be specified on the basis of this figure. and mitigation objectives. 4 .. WILDLIFE 4.1 Introduction: Ue recoggend expanding this section to at least acknowledge the ecological values of all wildlife species, as well as to ~re clearly outline objectives of the report and resultant mitigation plan. we again point out the need for an overall discussion of fish, wildlife, and botanical resources, overall lilitigation plans, and tradeoffs in benefits to some resources at the expense of others. (c) Species Contributing to Recreation, Subsistence and COQg8rce: No~ only _ birds, but all wildlife species in the project area contribute to non-consumptive forms of recreation. Incidental viewing of wildlife in conjunction with other actfvfties fs an unquantiffable but well documented value. For exaaple, the i!ilpOrtance of downstrea. fish and wildltfe habitats to fish, wildlife, and the significant nUIIbers of people using tha has been recognized by the State and agreed to by the Matanuska-Susitna Borough Assembly. Fish and w11d11fe have been designated a priury use on every State land Janagement unft on the east side of the Su$ftna River fro• Cook Inlet to just below its confluence with the Kashwftna River. These managelillnt units and state guidelines for protecting fish and wildlife are described in the recent State report, Land Use Plan f~r Public Lands in the Ufllow SUb-basin, October 1981, by the A1aska beparbient of hatura1 Resources (AbftR), ~~tanuska-Su~itna Borough, and ADF&G. A discussion as to why the evaluation species were selected and prioritized as described here is as applicable to terrestrial wildlife species as it is to fish (Section 2.l(d)). we suggest referencing that discussion here. Such inforgation is particularly important w1th regard to mitigation plans for one species which conflict with another species. Ue also suggest noting values of key bird species, i.e. bald and golden eagles have received national protection (Bald Eagle Protection Act, 16 U.S.C. 668-668c); trugpeter swans are highly valued because of their for•r endangered status; and other gigratory birds are protected under international treaties and the Migratory Bird Conservation Act (16 U.S.C. 7.Ql-718h). Please note, all references to tables fn the wildlife section of the text are to table numbers one greater than on the actual table. we have referred to tables as they are actually nUGbered. 4.2 Baseline Description (a) Big Gue (1) l·1oose: rtiss1ng figures and values are a problem throughout this section. -Distribution: Please document how moose are •one of the most economically important wfldlffe species in the region;• also see our coments on Chapter 5, Section 3.7(b) • • Special Use Areas: In view of your repeated citations that winter range is a key area for goose (e.g. Section 4.2(a)(1) • Seasonal ~~vegents: Parafia~h 6; Se.ction 4.2(a)(i) • Mortality Factors: Paragraph 5; and Section 4.3 a) f) t1inter Use), we suggest including a section here on the use and avai1abil ity of winter range 1n both stvere and mild winters, as well as the data gaps and plans to overcOQ& them re1ative to this study. t-laps showiny use areas described here relative to project features would clarify this section. Calving Areas: Para~aphs 3 and 4: N~er·s of lilale and faraale 10100se radio - collared in each ofe downstream study areas should be described here • • River Crossings: To better understand how not only the reservoirs, but ancillary project features such as the Devil Canyon camp and village, .ay also influence 110ose crossf.ngs of the Susitna River, crossings both i.-diately up and downstream of the impoun~nt areas should also be described (also see our COCIIIents under Section 4.3(b)(i) -Interference with MoveMnts). -Habitat Use: The rain problllil with this and the following section on populations fs that there has, apparently, been no integration of moose and vegetation data • • Cover Requirements: Para~aph 7: Please describe the scope and schedule for the necessary studies o habitat use, or reference the discussion under Section 4.3(a)(i) -Quantification of Project Effects. Correlating aerial observations to the remapped vegetation types should provide additional inforwation on habitat use. Elevation, slope, or other habitat ~parameters may also need to be incorporated in this analysis. Habitat Use in the U~per Susitna Basin: Paragraph 3: Further info~ation is needed on the unders or1es associatid with these hibitat types. -Please -- indicate when such information will become availabl~. Para a h 2: For consistency, the .-n=..._e_r_o_..,......,._ema._,..e--QO_.o_s_e-ra.....,,...o""'-c"""o"-"""a.-.r .....,..._n_o .... r """"""""'o ..... •a-......-.eetna shou 1 d be provided, --- also see our colllillnts under this section, Calvins Areas. The discussion fs confusing due to frequent cOQbining of quantitat1ve data with qualitative stategents such as •aost female use,• •at gost relocation sites,• etc. Where it is available, we recoauend supplying quantitative inforlilition, with qualifying discussions on limited sample sizes, periods of observations, etc • • Food Habits: Paragraph 2: Again, please describe the scope and schedule of ongoing analyses and~ow that information will be integrated in t o mitigation planning in a timely manner. Reference to your Section 4.3(a)('f) - Quantification of Project Effects w111 provide some of this information. Paragra~hs 4 and 5: Ye suggest examining how browse avaflabflfty and vegetation types utflized by liiOose correlate with r.10ose relocations in reference to the remapped vegetation types. • Hoe~e Ranges The Upper Susitna Basin: The rational should be given for selecting an 8 kg wide analysis zone adjacent to the fQpoundgent. -Population Characteristics Paragraph 2: Substantiating population and productivity data 1n Tables W32 through W34 should be referenced here • . Po~ulation Estigates -Upper Susitna Basin : Plea$e describe what types of hibf at correlations can 6e1Side from remapped vegetation types and other habitat paru.ters for low, high, and liiOderate .aose density areas • • t·lorta lity Factors: Paragraph 1: \ire rec011.1end describing how range qua 11ty has been decreasing. Parafaa~hs 2 throuJfl 4: Please describe the COiilparabflity of brown bear popu~t ons and hib tat types between the Nelchina and Susitna -River basins. We recocaend expanding the discussion to include hunting as a mortality fac tor. Both recreational and subsistence hunting can affect population size and structure. Hunting figures prominently tn Tater igpact discussions. Historical hunting effort and success data relative to changing management regulations should be described, and coordinated with Chapter 5. Please also refer to our comments under Chapter 5, Section 3.7(b). (ii) Caribou -Distribution and Hovemert~ Patterns: Paragraph 6: Please describe how 1111ny an1ufs were radio-cotlc:-.;! and the nUiibers of radio locations-liJide for each one. Figures \49 and WlO of caribou radio locations should include. the Tocat ions of project features. -Habitat Use: Please clarify whether aerfa.l observations or an overlay of radio locations on ex 1stfng vegetation type .. ps were used to deter~ine caribou use of different veyetat.ion types. A correlation should be provided for the proportion of the basin which fs fn each type relative to the proportion of radio-collared caribou sightings within each type (Table W36). Please discuss whether vegetation regapping efforts will affect the interpretation of caribou data. Para~aph 10: Changes in the number of permits frog 1972 to 1981 should be desc~bed and percents of the herd harvested, by year, included fn Table W38. Para~raph 11: Please tabulate data on wolf population, wolf predation, and car1 ou nUEbers froa 1957 to 1981. ( i i 1} Da 11 Sheep Parafuaeh 5: ~e recoril:lend further justification be provided to ·support the conc~s1on that iapacts frau the impoundsents will be •inor. Clarification of where the sheep w f nter and of sheep IIIOVSIInts between seasona 1 ranges shou 1 d be provided. ParaYaa~h 6: Reference should be provided for the judgeaent that the sheep popu at on has rsained stable or slightly increased. P4ra!)aph 8: Please provide a gap of the Jay Creek mineral lfck, and probable trave corridors to the area, relative to the ~atana impoundment. We recogcend providing historical harvest data and explaining how project surveys relate to area populations. ( fv) Brown Bears -Distribution: We recommend providing data on the numbers of bears radio- collared and radio locations ~de, as well as gaps of those radio locations relative to project use. -Habitat Use: Paragraph 2: Please describe whether aerial observations or vegetation type maps were used to detergine vegetation types relative to brown bear radio locations. An explanation should also be provided of how li10re detailed vegetation data and the vegetation reaapping efforts will be integrated with the analysis of brown bear habitat use • • Hoge Range: Paravra~h l: Please correct the referenced Table W42 which 11sts dati from proJec studies in the Susitna, not the Uelchina basin. - Paragraph 2: .An explanation. should be provided as tc why 1.6 km and 8 kliJ were Chosen as the break: down for study zones around the fmpound&ents. Paragra~ 4: Please describe data on bear radio locations relative to access roads, ansmi'ssfon corridors and ancfllary project features. (v) Black. Bears -Distribution: We recoliDend including raps of bear radio locations relative to project features. -Habitat Use: Please •1escribe how further, vegetation studies and reGIIpping wiTT be integrated witn the analysis of black bear habitat use. -Food Habits: The scope, schedule, and integration of ongoing predation studies relative to further project planning should be addressed here. (viii) Belukha Whales: Please note that several of the references cited here do not app~ar in the bibliography. -Distribution and Habitat Use: Para~aph 5: We suggest integrating data on chinook salmon from the fisheries stu ies in order to obtain so;e estigate of the iL~ortance of that fi3hery and of project i~acts to th~ fishery on belukha whales. Please also describe what data will be gathered on s•Tt for better evaluating project i~apac,ts on belukhas. (b) Furbearers (f) Beavers: We recoamend including a ~P of the study area which details specific Study sections, available density data, and representative .ain channel, side channel, slough, and clear water areas. The dfseussion should be expanded to cover the extent to which suitable beaver habitats are fully utilized or explanations where they are not. Para~raph 4: We recoggend investi~ating the extent to wtich bank lodges are used by beaver and to which the activity levels reported in Table WS3 gay be underestimated. An on-yround survey when beavers come out of their dens to forage just before spring break-up could verify such use. Paragraph 8: Further quantification should be provided on trapping effort and success, see our conaents under Chapter 5, Section 3.7(c). (ii) 1·1uskrat: Parafa~h 2: Please clarify whether the 106 lakes surveyed contftute all the ~~s between the Oshetna River to Gold Creek impact area. Please relate this discussion to the number of muskrats potentially inhabiting this area. Para~a~ 3: Please provide an indication of downstream aJSkrat populations anda& at quality. Paragraph 4: Please quantify present and h'fstorical trapping effort/success. ( v ) t·1arten -Po~ulation Characteristics: Para~aph ': No data is provided to subs antiate that pine marten aree •economically most important furbearer,• ------ or to relate densities to populations and habitat quality. Please also refer to our c~nts under Chapter 5, Section 3.7(c) • .. Habitat Use: Please refer to th,e co11101ent ilililldiately above. (vi) Red Foxes -Habitat Use • Denning Habitats: Please provide fnforaation on the density of fox dens re1attve to habitat quality, and to other Alaskan and/or tlorth American fox populations. Paragra~ 5: SaGe explanation should be provided for the disparity of .are fox tra s on the south side of the river but aore dens on the north side. -Food Habits: Paragraph 3: The postulated link between fox and hare populations raay be overstated. Apparently hare nUiilbers have never been higfi -· or an important food source for fox in th 1s area (Furbearer Study Coord ina tor Phil Gipson, personal coamunicat ~on; also see Section 4.2(b)(vi1): Paragraph ! and Section 4.3(a)(xiii): Paragraph 5). -Po,ulation Characteristics : P'lease refer to our previous co;aents under Oenn ng Ribitits relat1ve to habitat quality (Section 4.2(b)(vi)-Habitat · Use). Again,~apper effort and success should be docuaented, also see our Cciiillents. on Chapter 5, Sect ion 3.7 (c) • (vii ) x Least Weasel: ~e understand that none of these species were c osen as 1 pr or y or evaluating project 11i1p&cts . However, -_,e ---··- recoamend providing some quantffic~t ion for the descriptfons of •fairly numerous• but not •Jigited,• •locally abundant,• and •sparse,• in addition to trapper effort/harvest; also see our cOCiiJents on Ch.apter 5, Section 3.7(c). (c) Birds: Paraf.aph Z: Please note that waterfowl breeding pair surveys have 6,~, conduc ld by FliS fn the lower Sus ftna R 1ver-·bas-fn-for over 20 years._. The F\IS has a }Jq conducted statewide surveys for truapeter swans in 1968, 1975, and 1980.J!t Para~ph 3: We recOIIill!nd further infomatfon be provided on how relatfve ibun ces of bird species were deten~ined. Please clarify the difference between 60 percent of the area being in shrublancls, as cited here, with the just oveT 40 percent 1n shrub l ands, as cited in Table W4. At the August 1982 AEA Workshop on the project, much discussion centered on proble.s with correlating the bird habitat classification scheae used by Kessel et al. for project bird studies with the Oyrness and Viereck Alaskan vegetation classification syste. used for project base l ine veget.ation .. ps. ~~ reca.gend describing those problems here and how they will or will not be overcoge by ongoing vegetation 'egapping. Throughout the bird sections of the draft application we are concerned that source(s) for referenced data, or data 11/ The most current data is available in: King, J.G. and B. Conant. 1982. Alaska-Yukon waterfowl breeding pair ·survey, 18 t-~~y to 13 June 1982. USfijS, Juneau, Alaska. ~ The ca.puterized compilation of thi~ data is available at the FWS' Alaska Regional Office, 101 1 E. Tudor, Anchorage 99503; please contact Greg Konkel, (907) 263-3395; original data is available frOGJ Jig King, USFWS, Juneau, (907) 586-7244. ranipulations, uy not be fully doc~nted. Thus we recoa~end describing where and how data froa gore than one source has been ganipulated forth 's report. !n particular, the tables and figures should be aore completely referenced, including explanatory footnotes. (1 ) Ra tors and Raven: Para ra l : Ye are concerned that 1980 and 1982 rap or surveys were no con uc at the optigua time: i.e. sumger foliage would Qake it difficult to initially locate nests (we note that SO percent moro nests were found in 1981 than in 1980); according to Table Y&O, nestf r.g raptors will have fledged their young by 30 Septelber .akfng it difficult to deteruine nest activity 1n Oct~-. Please 1ndfcate the experience of observer(s) conducting the raptor surveys and aethods used, (e.g. W.ethr surveys were by hetfcopter or fixed-wing aircraft). We also reca.end that .aps of actual nest locations be included. We note that goshawk nests are often difficult to find by air and thus question whether the nuablr of nests cited here is 1 thorough assess.nt . Please clarify in the text whether all rap tor nests act he in 1980 were also active in 1981 • Para~raph 3: Please expand the discussion to aore completely describe the hibf at suftabilfty of the project area for golden eagles, given their apparent hiyh density. Paragraph 4: Refer to our comment under Section 4.2(c)(f): Paraflaph 1, above, re the late t1mfng of 1980 and 1981 surveys f'or nesting bad eagles. Please provide a description of the survey ;ethods used. Paragraph 5: Ue recoggend that discussion be provided relative to h&bftat va.Tues re how Susitna habitats COiilp&re with those a long the Tanana River where slightly lower nesting densities are reported. Paragraph 7: Due to the status of the arctfc peregrine falcon (Falco pere17inus tundrius) as an endangered species under the Endangered Species Act of 1 3. as aaendid (16 u.s.c. 1531-1543, as aaended), we are particularly concerned with the adequacy of surveys for thllil, e.g. peregrines would have already left the area by October when the 1982 survey was done. Thus, we again recgggend describing how the surveys were conducted, for how tong, and by wh011. iJe recOIIIillnd that peregrioe falcon surveys be conducted annually, fn early July, throughout project studies and coftstruction, or until there is sufficient evidence that peregrine falcons do not inhabit the project area. Sufficient evidence would be. no sfyhtings over several years of helicopter surveys, by a reputable observer during the proper tira of year. Observers should be individuals who have worked with peregrine falcons . FVS r eview of specific tiges and survey techniques would be approprfa.te. Ue rec~nd the discussion be expanded to describe the area's importance in raptor r:~igratfons as well as for breeding. (ff) Vaterfowl and Other Large Waterbirds: Please provide sage quantification for tergs used here, e.g. 'large' concentrat i ons of waterfowl (paragraph 1); •t ittle used• (paragraph 4), etc. Para~aph 3: We reca.mend you incorporate additional tru.peter swan data Whic is available frc. the F\IS. Please refer to footnotes 12 and 13. Paragraph 4: We agree with the conclusion, however we suggest that data frog FQS annual surveys be included to quantify this st1tement (e.y. see footnotes 12 and 13, as well as Conant and King 1981 and King and Conant 1980 as referenced in this section.). ~at ion: Para~aph 1: We recorutnd refel"encing the specific study( ies.) ~which conclus1ons ;n the CE reference are taken. Please note that trugpeter swans are 110ving through the area fn increasing nUii1bers. Para~aph 3: Please expafn the discrepancy between the statement here that the ~pper Susitna Basin was less igportant to gigratory waterfowl in spring than fall,• with d.ata in Table W62 which shows spring waterfowl densities over twice that of fall densities. 1: Given the previously "Te~s~c~r-Tr-e~"""'"pr~o~~~~~~s~w'ift~r-e~w~e~a...,n~s ;.;c~a~ss~,.c~a~~on used for the project, and reaapping efforts currently underway, please define ~etlands• as used here. we suggest clarifying whether the reference is to 22.5 adult waterf2Wl/k~ and 22.5 adult gulls/km2 or to 22.5 adult (waterfowl and gulls) /k~. Ue question the validity of only cogparing productivity of these wetlands to the most productive wetlands in Alaska. Upper Susitna area waterfowl productivity may be ~re typical of Alaska wetlands fn general and represent average populations and productivity (F\IS Marine Bird Management Project Leader John Trapp, personal comaunication). Paragraph 3: Please clarify how •Importance Values• were calculated; also refer to our cOGaents under Figures W19 and W20 and Table ~3. We sugyest describing any consumptive use of waterfowl wfthfn the project area. ( ff i) Other Birds -Grouse and Ptarwigan: We recommend mentioniny any cons~tive use of these species within the project area. -Woodpeckers and Passerines: We recoaaend providing s01:1e d'fscussion of the importance of the trea to lilfyration, as well as, breeding activities of these birds. -U'per Basin Bird Coamunities: Please refer to our comments under Section 4.2 c) re the neid to identify here how 1981 and 1982 data were combined, given that Kessel et al. (1982) only includes data froQ 1981. Last ParaSf!€aph: P·lease describe how these habitat types do or do not correlate o vegetation types as now being remapped. (d) Non-glliJI (small) Marilals: We appreciate the thorough descript i on ·of the ecolog1cal role of small gamaals in project area ecosystems. (ii) Habitat Use: Ue su~gest updating the discussion to correlate with ongofny vegetatfon and wetlands mappin~ efforts. 4.3 I!!!aCtS (a) Uatana Development ( 1) I.Joose: Paragraph 1: Criteria for concluding that moose is one of the 11110st 1gportant1 species should be provided here. Paragraph 2: We suggest that the proposed evaluation of carrying capacity incorporate consideration of habitat values over the life of the project. Please provide the referenced figure. Con!Sidering the severity of project iapacts by spatial areas to be affected and numbers as in Ballard et at. 1982 (page 106) would fgprove the d1scussion. ue are further concerned with the inadequacy of the fliiPacts deffnftfons fn rot accounting for ililpacts to special concentration areas (e.g. breeding}, fn k•~Y seasons of use (e.g. calving), and under infrequent but critical conditions (e.g. severe winters}, and the overall interspersion and a·vailability of su."h igportant habitat features. P&ragr£eh 3: Lack of quantification prevents analysis of whether an fgpact fs liilr, .ice, three times, etc. as severe as one of lower priority. lJe agah1 recOiililend integrating the an.alysis with that in Chapter 5 re also providing and discussing data on hunting pressure and success here (see our comgents under ~ction 4.Z(a)(f) • ~lortalfty Factors). Please note provision of acct~s __ · __ is a li1&JOr indirect impact; additional developments or settleaent stire~.~latec by this access would b~ a seco.ndary f&~pact. Parafhaph 5: Ue find the discussion entirely too general and inconclusive: (1} ere fs no indication of the relative difference between •sa.~• mose wh fch will disperse, adat)t, die, etc; (2) both overall cuaulatfve igpacts, a 1d secondary igpacts frog ;oose dispersing to adjacent areas are ignored; (3) 1Qpacts on habitat values fra. increasecl use are not cons:fdered; and (4) no explanation fs given for how and when ongoing studies wilY •refine this assess..nt.• -Construction: We are concerned that we have been. given no opportunity to comment on siting and scheduling for camps, townsites, etc. The location and use. of these ancfl tary project features will influence the tillgnftude of ·resu'Jtant iapacts. Alternative spoils sites have not been proposed, yet they· should be part of the discussion. - •. Habitat Loss: Paragraph 1: We recOiililend including a ClOre thorr·ough, quantitative discussion of habitat loss in the text. The necessary integration of vegetation and wildlife .studies should include a discussion of (remapped) vegetation losses relative to their value as liiOose habfta~ i.e. winter range, calving and breeding areas, etc. We also see no quant1ficat1~n of these tosses over the life of the project, f .e. the area of each tYPe which will be lost forever, vs the area which will be lost for sorae length of tira during construction, vs-the areas in different successional stages throughout reclagation. -- Para~aph 2: The paragraph is somewhat inconsistent with the Fishery Sect1on. Given the mitigation proposed in that section of clearing areas just before flooding, successional growth developwent appears negligible (Section 2.4(a)(x) -Clearing the Impoundment Area). Pa-.·agra~h 3: Ongoing S'tudies should be fully described. Please describe when the hall tat use ana lyses wi 11 be reevaluated O¥• the basis of remapped vegetation and forage quality studies. Winter Use: Parb!raph Z: Please clarify the first sentence and fncons istencies tween that sentence and the prev 1ous paragraph. Parair~ 3: It would be helpful to also express the number of moose in the fgpoun nt area as a density and compare that density to areas outside both the impoundLJent and project area. Paragraph 4. We recommend that ongoing studies provide data for quantifying the relative values (quantity and quality) of winter range within and outside the igpoundLJent area. Such infonation is necessary for de"::enilinin~ raitigation requirecents. Sprin~ Use: Paragraph 2: Quantification is needed for the _hab ~tat areas descr bed here. Paragra~h 3: We recOIIIil!nd tying this discussion to project iGipacts on, brown be.ar Wh ch could cogpound the predation problem. Sugger and Fall Use: Paragcaph Z: We are assuming that a heading for 1 -bisturbance 1 was omitted JUSt before this paragraph. Para~aph 4: Since the lillgnitude of project impacts would appear to sign 1carrtly vary, depending on whether hunting and haras~nt of moose are effectively prohibited, we suggest providing •best• and •worse• case scenarios. Those scenarios should be used to quantify potent.ia 1 losses of habitat for cogparing impacts and detenilining .lilitigation needs. Paragraph 5: Please refer to our previous comgents under Sections 4.3(a)(i) AOose and 4.3(a)(i) -Construction • Habitat Loss re the gene.rality of this discussion • • ~~rtality: Please refer to ovr c~nts ~nder Section 4.3(c)(i) • • Alteration of Habitat: We suggest this discussion be dropped as inappropriate and unfoun~~. If this discussion only covers the construction phase of the developraent, then we would assulill there would be no chance for successional growth. Moreover, the suggestion that ~ose could utilize these disturbed areas during construction conflicts with the previous discussions on how disturbance and increased susceptability to predators would cause moose to avoid r.11jor activity centers and large cleared areas. \Je also find the suggestion that borrow pits may provide forage inconsistent with the Fishery Section which proposes to gake fish ponds out of the pits (Section 2.4 (c)(i): Para ra 2, Construction fHtifFtion). Please refer to our previous co..ents un er ction 4.3(a)(i.) -Cons uction, • Habitat Loss re the unlikelihood for forage developaent within the igpoundaent area. AOreover, under • Permanent Loss of Habitat, page E-3-287, 1010ose use of the icpoundriJent area prior to filling is discounted. The need to resolve conflicts between sections of the 4raft application is ~Qply illustrated by the latter two points above. As we have recowmended elsewhere, sage ~anism should be instituted for resolving these types of conflicts and analyz1n9 the tradeoffs of mitigating for one species to the detriaent another. -Filling and Operation Paragra~ 2: We again refer you to our coments under Section 4.3(a)(i) Constru 1on re necessary quantification, study description, and incorporation of study findings fnto the quantificat i on of losses required under FERC regulations {Section 4.41(f)(3){ii) in F.R. Vol. 46, No. 219, 13 November 1981) • • Alteration of Habitat Upper Susitna Basin: We concur with the points raised here. Please refer to our colili1ents under Botanical Resources re the ililpacts of fee fog and rfrae ice forut1on, as to well as need for· quantification. The discussion should also con1sider the effective loss of an even larger area than described here due to dust frOCI project activities "'hich would further retard snO\.Welt (see Sec.tion 3.3(a)(1) -Vegetation Oaaage by Wind and ~ust). Lo~er Susitna Basin: Paragra~tJ 2: Given a mid-successional stage of ap r.r oxfmately ZS years (see. F gure W4) and project life of 50 years -plus ____ - pl4nnin~ and development, we question the conclusion that vegetation favored by QOOSe w111 still be available at the end of the lfcense period. Please refer to our co-..nts under Section 3.3(a)(i) -E'ffects of Altered Downstream Flows re quantifying these and other 151pacts described 1n the reu1nde•· of this section as well as discussing the potential for further alterations of habitat because of fee fog and rfge ice formation • • Blockage of t-~vements: Given the potential for goose to avoid clear cut areas (see discussion under Section 4.3(a)(i) -Construction • Interference with Seasonal ~1ovements, page E-3-286), we suggest aaapp1ng the effective area which could be e11g1nated from use. SoQe discussion should be provided on the likelihood of moose crossing the flowing narrow river as ca.pared to the w1oe impoundQent, plus drawdown zone; .axfQUg and oinigum widths of the impound;ent should be provided. Also refer to our coments under Section 4.3{a)( i) • River Crossings. Inforaation presented here will be 1~portant to later - considerations re choo~fng sites for habitat enhanceaents which .ay be undertaken as part of mitigation. Paragraph 5: Again, please detail ongoing studies • • Disturbance: Once gore, we note the need to ( 1) cons is tent ly assess the potential for increased access and hunting; and (2) integrate consideration of this issue throughout the report. We again suggest 11stiny and analyzing the. 1upacts fr~ alternative access and use options • • Mortality: See comments under • Disturbance, above, the previous discussion for SiCt1on 4.3(a)(1) -Construction, and section 4.2(a)(1) • Mortality Factors. Please define When postulated increases in hunting will occur ·------ relative to project developgent. -Quantification of Project Effects: We appreciate thfs discussion of ongoing studies but note that references to this section should be .ade throughout the report. Once liiOre, we reca.end including a schedule and descrfb1ng how the studies will be incorporated fnto the license application, project desfgn, and Glitigat1on planning. Pleue note, references in t.':"'s section are not included in the bibliography. -watana: Su.aary of Il!acts: The su..ary is a useful, qualitative descrfptfon of project lipacts, yet provides no quantification for gfnimal, moderate, or severe iapacts. The definitions given under Section 4.3 (a)(i) f·toose: Paragra~h 2, should be restated if they are to apply here. To better evaluate the 1 fs 1 coaaon to the discussion, we again suggest analyzing an array of igpact scenarios. Attention should also be given to the cuaulative fgpacts of habitat loss, alteration, disturbances, etc. Ue disagree with the conclusion that •because hunting li10rtality can be easily regulated, this wfll not necessarily be a major igpact.• Because of tho politics involved and independence frog project developgent of hunting regulations, there is no guarantee that regulations consistent with project •itigat1on goals will be igpleranted. Moreover, increasin~ hunter deaands for a d1•inished resource will further affect haa·vests and hunter satisfa.ction. (1i) Caribou -Construction: Paragraph 2: We recaa.nd providing f1yures on the proportion of the her~1Ch could be affected by borrow areas A, D, and F. Althou~ these areas will be only taaporar11y used within the SO year project life, that tegporary use involves several years. ,....;~~~~~~...;;;.;..p;.;.~~~~~ ... 3::.,: Consideration should be ghen to the Para~Taph 7: ije recgggend also consideriny the COQPounding effect of predation on ~aribou which biCOQe injured in crossing the reservoir or which alter their govements due to the presence of the reservoir. Predation was earlier cited as responsible for up to 30 percent of annual adult mortality (Section 4.2(a)(ii)). (iii) Oall Sheep: Paragraph 2: Please clarify the last sentenc~. _ Paragraph 4: Please provide infor~~~tion on when and how seasonal Oall sheep rarl ~es will be defined and used to influence siting and scheduling of possible borrow site c. Paragraph 5: Please document other cases where reaote mineral licks have been altered to r .. in available to wildlife; we are concerned ·with the unproven effectiveness of enlarging the area if partial loss of the Jay Creek li1 'ineral 1 ick affects sheep. Thus there is a need to demonstrate the techiques to ensure that sheep would use the mineral source if one were provided. -Filling and Operation: The potential for disturbance frog increased recreational or hunting use in the area should also be covered here. { iv) Brown Bear -Construction: Parafaaph 5: Please de.scribe the scop! ~l!..d schedule of ongoing studies and pans for inte~ratiny those results into project-designs-- and mitiyat ·:on planning. Parayr{Ph 6: We are concerned that the discussion downpla.ys th.e importance of projec ili1pacts frOiil both disturbance and loss Qf .additional food sources. Original project studiesl!/ and other report~S/ emphasize that disturbance fror.J project features and associated hUIIIn activiti ~es will cause ~ears to avoid those areas. Para~aphs 7 through 9: Two other ili1pacts to vegetative food sources should be a scussid here. Green-up of critical spring food plants may be delayed because construction-caused dust ~ retard snowmelt on vegetation; at the saae tilile, herbaceous growth in sUGar aaay be increased (see the Botanical Resources Section and our comments, Section 3.3(a)(i) -Vegetation Oamag~ Wind and Oust and -Effects of Altered Downstream Flows. Paragraph 12: We question the statement that, •No geasurable changes in the number of li10ose or other important prey species are expected.• Previous lack 14/ t1iller, S.D. and D.C. McAllister. 1982. Susitna Hydroelectric Project Phase. I Fina 1 Report: Big Game, Yo 1. VI -Black Bear and Brown Bear. Prepared by th,e ADF&G for the PI' A. Ji! Speric:~r, O.L. and R.J. Hensel. 1980. Envir,,nraental studies of the proposed Terror Lake Hydroelectric Projec.t, Kodiak Island, Alaska. Brown bear studies; goun~ain goat studies. AEIOC. Anchoraye, Alaska too pp. --------~- of quantification and the ongoing nature ~~ salmon, moose, and caribou studies Qlke 1t difficult to fully assess project imp•cts to brown bear. However, prelicinary indications that up to 2,400 goose will be affected by the project in the upper Susitna basin alone {Section 4.3(a)(1): Paragra~ 4, page E-3-280}, and other report findings that •moose populations w 1 probably be reduced•, (Section 4.3(a)(vi): Parallaph 5, page E-3-312) suggest that there will be both losses and distribution& shifts fn brown bear prey, wfth resultant igpacts to brown bear. Brown bear concentrations on already fully utilized adjacent ranges ~ result in intraspecific conflicts and furthei· decreases fn brown bear populations (Spencer and Hensel 1980, footnote 15). -O~ratfon: Parayra~h 1: Our cocan.ts under-Constr.uction apply here too {Si~1on 4.3(a){1).1ease discuss potential impacts to bears resulting from fapacts to the salmon resource 1n greater detail. Para~aph 2: Also refer to our cocaents under ·Section 4.3(c)(1) re tc~! need to de 1ne access. Paragra~h 5: Please see our comgents two paragraphs above (Section 4.3(a)(iv) -Opera ion) on the need to better eval ua.te the fgportance of sa lliiOn to area bears. Overall, we note the need to quantify impacts and discuss the cumulative effects of project igpacts on brown bears. (v) Black bears -Construct fon: Paragraph 1: As in our c0111111nts under brown bears, above (Section 4.3(a)(1v)}, we suggest that greater attention be given to fgpacts of reduced ,prey, compounded here by the significant loss of black bear habitat with the Watana development. Paragr%2 2: We question the ability of habitats to the east and west of the 1mpoun nt area to support bears now inhabiting the iapoundQent areas. If those areas are already fully stocked with black bears, resultant intraspecific strife and stress would ultigately lead to lower populations. Para~a~h 3: We again refer you to our comments under brown bear (Section 4.3(a( v)). Please describe ongoing studies and their integration with project design and mitigation. (vi) Wolf: Paragra¥h 3: Please refer to our c~nts under Section 4.3(a){x11) re fheikelfhood for wolf populations to decrease and coyote populations to increase in the project area. Last Paragraph: Given the increased access expected with project developiOM!nt, an increased wolf harvest appears likely. ~e reCOIIQind tha.t a quantification of project impacts should consider the effects of a.n increased harvest on wolf popula,tion leveh. The clt!JiiJlative impacts of (1) wolves concentrated in a s~aller area due to distu_rbance, (2 ) effects on territoriality and stress, (3) relat ive values of igpacted as compared to reaaining habitats, and (4) red:Jction in pr.:y, should als.o be considered here. (i x) Beaver : ~· question the certainty of the statagents here, given the undecided nature of the projec:t water anag .. nt regi•. If reservoir re l eases are regulated to stabilize downstre111 flows, downstrea& beaver habitats •Y be enh&nced. However, the extent to ..mfch that enhancaant w111 offset beaver losses in the upper Sus1tna River basin is not provided. SuCh data fs necessary to evaluate the relative tradeoff 1n altern1the flow regimes (f.e., for beaver, fish, moose, etc.) and thus the overall magnitude of project ililpacts. -Construction: We reca.mend that the location of beaver colonies be considered, in conjunction with other wildlife values, in siti'i •g borrow area access roads. -Ffllfny and ~ration: Parasras:.l: Please quantify •few beavers• currently suppor id by the igpoun nt area. · Para$<Tara 4: Refer to our cOCIIilents under Section 4.3(a)(ix), above; we recoaae~ using hydrologic data in conjunction with th& revised vegetation ~ps and vegetation succession dynamics to quantify the areas which may be affected under different flow regir~s. We find soQI inconsistency between the stateaent here that, •Beaver habitat south of Talkeetna may also be enhanced as a res,u lt of the increased occurrence of favored food plants (page E-3-316),• and the statement in Section 4.3(a)(1) that, •few changes are expected in channel morphology, frequency of flood i ng, or vegetational succession• (page E-3-289, paragraph 1). Paragr-aph 5: During the August 1982 W Workshop on the Susttna project, access w&s considered as much of a li•ittng factor to trapping pressure as was pelt price. This section justifies our mitiga,t1on recoaaendations under Section 4.4(b) for alternate access routing, restrictions on use of access routes, and prohibition of trapp1ny by construction workers. (x) Muskrat: Parayra~h 1: We find no section correlating to the referenced section 3.3(a)(1x). tease define ••inor• impacts. Parayraph 2: Please refer to our previous c01a•nts on quan t ifying igprov .. nts in downstreu habitats under Section 4.3(fx). Accordingly, we question the contention that, •Improved downstreag habitat wtll probably c011pensate for this loss.• Paragra~h 4: Again, refer to our ca.ments under Section 4.3(ix), re ~1t1gat on of ~rapping igpacts . (x1) ~ink and Otter -~stream Effects: We recomaend defining •moderatel y abundant• and •s stant1a1 igpacts. • Other than lack 1ng quantification, the di'scussion thoroughly describes potential project icapacts to min~ and otter. Please s l eri(y the rrtrrens· tg .,,,. 1p eer•er•ph 32 • Oownstre.a Effects: We suggest the discussion be expanded to better explain the relative r.aagnitude of project irapacts to lilfnk and otter. Sfnce there was no previous quantification of those populations, we find it difficult to evaluate the significance of these i~acts. (xii) Red Fox and Colate: Where hUiilln activities have developed in a previously undisturb area, coyotes have become abundant while fox nUibers have decreased (Furbearer StudY Coordinator Phil G1psan, personal cCXIilunication). For exa~~ple, fn the Cantwell ·to Healy corridor there has been 1 a.rked increase in coyotes with increasing nUIDers of people and area developments. Researchers believe there has been a corresponding decrease fn both fox and wolf n.eers, although both those species pass through the area from undisturbed hlbft&ts fn the adjacent Denali National Park. Per our c~nts on other furbearers, quantification of relative area populations, habitat quality, and trapper d.-and and harvest is necessary to fully evaluate project flilplcts. (xiif) Other Furbearers: Again, quantification is needed re base line populations, hibitat qua tfty, and use, in order to ful' ly evaluate project ir.ap&Ct$. Para~aph 3: ~'.!te should be rade of the previous year·s' trapping activity whfc ~ay be responsible for low trapping success of pine rarten near Wat.ana Creek (Furbearer Study Coordinator Phfl Gipson, personal COIID.Inication). Par&!fr&Kh 4: We suggest considering additional paraaeters for evaluating pfne rarten ib1tat quality (e.g. the. av·aillbil1ty of berries fs f11portant as la.te sugper/fall food) fn conjunction with re.apped vegetation types to reevaluate i&~pact estimtes • . Paragr~h 6: Lie question the extent to which snowshoe hare habitat. IDlY be igprov by revegetation of disturbed areas, given the auch larger ~unt of habit1t which will be destroyed by the project and h1storically low hare populations in the. basin. Paras;:aph 8 : No correlation fs ude between •r.JOderate• levels of disturbance fro. ogg1ng and diff erent levels of dfsturbance from the project re the applfcabflity of these references to project f11pac:ts. (xfv) Raptors and Raven • Habitat Loss: Parasuaphs 2 and 5: Please refer to our comaents under section 4.3(a}(xiv} • 1sfur6Jnce, below concerning the takfng of eagle nests. Para~aph 4: In order to understand the relative magnitude of project igpa~s. we recoaaend discussing the estigated loss of golden eagles in terms of project area populations and habitat values. Parafaaph 5: Please clarify the statment that potential downstream nesting hi61 ats aay becoge gore 1gportant as upstreag h bitats are lost wi th project development. Uhether downstrellil habit:sts are t J 1iy ut 1lized, their value compared to upper basin habitats, and potential disturbances froa other project activities should be described. Para~aph 9: Please clarify whether downstre151 raven habitats could absorb use y ravens displaced frog upstreag habitats. Para~raph 10: The blowdown of trees near cleared areas represents an iddi ional source of habitat loss (e.g. see Section 3.3(a)(i) -Vegetation Daaage by Wind and Dust). 3: We recOIIilend desa i b 1 ng the over& 11 illlp&cts of ~e=.;.pr.;;.o~e~;.:;;o.;.n_s..;.a-.I:IO~n~an~~other fish wn ich serve as bald eagle food. Such consideration should include potential i.,acts to s-elt runs near the aouth of the Susitna River. Any impacts to these resources could affect eagles nov depending on thea as food. ~&ph 4: We question the significance of any ca.pensat1on for lost eagle Tiidlng-nib1tat through attraction of waterfowl to the impoundgent. Please quantify the potential for such coapensation and/or provide an explanation of why waterfowl aay be attracted to the reservoir without a concogftant inaease fn their food sources (also see our c01aent under Section 4.3(a)(xv) . ~aterbirds, below). -Disturbance: Paragraph 1: We appreciate the description of protection affordid eagles under the Bald Eagle Protection Act (16 U.S.C. 668-668c). ·However we are concerned that the intent of this act relative to project design has not been adequately acknowledged or incorporated, as explained below. - Para¥riaph 6: Under a recent ar.Jendment to the Bald Eagle Act, the Secretary of the nterfor ~Y pergit the taking of golden eagle nests which interfere with resource c11velopaent or reco~ery operations (16 u.s.c. 668a). Regulations for implegenting this agendment should be available within the next couple of GaOnths. Paragraph 7: The Bald Eagle Protection Act does not authorize the taking of bald eagle nests whfch interfere with resource developaent or recovery operations. The Act does prov ·ide for the taking of nests for scientific and certain specific exhibition purposes when compatible with the preservation of this species. Service eagle pergit regulations, 50 C.F.R. 22.21, implement this section of the Act. Secretarial approval 1s not required for the taking of bald eagle nests in Alaska provided no eagles are killed and the nest fs not exported froa the United States. Autl'IOI"ity to take sudt nests has been delegated to the FWS Regional Director. Ue suggest that the applicant prCiilptly consult with the M to reach a •tually satisfactory solution to this potential conflict. (xv) ~at•rbirds Para a 2: Please substantiate that •fish ~po~p~u~ar-r.:o~n~s""':-w~~p~r~or-="l:~y~r~s~M~n~sufficient• to support birds such as meryansers. According to l~ting Summary notes frog the 2 December 1982, Susitna Hydro Exhibit E Workshop on water Use and Quality and Fishery Resources, liiOSt of the grayling population (estiuted to be at least 10,000 in Section 2.3(a)(1i) -~tana Reservoir Inundation) wilt be lost and any production of lake trout fs expecte1 to be 1i~ited. Paragraph 3: ue suggest quantifying the nu.ber of lakes, mi1es of stre~s, and acres of wetlands (per revised wetlands typing) whfch may be affected by project borrow areas, spoils sites, etc., as well as those which will be cocapletely lost. ~e reca.end including those habitat typel 1n Table W78a. This 1nforQition will allow better quantification of project igpacts. Paragra~ 4: Please substantiate further the value of the reservoir as hibttat or afgrating birds. Sfnce existing resident fish populations are expected to be severely f~cted by reservoir developgent and no biolo~~cally productive neai·$hore zone will be developed, we question that there would be food necessary to support birds attract4d to the reservoir. ~oreover, winter open water areas could attract waterbirds to their detriment, particularly since food supplies are already limited. Swans attracted to open water at Red Rodes Lake Nat1ona 1 Wildlife Re.fuge fn Montana wst now be fed during winter·; similar problegs have occurred in other areas of the conterginus United States (F\lS Migratory Bird f·lanager.nt Project leader Rod King, prsonal cOIIIIUn i cat ion ) • -~isturbance: Paragraph Z: We suggest that greater lllphasis be placed on the potential for the project to disturb trumpeter swans. Recent increases and overstocking of swans in the Gulkana Basin lillY result in li1Dre swans IIIDVing into the upper Susitna Basin (FWS f.Ugratory Bird ~lanagelilent Leader Rod King, personal COIIi'IJn~':ation). Yet those habitats wilT become less suitable with the huun actfvfties and disturbances cause by the projec.t. As areas in the Cook Inlet Basin and Kenai Peninsula have been affected by huraan use and ~:v:~~~J!;swan use of those areas has shifted to areas larg~ly inaccessible (xvi) Other Birds -Construction • Habitat Loss: We appreciate the thorough, quantitative discussion included here • • Habitat Alteration: We sug9est that species and their relative abundance be correlated to the postulated negative and positive ef·fects of habitat alteration. Thfs would provide sa. indication of net project 111Pacts. toss to the Uatana igpoundment of existing natural edge, e.g. rivers, ridgetops, etc., will undoubtedly be far greater than the increases in edge suggested here. -O~at1on: We question whether any feeding habitat for spring migrant shor1rds will be created in the drawdown zone. The reservoir drawdown zone will remain an unvegetated gudflat. If current low bird populations indicate lack. of hfyh quality habitat, it stills doubtful that food organisms would suddenly proliferate with reservoir developgent. 16/ King, J.G. and B. Conant. 1981. The 1980 census of trumpeter swans on Alaskan nesting habitats. Agerican Birds 35(5): 789-793. ( xvii) r4on-g~~t~e (saa 11) Malza 1s: For Sill 11 e~~~:~~~~l species wh fch inhab ft 1dent1t1able vegetat1on types, we suggest describfny whether the percent of the habitat to be lost fs proportionately ~eater or less than the occurrence of the type within the entire basin. (b) Dev i 1 Canyon De vel opg !! (f) Moose: Converting the nUiber of goose in the Devil Canyon fapoundGent to .-ainiltY figure and then ca.paring that to a si11ilar figure for ~~~ Watana f~oundment ~uld allow a better qua~titatfve ca.parison of impacts. ~ are concerned w1th the judgeaental nature of the discussion in stating that i~~pacts •are of less concern• and suggest that, -will be of SMller •gnitude• might fgprove the stateaent (pge E-3-338). The sgaller area of the Devil Canyon as c011pared to watana, area should also be •ntfoned, although we do note 1:1\at riJOOse density here is about half that of the W&tana area. An evaluation of relative habitat values of the adjacent areas which will be less directly 1Qpacted, and any lands proposed for acquisition or enhanc-nt, 1s necessary for a complete f~~pact and llftfgatfo·n anaysis. -Construction: Again, spoils disposal is an additional f~~p~ct which should be descr ibid • • Habitat Loss: Our eo;aents under this heading (Section 4.3(a)(i)), for the Watana development also apply here • • Interference with Movements: The discussion should consider whether a 1.6 ki crossing would also be a barrier to CIDo .se in that area or li10ose diverted frOII upstreua crossings because, of the Watana iiiiPoundlilent. Quantfffcat ion should also be provided of the additional distances which •ight have to be trlveled and consideration given to additional energy expenditures relative to foraye quality should .aose alter their mov ... nt patterns. Also refer to our coggents under this heading, Section 4.3{a)(f), for the Watana developgent • • Disturbance: Please refer to our comments under this heading, Sect i on 4.3(a}(1), f~r the Wlt &na development. -f.1ortalfty: As above, our previous cOiilillnts under Section 4 .z (a)( i) • MOrality Factors; 4.3(a)(f) -~flling and Operation, • Disturbance; and 4.3(c}(i) -MOrtality apply. -Fflltnv and Operation • Alteration of Habitat: Please refer to our c011ents under this heading, section 4.3(a)(1), for the Watana development. ~e are concerned that increased water te.perature could result fn a larger area being affected by fee fog and rfge ice formation, also see our coaaents ynder Section 3.3(a}(f). We again reca.aend quantifying several impact scenarios re successional vegetation ~1nges fro. any of the f~acts discussed here • • Interference with r~vements: By reducing browse availability due to r;~ ice formation, the presence of fee fog could be a compounding impact to moose. Moose ;oveaents .. Y already be fnhfbfted because of greater visual exposure to predator~ fn tht vicinity of the reservoir. Ue refer yoa to our cOWDents nt·z et· "·tan ts: nh • '& 01 1 " )(¥ PtZ' I I a 2 2 • Disturbance: Again, our comgents for ~atana (Section 4.3(a)(i)) apply • • f·1ortality: Please refer to our previous coCJJents on hunting (Sect i on 4.Z(a)(1) • nortality Factors, and Disturbance and f4ortalfty discussions under Section 4.J(a)(i)) • • Devil Canyon: SUio&lary of Ii¥acts: As we cOI:IiJe.Jted on the ~atana impacts sugmary, quantification and b~ter definition of impacts 1s needed here. Ue are also concerned about inattention to cuaulative impacts. While habitat alterations, disturbance, or blockage of movegents m&Y each be a •minimal• i1e1pact, together they -.y be sufficient to severely stress nmose or reduce. moose use of the project and adjacent areas. i f ) Caribou: Oe.ffnitions for the qualitative terms used here should be prov e.g. •Tittle use•). (iv) Brown Bears: Lack uf quantificati·on here, as in Section 4.3(a)(iv) preclUdes evaluating even relative impacts frOD each aajor project feature. (v) Black Bears: As in Section 4.3(b)(1v) above, lack of quantification prevents a thorough analysis. Consideration should be given to the c~lative effects of disturbances, loss of habitat, decrease in habitat value, and increased gortalfty frog hugan/bear conflicts from the Devil Canyon developgent in conjunction with the ~atana development. lvi) Wolf: Please refer to our comaents under Section 4.3(a)(vi) re the mportance of disturbance and cumulative fli1pacts. (ix) Beaver: Refer to our COiilments under Section 4.3(a)(ix) re the need to quantify the amount and quality of downstream habitat fgpr~vegents which could offset upstre111 hab-itat losses and the dependence of any habitat improve.ent on the operating flow regime. We s 'Jgest describ iny impacts under a variety of potential flow regimes. (x) ~~skrat: Please refer to our previous comments under Sections 4.2(b)(1i) and 4.3(a)(ix) -Fi11in¥rand Operation re quantifying and controlling petential increases fn apping. (xi) Mink and Otter: Again, we recomaend providing soae quantification, de¥1n1t1on, or relative correlation uong species and project areas for the qualitative impact descriptions. (vii) Coyote and Red Fox.: We would expect an increase in coyo.tes per our previous cogments (Section 4 .3(a)(xii)). (xiii) Other Terrestrial Furbearers: Our coaaents under Section 4.3(a)(xi11) apply here too. {xiv) R~ptors and Ravens -Construction and Filling • Habitat Loss: Paragraph 1: Refer to our comments under Section 4.3(a)(xiv) -Disturbance. Paragra~h 2: Should any eagle build a nest, between now and filling of revfl Canyoneservoir, which would subse,quently be lost in construct i on and/or · filling of Devil Canyon, please refer to our comaents under Section 4.3(a)(x1v) -Disturbance. Paragraph 3: Please clar,ify what is meant by the first' sentence. Para~a~n 4 : Please refer to our comments under Sect fon 4.2(c)(i) re the diff\Cu ties fn locating goshawk nests. Paragraph 5: Please clarify the d fscussion and consider whether the clfffs and trees Which ray increase i n nesting i111portance are as suitable as ufst'fng nest habitats • • Disturbance: Paragra'h 1: Again, please refer to our colilillnts under Section 4.3(a)(xiv) - D sturbance. Paragra~h 2: See our c0111i1ents under Se.ction 4.3 (b) (xiv) this section, ~abitat Loss: arayy:aph 2, above. (xv) Waterbirds: Please refer to our' cOGIIIents under Section 4.3(a)(~v) as to the questionable value of the reservoir area, f .e . yenerally birds wiTT not appear in the ar-ea any earlier; birds which remain in the area longer ~Y have problegs fi nding food when encountering frozen waterbod1es once they do leave; no data has been provided re any supplemental food value in the reservoir area. (xvi) Other Birds: Paragraph 2: Please clarify the last sentence . Paragraph 3: Please quantify the extent to which open water in the rt!sm-voir will c011p1nsate for Toss of dipper breeding habitat· and describe what fet!dfng habitat would be avaflable in the rese-rvoir. ( xv fi ) r~on-gue ( Slill11 ) Mali1a 1 s: P 1 ease refer to our caa.ents under Sect 1 on 4 .J (a}( XV i) • (c) Access (1) r-toose: The qualftative, general clfscussion precludes any definitive analysis of potential impacts. We suggest quantifying current and potent i al hunter demand and harvests, area lilOose populations and habitat quality for access route areas. Varying deyrees of winter severity and the length of each access link should then be considered in conjunction w ~th the inforgation described above and data on vehicle/goose collisions i n other areas of the state to assess the potential for railroad or autogobile collisions with aa~se. Since access is a key feature to any •itigation plan for the project, we agtin recomcend evaluating the range of iQpacts which would result froa a variety of access/use options and coordinating this with the Socioeconogics and Recreation Chapters. Please refer to our 17 Augus t 1982 l etter to Eric You ~d re access alternatives; our coL~nts there remain appl1cable. Please correct internal inconsistencies in this paragraph: loss and alteration of habitat, disturbance, and cortality are certain, not •possible•, impacts as verified in subsequent portions of this section (page E-3-350). naps of proposed access routes should also be included. -r~rtality: Paragraph 2: Before discussing impacts from access, please specify any public access and hunter take restrictions assURed to be in effect for planning, construction, and operation phases of the project. Impacts will vary from severe with no restrictions to miniaal with strong restrictions on access. In this respect, we find Chapter 3 confusing. The potential i.,acts frog pubiic access and huntiny along project access routes are discussed here and then the suggestion is gade that these i.,acts will be minimized by prohibitin5 worker access and hunting, yet the chapter never consistently describes what restrictions actually will apply. Project igpacts, such as h~itat degradation and population disturbance associated with increased access, could be further minigized by controlling public access {through restrictions on ORVs, seasons or times of day of use, etc.). Please substantiate the conclusion here that •carefully aanaged hunting may effectively Gitigate for some indirect project effects.• ~e iapact of diminished hunter opportunities is not fully described here or 1n Chapter 5 (see our comments there, Section 3.7{b)(ii) -Impacts on the Hunter). Paragra~ 4: Please define use of the terms •small• and •negligible.• During severe winters, moose may seek cleared roadways as travel corridors and be subject to collisions. Since the Denali Highway is not kept open during the winter, it is not possible to fully compare the collisions on that road with the potential for collisions on project access roads. However, we suggest that a better understanding of the subject could be gained with information as described under Section 4.3(c)(i), above. Ue also note that if workers are allowed to commute to the project site or have free access in and out of the project area, the volumes of road traffic would be significantly higher. The analysis should be coordinated w1th that in Chapter 5. Consideration should be given to the times of year and day for recorded collisions and utilized in scheduling access if patterns exist in that inforgation. Parayra:a 5: Please describe current railroad use as compared with the project idditional aight round train trips each week. We believe that project railroad use QlY be a significant impacts to wildlife in view of present winter use of four round trips each week. The length of additional track, as well as existing track, should also be yiven for comparison with the mortality fiyures given here. Information on uoose densities and habitat values in the area of the new as cogpared to existing railroad would also be helpful in quantifying potential impacts, as described above. Ue are concerned that in severe winters the loss of winter range gay be co~pounded by the potential for nuaerous vehicle/moose collisions • • Loss of Habitat: Ue concur with the analysis but suggest soge quantification be made of areas and vegetation types which could become unuseable in a worst case scenario where disturbance causes goose to avoid usin~ the road corridor area • • Interference with Seasonal t~vegents: With respect to the seasonal gfgratfons descr1bid heTe, please refer to our· CCDlents under Section 4. 3 (c) ( i ) -r.Jorta 11 t~, re the cggpounded potentia 1 for even greater nUii1bers of vehicle/AOose collfs1ons. (ii) C•ribou: Para a 1: We reiter•~• ~ur recoa;end&tion to eliQinate the Denall way o a na access route (also se~ Section 3.4(c)(ii)) which, as documented here, is •likely to have a substantial effect on caribou QOVeGents.• P·aragr9Kh 6: Please provide substantiating data for the juds-nt that althou cows calving in the area .ay avoid the road, there will not be an effect on herd productivity. \le recOGID&nd quantifying the portion of the herd vtilizing this area. Para~aph 7: Please prov·ide further infonation on tiEs of day or seasonal va.rfafons expected for truck traffic. An additfona 1 concern fn considering the potential severity of access-related impacts is the question of wor~er access. If project workers are all housed on site, the intensity of road ~se will still be greater than described here; workers traveling to and from the site at the beginning and end of their times off represent a subs.tantial road, or even airstrip, use. Moreover, if workers are allowed to individually coGJDute, or even if buses are used on a daily or weekly bas is, road use will be even gore sfgn1ficant. Para~aeh 9: Our previous coggents on herd manageCJent apply (Section 4.2(~(11)). \le recoamend quantifying 1gpacts described throughout this section. (iii} Oall Sheep: Paragraph 1: The issue of disturbance frog air access to the project should be covered here; as described in Section 4.3(a)(1i1). Please provide infonoaation on the expected intensity of aircraft use for the period of construction. Para~a~ Z: Consideration should be given to increased recreation and other activ t es which li1IY cogpound habitat loss iapacts near the critical Jay Creek ~;~ineral lfck. Please restate those igpacts as described in Section 4.3 (a}( iii). ( iv) Brown Bears: We concur with the a.ssessgent but recoaaend that quantification of igpacts be provided. (vi) Wolf: Our previous coaaents under Section 4.J(a}(v1) apply. (vii) Uolverine: Paragra~h 2: 1uantifiC6"ion of trapping effort and potential increases relative to wo verine populations should be given. Please justify the inference that egigration from other areas will ~itigate for ioss of wolverfne to trappers yet not affect overall populations. (viii} Furbearers: In general, we find the discussion soaewhat inconsistent with other sections, with no clear objectives outlined for ~itigation (see parayraphs 2,8, and 9 of this section}. Please also refer to our coagents on the socioeconomics (Chapter 5, Section 3.7(c}(i) -Impacts of the Proiect} and our recomgendations under the wildlife mitigation plan (section 4. (b)). ~e recommend you then ensure these sections are consistent with each other and with overall project objectives and mitigation goals. Specific coaments follow. Paragraph 1: Please provide further data to substantiate the conclusion that pine lillrten ho.a ranges ray b8(0iill realigned along the access roa.d. Although we appreciate the thorough discussion of potential projec.t iiiPacts, we are concerned that repeated lack of quantification makes if difficult to assess the re 1 at 1ve i111portance of such •minor• i111pacts as compared to the 1110re severe iQpacts of direct habitat losses i!ind increased trapping 1:10rta lfty. Paragraph 5: The welt-docu.ented likelihood of beavers using bridges and culverts for dusites G10re probably represents further negative impacts to beaver than a source of habitat improvement. Beaver use of those structures would conflict with project access, undoubtedly resulting in road maintenance to ree10ve. beaver dams. If that reooval occurs at the wrong time of year, i.e. autur.m, beaver in the area J'ii&Y be effectively eliminated (Furbearer Study Coordinator Phil Gipson, personal comgunication). Paragraph 9: ~e are concerned with use of the word •desirable.• Thus we . suggest modifyiny the last sentence to say that to date, trapping pressure on mink and otter has been low in this part of Alaska (Furbearer Study Coordinator Phil Gipson, personal communication). (ix) Raptors and Ravens -Denali Highway to Watana Damsite: Paragraph 1: We recomaend describing how this area was surveyed. Parayaaph 2: Our comgents under Section 4.3(a)(xiv) -Disturbance would apply shou golden eagles subsequently nest along the access road. Par,\gra~h 3: Refer to our coaaents under Section 4.3(a) (xiv) -Disturbances re the 11 ega 11 ty of destroy i ug a ba 1 d eag 1 e nest. -Watana Dam Site to Devil Canyon Dam Site • Disturbance: We again refer to you to our comgents under Section 4.3(a)(xiv} -Disturbance. -Devil Canyon Dam Sfte to Gold Creek • Disturbance: We recoGDend that the conclusions of minir.1al disturbance· here, be con~istent with those in Table W76 which says that •construction and operation activities r.liY result in considerable disturbances.• If the nest is active, we will recor.waend tiJ:Jing constraints on the construction activities near it (see Section 4.4(c)(i)). (d ) TransCJission Lines As with the previous Section 4,.3, (c) Access, the severity of 1~acts froa the transmission Tines will depend on restrictions on access (e.g. by siting, access to the lines, and/or access along the lines) as well as the gethods of construction and .aintenance (e.g. helicopter, winter, and/or onground). Please clarify what methods and schedule for construction and maintenance will be utilized and what restrictions, if any will be placed on access; we find the Exhibit E inconsistent on these points. The reference here is to helicopter and winter construction and only selective clearing of vegetation; in Chapter 5, reference is made to increased hunter access along the lines which infer greater clearing and road access (Section 3.7 (c)( 1) • Impacts of the Protect). Increased snowmobile and ORV access and their - disturbance atonghe tran~1ssion corridors should also be addressed here. Our COiiliJents under (Section 4.3(c)) Access on the need to quantify expected additional harvests also apply here. Please refer to our trans•ission corridor cougents under Botanical Resources, Sections 3 .3(d) and 3.4(d). We refer you to our 5 Jan~ary 1982 revf~ tetter on the 9 Noveaber 1981 Transgissfon Corridor Report. Our coggents there reaain applicable. In particular, we recoamend incorporating into project plans: (1) an-y-round evaluations with representatives of the FWS, ADF&G, and the Alaska Plant Materials Center regarding the appropriate managegent along various lengths of the transe~ission lines (e.g. the extent of clearing, maintenance, possib 1 e seeding. etc. should depend on the wildlife species of concern and vegetation types present; (2} coordinated access to the transGJis ,sion lines with access to other project facilities; (3) controls on public access to the transmission lines during and post-construction to reduce habitat degradation and population disturbances; and (4) controls on access along the length of the lines. We would appreciate your response where project plans QIY be in conflict with either these points or the five specific rec0Gii1endations in our January let.ter. ~e are concerned with the generality and lack of quantification of this section. Using the vegetation reupping, a successional •del should be applied; the selective clear·ing and 1i111ntenance to be used along the transmission lines should be factored fnto that model. Areas within each type to be ililpacted and vegetation type changes over the project life can then be calculated. ~~ps of the proposed tran~ission line corridors should also be provided. lj) Bf!.t Game -Coo~ Inlet to ~i1 1 ow: Paragraph 1: Again, the degree of impact will depend on-tn~ type of clearing and gaintenance and thus, habitat alterations which result. ~e have recommended selective clearing, winter and helicopter construction and Qlintenance and controlled access along the line. ~~intenance should involve selective clearing and topping of trees and tall shrubs to help ~aintain increased forage production .. Ue agree that transe~ission line clearing ray· increase goose and black bear carrying c'pacf ties if vegetation types which can be enhanced are present along the line. Thus we recoagend quantifying the types present and their value to big gar.~e. Paraeeaph z: Please describe the presence or absence of c:oose calving grounds and ear dennfng sites. The CWiNlative fgpacts of the tranSiilissfon lines in conjunction with existing disturbances should be discussed. -Healy to Fairbanks: Again, quantification of types to be impacted and successional Changes over the project life should be provided. -~illow to Healy: Please refer to our 5 January 1982 letter regarding the dependence of the Susitna project on the Intertie. Thus, we recogmend full consideration of impacts from the Intertfe within this analysis. Quantification of impacts is needed, as above. -~atana Dag to the Intertie: Please provide a quantification of impacts,, as ibove. (ii) Furbearers: Parar;aph 3: Please refer to our comaents under Section 4.3(c)(v11i) re fncons~tenciel be · ~een Chapters 3 and 5 in presenting impacts. ~e are also concerned with inconsistencies between the increased access acknowledged here and ~:~itiga.tion guidelines to prohibit such access (Appendix EE, iteGI 1); please clarify. Our previous recOGmendations to quantify impacts apply here too. (iff) Birds: Paragraph 1: ~e recogmend providing references for the broad conclusion that species diversity aay increase near the transmission lines. Removal of nest and forage trees will decrease available habitat for species such as pine grosbeak and boreal chickadee. Parag}a~h 2: We concur. Please also refer to our caggents under Section 4.2(c ( ) re continuing peregrine falcon surveys. Parawra~h 4: Powerlines are particularly deadly to swans.16/ However, r~rta11 y frog collisions, not electrocution, is the gajor adverse impact to swans. Locating and marking lines is the key to mini~fzing that igpact (see our co~Jents under Section 4.4(c). We recor.EJend expanding this discussion to describe: (1} the potential for swan collisions; (2) mi~Tatfons of sw·ans throuyh the project area; and (3) swan use of rer.10te lakes, including those 1n the natanuska-Susitna Valley, for nesting and rearing. Refer also to our c011:1ents on increasing developments and disturbances which have caused swans to abandon areas, Section 4.3(a}(xv) -Disturbance, and our 5 January 1982 letter to Eric Yould, as above. (e) Iepact Sugmary We are concerned with the emphasis of this suaar·y on impacts which can be most easily mitigated. Consideration should also be given to documenting unavoidable, adverse iQpacts, cumulative project impacts, and differences between long v~rsus short-term impacts. The uncertainty if predicting proJect 1r.rpacts on the basis of existing inforaation are clearly apparent here. 18/ Avery, H.E., P.F. Springer, and n.s. Dailey ~ 1980. Avian mortality at man-made structures: an annotated bibliography (revised). U.S. Departcent of the Interior, FWS/OBS-80/54. Paragra~ z: We c~ncur that increased human use 1s positive, but the habitat alterat on and disturbance which may also result from increased access are often a significant negative igpact to wildlife populations. There is a need to integrate this discussion with those in the Socioeconogic and Recreation Chapters of the Exhibit. Para~a¥h 3: We recoggend also considering habitat values and how they relate tow a ife populations over the life of the project. ( i) Big Game: Paragraph 1: As above, the increased access afforded to hunters 1s GlOre of a concern from the standpoint of resultant population disturbances and habitat alterations; assuming that harvest is regulated to protect population levels. Paragra~ 3: We are concerned with the subjectivity of the first sentence here. ease provide quantitative data for cogparison with the previous paragraph to justify the relative magnitude of project igpacts. Mention should also be made that project impacts will be particularly critical during years of severe winter. During such years., an additional igpact to be considered would be goose/vehicle collisions. Cuaulative igpacts are also of concern with moose. Parayraph 4: Inability to predict major iLJpact on caribou, as cited here, is a ser1ous data gap. Ue recowmend describing additional inforgation to be gathered to help ~:~~ke such predictions . Best and worst case irJpact scenarios should be described to provide at least an indication of ~~w caribou could suffer frog increased disturbance, impacts near calvin~ areas, and alterations in seasonal mov~nts. Paragraph 6: Again, cuwlative igpacts are a concern in evlluatin9 overall project impacts to both brown and black bear. Para~a~h 7: Disturbance from increased access and the presence of hucan activt es should be the more direct concern here (please see our cor.nents und~ Section 4.3(a)(vi)). {ii) Furbearers: Paragraph 1: We again note the potential for red fox populations to decrease as coyote populations increase {please see our cOiiiDints under Section 4.3(a)(xiii). Parafoaph z: We suggest clarifying these conclusions to be consistent with prev ous impact descriptions, e.g. Section 4.3(a)(ix), paragraph 1, page E-3-315, says beaver populations are likely to increase, this paragraph says they •may increase,• downstreag (page E-3-371). Ue again reco~nd describing the water management regiges under which furbearer populations will ~st likel y benef ·it. Overa 11, we are concerned with the uncertainties expressed in this discussion and re.coGJJend that additional furbearer work to satisfy these uncertainties be considered (e.g. we suggest focusing on beaver and pine marten per our co~nts under Section 4.4(b)). Since i~pacts to valuable habitat in the vicinity of Deadman Creek can be mitigated, .by alternative road siting, they should .be described here. (iii} Birds: ~e recoggend also describing the negative impacts from swan collisions and raptor electroc\ltion with transril1ssion line developsaent. Similarly, disturbance to nestiny swans and raptors is another negative impact which should influence aitigatfon planning. 4.4 ~1itigation Plan: As was the mitfgat,ion plan for Botanical Resources, we find the aitigation plan for wildlife incomplete and too general. Our detailed colii:Jents on lack of quantification, lack of integration with other resources evaluated, and need to consider the full range of mitigation options possible should be considered he·re as well (see Section 3.4). Because the wildlife analysis is much more qualitative than quantitative, we commonly found the egphasfs on minor iapacts rather than on uajor ones. A sic1ilar 1t1iseaphasis is fn the gitigation plan, where attention is often focused on small, gore easily mitigated impacts. Alternatively, severe impacts are left to undefined and uncertain gitigation measures such as later habitat enhance;ent and/or lana~ acquisition. Please refer to our earlier comments on the need to clarify overall project mitigation objectives (Section 4.1). This section should clearly explain why ~itigation measures already recOGaended by FWS and other resource agencies have not been adopted. For example, neyative impacts to wildlife from the Denali Highway to Uatana developGent access route are consistently docugented throughout the report: the road will result 1n substantial disturbanc e~; the Deadman Creek area paralleling the road is particularly igportant habitat to nUQirous wildlife species (e .• g. calviny GJOose, Section 4.2(a)(i}-Distribution. S~ecial Use Areas: Calvin ~reas: Para a h 2; brown bear denning, section 4. {a) (1v) - ons uc on: aragrap ; car ou govegents, Section 4.3(c)(ii}; wolf dennfng, section 4.3 (c){vf); valuable beaver habitat, Section 4.3(c}{viii}; bald eagle nesting, Section 4.3 (c)( ix), etc.). f·litigation of these ir.1pacts can be effectively accomplished by completely avoiding the impact, that is, alternative siting as recommended in our 17 August 1982 letter to Eric Yould and further detailed in our comments on t:he Botanical Resources &litigation plan, Section 3.4(c}{ii). We also request that you (1) confirm the inclusion of recor.~:~ended r.~easures in project design, and (2) clarify the extent of public access and uses in the project area throughout planning, construction, and operation of the project. For example., please specify the extent to which the environmental guidelines in Appendices EA to £E have and will be guaranteed in project design and operation. Establish~ae·nt of a raonitoring and follow-up program for all phases of project construction and operation is an essential feature of the mitigation plan.. Key couponents of this progr1r.1 are that it: (1) include appropriate Federal, State, and local ayency participation; (2) be fully supported by project funding; and (3) be utilized to r.10dify, delete, or add to the mitigation p~dn in response to both information fr~ ongoin~ studies aod needs which becor.1e apparent as project iupacts are realized. ~hile r.10nitoring by itself is not mitigation, actions taken as a result of that uonitor1ng c~n ensure the effectiveness of the implemented mitigation pl~n. -71- Our final general recOI'IIIendation on the 13itigation plan is that continuing consultation between the license applicant and resource agencies include initiation of working sessions with project design engineers to fully incorporate wildlife gitigation plans. (a) Big G1111 (i) t»ose: Para¥ia~ 3: ~e concur with the processes now being used to quantify pr06ab\lijpacts of habitat loss and to develop selection criteria for replacegent lands. Our previously described concerns for the need to evaluate habitat values are. of pa_rt1cular note here; habitat qualfty ;aust be a factor in quantifying the areas of specific land parcels which are to be enhanced or acquired as mit1yat1on. A schedule for the availability and incorporation of this data into project plans is also needed. Some assessgent should be made of the locations and potential sizes of such areas. ParagraS 5: Further details should be provided on the schedule, potential size, h itat types, and studies, wmfch would be involved in the Alphabet Hills burn. Land ownership, vegetation types, and other constraints to the potential value of burning or other ~nfpulations to enhance habitat should also be described. Para~aph 6: Please clarify the criteria to be used in replacegent land sele~ion. ~e caution that replace~:Jent lands only contribute to offsetting unavoidable habitat qua 1 ity losses elsewhere when: (a) habitat value of the. replace.ent land would be degraded by soge predictable means other than the project during the life of the project but, through management for fish and wildlife that de.gradation could be prevented; or {b) replacement liands are currently degraded and through management for fish and wildlife, productivity could be increased over the fife of the project; or (c) through management of fish and wildlife, the productivity of an existing natural unit of habitat could be increased by reducing or eliminating one or more factors lie~iting its productivity. Identified replaceaent lands caust be a manageable unit. Para¥daC: 7: To raint.ain the increased value of ~anaged habitat, prov·fsions shou e included for ongoing ganagegent of th~ until such tige as the project area is returned to the pre-project state. Para~aph 8: The raximum design speed of 40 miles per hour referred to in Appe~ix EC, item 1, should be assured here as one means of minimizing the potential for goose/vehicle collfs1ons. Parayraph 9: ~e strongly support the proposa 1 Env1ronr.Jenta 1 Briefings Pro~Taa and recommend that it be a gandatory requirement for all project personnel before they begin work on the project. Paragraph 10: Assistance from PPA in regulating access should also be for the purposes of ginimizing habitat degradation and unnecessary disturbances. (ii) Caribou: Provisions to QOnftor and regove logs and other debris frorn the ;~oundiients should be included 1n the overall project 1110nitorin9 prograc, this will ensure that such debris does not ·inhibit caribou QOVeGients (see Section 4.3(a)(ii) -Filling and Operation, paragraph 9). -72- (iii) Dall Shee~: Please describe how the prohibition on visits to the Jay Creik li1inera1 1 ck is to be enforced. We reca.Jend tha.t the portion of the reservoir adjacent to the lick be closed to boat and flo•tplane use. We suyge,st that the effect ivene.ss O·f any lileasures to expose new port fr.ns of the mineral lick be degonstrated and then incorporated into the aitigation plan if effective. ( iv) Brown and Black Bear: Para 1 2: We strongly concur with recOiililen a ons o pror.ap y nc nera e garbage and fence caaps. Experience fr01:1 other projects (e.g. Terror Lake hydroelectric project) shows the need to clearly siyn and monitor gate closures to Rinta1n the effectheness of fencing. The Environmental Briefings Progru referred to under Section ~.4(a)(f), paragraph 9, 1s ~rtfcularly applicable h.re. Paragri§h 3: The habitat values to be gained fr~ git1gat1on geasures referr to here ;ust be quantified before any mitigation for bear impacts can be claililld. {v) Wolf: Please refer to our c~nts in the previous paragraph about quanf1fying reca.ended. !litigation •asures. Beaver and pine garten are both ecologically and econoafcally important; 11iti~tion of SOii1e project impacts is possible. We recoaand revising the first sentence to describe what process and/or criteria were used here fn deciding to eaphasize beaver and pfne QBrten in lilitigation planning. Potential benefits to other species frOGJ beaver activities is the type of ~:~inor-impact we believe to be OV'erernphasized while 1:10re significant, and difficult to li1it1gate, impacts are not treated as thoroughly. For example, beaver actfvit1es lillY eonflict with s tough 111nagement plans for sal1110n. f.1oreover, benefits frOGJ beaver activities may ultir;ately be negated by increased trapping which will be facilitated by project access and transmission corridors. The consistent lack of quant.ifica.tfon in the draft Exhibit E precludes eva luting the significanc~ of any such ben,efits relative to overa,ll project impacts and recOIIilended 11itigat1on ~~easures. Paragraph 2: ~e recog;end discussion be provided on how proposed mitigative siting Of the transmission corridor for pine .. rten will conflict with, or benefit, other wildlife species. Paragra~ 3: Per our previous ca..nts, W(;. recOIIIilend coordinating the dfscuss\Ons of impacts and aitigatfon measures between Chapters 3 and 5. We see 1.. need to clearly and consistently state project objectives in both chapters. We concur that workers and their families be prohibited froQ trapping or hunting while working fn the project area and request assurance that such prohibitions will be part of project plans. Although increased access way be viewed as a net benefit to trappers, habitat degradation, disturbances to the population, and conflicts with project lillnagegent (e.g. regoval of beavers which conflict with road culverts) wculd result in less than expected benefits to these groups. Thus we recocaend continued monitoring to assess that potential . ~e also then recogaend that a process be oeveloped for igplsaenting further citigation (e.g. recor.r.Jenda 'tions -73- to the Gage Board on greater harvest restrictions, habitat ganipulations, alternative flow regiges, etc.) sho~ld these efforts fail or impacts be found more severe than initially evaluated. Para~aph 4: We request confirgation that project design plans will not inclu e gravel extraction from Deadgan Creek. Please provide further inforgation on how disturbance of riparian vegetation will be minimized . Para~Ja~h 5: Please refer to our comments under Sections 4.3(a)(ix) and 4.3( ( x) re the need for quantified data to support the conclusions here. Ue strongly support the proposed monitoring and model development programs. These programs should also be the basts for verifying impact predictions. Although by itself .anitorfng does not aitfgate project iapacts, it should be the basis for detergining additional mitigation needs. Paragraph 6: We concur. To aaaximize the effectiveness of the aaitigatfon plan, we recoaaend continuing studies to fill data gaps, quantify conclusions given her~. and cogplete habitat models for beaver and pine marten. (c) Birds ( 1) Ra tors and Ravens: Para a 1: We recor.nend expand ·fng the list of 1i11JOr gpac s o nc u e oss o unting habitat, a corollary iJ61Pact to the loss of nestfn'g habitat identified here. A lilitiyation need we have repeatedly recor;anded is realignment of roads and transm~ssion corridors away frog riparian corridors and other wetlands va.luable in r.Jigratfon as well as breeding (e.g. letter froaa FWS to Eric Yould, 5 January 1982). Furthergore, we rec010111end that the liiOnitoriny pro~rllil include continuing surveys for peregrine falcons (see Section 4.Z(c)(i)) as well as other raptors (see Sections 4.3(b)(xiv) • Habitat Loss), to confirg their absence in construction activities areas. ue are concerned with the emphasis on creatfny artificial nests. That emphasis is based on the assumption that nest sites are the lirilit1ng factor to raptor use of the project area. Th1s has not, to date, been adequately supported by ongoing studies. For exaaple, overall loss of feeding habitat may negate potential benefits froaa such structures. -Creating Artificial Cliff-Nestin~ Locations: ue concur with the reca.endat1ons to continually 110n tor for nest destruction and to provide additional CJitigat1on later, if found necessary. -CreatitR Artificial Tre ... Nesting Locations: Paragraph 1: Please provide or correct e complete reference for creatingsuccessful bald eagle nests; it was apparently omitted from the bibliography. Ue question the suitability of presently unused habitats cited here as potential .nest sites. Since eagles are not using these areas, fo.od or some oth.er habitat paraCleter may be lililfting. Paragrieh 2: We suggest expanding the discussion to describe tbe compar ifity of habitats, circu111stances, and species of birds using artificial nesting platforms as listed in Table UBl. The success of those efforts liJIY not be directly applicable to the project area, gfven the -74- different habitats and species involved. Please include inforgatian on whether such structures have ever been successful in A 1 aska. -Seasonal Restrietions: Ue strongly support the measures included here with the addition of three points. First, we recOiillend coordinating with project design engineers to ensure that such timing and siting restrictions are fully incorporated into project designs, schedules, and cost estir11ates. Secondly, our previous coaments on the need for follow-up gonitoring of raptor nesting in responsP. to construction activities are critical here. Finally, for bald eagles, we reca.nend there be no blasting with1n 0.5 milPs of nests. (if) Wlt•rbirds: Paragraph 1: We recoamend revising this paragraph to describe factors WhiCh may limit benefits outlined here (see our cogments under Section 4.3(a)(xv)). An additional concern we believe should be described here is the potential for collisions of swans with transgfss1on lines. Para¥aa~ 2: We recommend that the ggnitoriny program described prev~ously shou \i coordinated with ongoing FYS surveys for trumpeter swans and other waterfowl, with ptrticular attention to the ililpacts of project disturbances on truapeter swans. Je again note the importance of carefully siting all project facilities, roads, and transmission lines away frolil wetlands {as being r-pped), including strem corridors and lakes. Since trurilpeter swans and other waterbirds frequently f:1i1J"ate aTony strear.J corridors, sitiny and lillrkin~ of transgission Tines is part1cularly critical to avoid collisions and electrocutions in those areas. (iii) Other Birds: We again note the ecological importance of these species. We recommend that nest and roost boxes be considered as mitigation for passerines. Hairy woodpecker, boreal chickadee, and brown creeper would all adapt readily to such structures. These three species populations would be reduced by 10.1, 7.4, and 19.9 percent, respectively. The hairy woodpecker is on the National Audubon Society's •Blue List• and is thought to be declining in the Pacific f4orthwest. We also recoaaend that all unavoidable adverse impacts from the project be fully acknowledged. (d) Sr.lall (non-game) t4acaals: We refer you to our cOiiiJents, above, re fully aCknowledging unavoidable adverse project impacts. Comaents on Tables and Figures for Section 4 -Wildlife Overall, many of the tables and figures are incogpletely footnoted and referenced. Few will stand on their own and many are confusing or inconsistent even when referring to the text. We recoggend cleaning up the tables and figures to a lle.viate these problems in general, as described fn our c~nts on the text of the report itself, and as specified below. Rather than cagmenting on all editiny or corrections needed, we have focused on major problems or points iwportant in understanding our coL~nts on other portions of the docwaent. Table U21, WZ2 and ~3: Please include the number of sites, sampled in each COr.IIIUnlty. -75- Table W64: ~e recoggend footnoting a brief definition of •iaportance value ratings.• Please provide dates for the suGiilel"' 1981 survey. Tables W&S, W66, W68 and U78a: Please clarify how habitat types as ctassifi!d nere do or do not coordinate with the revised vegetation classification scheme. We are concerned that data ganipulations not obvious frog the original references be fully described here (see Section 4.2(c): Paragr.~). figure Wll: We suggest adding reservoir elevation levels. Figures W19 and W20: We rec~nd including some description of how •relative importance• was deter101ined and •tCipOrtance Indices• were calculated. Souro!s for this data should be cited here. -76- Appendices EA to EE General Co~nts Overall, we concur with the environgental guidelines to the extent that they are presented here. However, we are concerned that the yuidelines are souewhat incOGplete and lack specifics needed for effective igplegentation. Please specify the degree to which these guidelines are being incorporated into project planning. We recomgend that you explain any situations where the guidelines will not be followed. In order to most effectively iQplegent these guidelines,, a. 1 thus, to achieve greater Jilitiyation of project igpa,cts to fi ·sh and wildlife, we recoggend ate~ approach between project env1rongental specialists and design engineers throughout design, siting, and construction. The interagency raonitoring group recOGDended previously should be part of this effort (see our coGDents on Section 4.4: Paragraph 5) •. Problss with lack of integration between project studies and different Chapters in the Exhibit E would then be filOre easily overca.e. Following are our Specific COGlilents on individual items in the environmental guidelines. Specific Comments A-All Facilities 1. The referenced buffer to waterways or wetlands should be a 500-foot CJiniraum width, not r.~aximuGJ width as presented here. 7. Please define project •facility• as used here. We suggest the definiticn include project car.tps, access roads both to and within the project site, and any construction areas (includiny the dams, borrow areas, disposal sites, etc.). Trugpeter swan nests and caribou calving areas should be added to the list of areas to which the guideline is to apply. 8. Blasting deterc~inations should be r.~ade in consultation with the resource agencies. Such deterQinations ~auld be incorporated into the previously recomgended gonitoring program (see our co~nts on Section 4.4: .Paragraph 5). 9. Please discuss the feasibHity of disposing of part, or all, of project spoils within the impoundltlent area in accord with project scheduling. An estimate should be provided of the quantities which may be involved, or when those quantities will be determined. Stockpiling needs, and reclamation considerations should also be provided. We suggest this ite1.1 be. expa.nded into an additional appendix section similar to Appendix AD - Material Sites. 11. P 1 ease refer to our previous cor.J:Jents on the need to map perr.tafrost areas (Section 3.2 and 3.3{a)(ii)-Effects of Erosio~ and Deposition). 13. We reco~nd specifying that fertilization and seeding be initiated in the growing season iJji;Jidiately followin!: site disturbance. The interagency r.10nitoring prograr.1 referred to in itec S, above, should review and concur with species chvsen for revegetation. -77- 14. Pleas.e refer to our coCitlents under iter.1 13, above. 15. ~e concur; again please refer to our coggents on itern 13. Initiating test plots as part of continuing project studies would prov·ide inforcation on which successful site restoration can be based. Plantings to provide wildlife food and/or cover should also be considered in developing restoration plans. 16. We strongly endorse both programs outlined here. Reference should be made to U.S. Coast Guard (C.F.R. 33, Part 154(b)) and Environmental Protection Agency (C .f'.R. 40, Part 112) regulations which require use of a Petroleurn and Hazardous Substance Plan a .nd Manual with such developaents. It should be r.~andatory for all project personnel to take part in the Environmental Safety Program prior to starting work on the project. 17. We suggest that storage containers for fuels and hazardous substances also be located at least 1,500 feet frOIJ wetlands. All personnel inv·o lved in tran.sfer and handling operations for such materia 1 s should carry portable spill containment/absorption r.aaterials. Impervious JJ&terial used to line containment areas should be securely tacked in place and frequently monitored for tears; such tears should be promptly repaired and water which may collect in the areas should be pror.aptly removed. · 18. Please specify the degree to which this recoaJendatiun is bein~ followed as described un:ier our Ge.neral Coliltaents for thes.e appendic,es. 19. We recor.T.Jend addition of an iter.a outlinin~:~ the need for the contractor to train per so nne 1, prepare, and fo 11 ow an eras ion contra 1 p 1 an which is subject to resource agency review and corililE!nt (see our coiiU!nts on Section 3.4(d)(ii)). That plan should then be incorporated into these guidelines. B -Construction Camps l. and 2. We concur and reco11111end that there be no trucking of garbage between camps; each camp should have its own incinerator capa.b 'le of burning that day• s wastes. 3. ~e concur; please refer to our co.r.Jilents under Section 4.4(a)(i't') on the need to clearly sign and lilOnitor all gates to ensure they remain closed. We recoomend the interagency monitoring group review and concur ~lth the fencing specifications. 4. We suggest that the recolir.lE!nded effluent sacpling and testing prograr.1 be outlined in construction camp design plans. 5. Again, resource a~ency rev·iew and concurrence should be involved. -78- C -Access Roads 3. Ue concur and recoggend that the proposed program for identifying wetlands in consultation witP the CE and FWS be used in access route siting (see Section 3.2 (a)(vi)). 5. Instrem work should be scheduled to avo1d critical spawning tir.1es and minimize sedicaentation of downstreaa habitats. 6. throu~ 10. Criteria should be included for deterr.tin ·ing when a culvert rather t)\an a bridge can be used for strear.J crossings. Resource agencies should be consulted in the developgent of such criteria. 13. We suggest. adding, •as well as after significant sto·rg events• at the end of this iter.~ This issue needs further definition. 0 -l-laterial .Sites 1. We concur and recoe&end that the interagency QOOitoring. prowar.1 ~e integrated with the i.nterdiscipl i ·nary team effort so that resource agencies are consulted in the deve1opgent and fgpletJentation of gining plans. 2. a.nd 3. Please ident i fy the extent tJf uorrow e1ateria.ls needed for projact constru.ction which tllY be available within the ir.1poundment area, relative to the ex.tent of borrow which will have to come from other sites. Our ca~Z~ents under ~pendi.x EA-All Fa~i.lities, iter.1 9, on stockpiling and reclar.1a'tion, ana under Appendix EC -Access Roads, items 6 through 10 re crfteria for determining when to use the lower priority lilitigation measure (e.g. culverts instead of bridges; first-level terrace sites over ~ell-drained uplands) apply here also. 7. We suggest that construction schedules be e.va.luated in order to determine optimum coordination and use of ma.ter ia 1 and d i st~:rbance sites. E -TransQis.s:ion Conidors 1. We recomGend addition of the phrase •and Qiintained• after the word •constructed• in line Z of this item. Our text cor.Elents on the need to fully integrate Intert ie deve loprnent with a 11 other project transrJiss ion lines apply here (see Sections 3.4(d)(ii} a.nd 4.4(d)(i) -Willow to Healy). --- 3. Transgission towers should not be placed in wetlands, as defined by ongoing remapping efforts. · 4. We concur, and suggest that selective cutting be used to control vegetation along transmiss i on corridors. Appendix EG: Please provide the so urce for data cited which was not provided ~Y the OnlVersity of Ala.ska f.tuseur.t. -79- Chapter 4. REPORT ON HISTORIC AND ARCHEOLCXilCAL. RESOURCES: No coaaents. -80- Chapter 5. SOCIOECOrmmc It_., ACTS 2e!J~ral Coaae!!t~ Ue see this socioeconomic igpact evaluation as an integral co~onent of the overall evaluation of alternative means of satisfyiny eneryy needs in the least environmentally damaginy way. Accordingly, we offer the following coggents for consideration in the evaluation of this alternatives. Evaluation of a proposal must exagine iapacts. positive and negative, and miti;ation over the life of the proposal. Data bases provide the point from which this evaluation ~st progress. How this project could effect fish and wildlife resources over its life is strongly dependent upon how the project influences future user deaand of those resources. This evaluation should incorporate: (l) a widely accepted projection of future population and economic growth (increasing user yroups) or, if there is substantial uncertainty as to the validity of key assumptions (as we believe th~re is), then a multiple scenario model should ~e pursued examining at least high, medium, and low projections; and (2) a tradeoff analysis examining the competing mitigation proposals for the different interests. Chapter 5 fails in respect to both points. The Base case, as expressed in this document, is a miniuug project igpacts scenario. Ue are led to this conclusion by th~ following: 1. The recent downturn in State oil revenues directly leads to a downturn in State spending. Increased State expenditures result in economic expansion which then attracts and supports the ne\1 population (Departgent of Policy Development and Planning (DPDP} Policy Ana lysis Paper No. 82-10). The expected lower level of State spending should be reflected in decreased econogic expansion and population. One could deduce fro~ this that the without project econogic and population Base Case should b~ substantially lowered frOLI what is presented in this docur.aent. Since this turn of events obviously does not i~act the cost of the project, the project socioeconoQic igpacts would be accentuated. 2. Uith less oil revenue the State would need to concentrate a greater percentage of its income and/or bonding capability on this project. The State would then not be able to afford projects in other areas of the State. We, therefore, believe a closer look at State-wide impacts is necessary. 3. The power which this project would provide could act as an attractant to various industries, to the detriQent of other areas of the State. 4. Potential impacts due to the seasonality of the workforce is not fully addressed in this document. Other hydropower projects in Alaska, such as Terror Lake, and those constructed in other rern~~ely situated areas should be examined to explore this potential impact. 5. Ir.~pacts result from the nur.mer of people attracted by potential jobs not by the number of jobs created. either directly or indirectly. This is supported by the letter to Eric Yould dated 27 ~~rch 1982 fro~ the Alaska Department of Corogunity and Regional Affairs (ADCRA}. 6. The implicatior.s of it~ 5 above regarding local and regional hiring assumptions and iQpacts to local communities. We have not previously had input into many of the decisions which were reached regarding the construction camp/village such as siting, type of camp. and administration. These decisions have large implications for the fish and wildlife resources and users. Consideration of a Prudhoe Bay type ca~ should be given. We are not aware of any construction c~ alternatives having been discussed in tergs of minimizing adverse impacts to fish and wildlife resources, and their use. As illustrated by many of our c~nts, we are concerned that not only were the resource agencies not consulted previously on many of the actions described herein but that comaunication and coordination between the socioecono~ic component and the fish and wildlife resources cogponents has been insufficient. It is stated several times in this chapter that monitoring of impacts is proposed and that this progr~ would add flexability to the mitigation progr~. We concur. However, we believe this ~nitoring team should better reflect the spirit of the APA Mitigation Policy document. Ue believe a monitoring program should be established. at project expense, consisting of representatives of appropriate local, State, and Federal agencies, to carry out the function of assessing the extent of actual impacts and reco~.~nding ~difications to the mitigation program. Modification of the mitigation plan, as represented in the license, would then be through license acendment. Modification of the Base Case to accomodate the concerns raised in the ADCRA letter of 27 May 1982 and ~n our comments would dramatically change the impacts predicted and ultimately the mitigation requirement. Additionally, an assessgent of socioeconomic impacts must be reactive to other study components. For exa~ple, to evaluate i~acts to user~ of fish and wildlife resources, the impacts to the resources gust first be assessed. in that many of these resource impacts hav~ not been sufficiently quantified, one could not expect an acceptably quantified socioeconomic analysis. This co~ld only have lead to a highly general mitigation plan, which is what w~ find here. In fact, reference is made to certain actions which (Section 4.Z(a), page E-5·91), • ••• will be considered in the mitigation plar.•. A rnftigation plan should be a part of this docugent, and be specific to the anticipated impacts based upon a broadly accepted data base. The burden of formulating an acceptable ~itigation plan is the applicants. Specific Comments 2 -BASELINE DESCRIPTION 2.1-Identification of Socioeconomic Impact Areas -82- (c) State: We concur that inentifiable igpacts would be concentrated at the lOcal level, and most difficult to evaluate on a state-wide basis. It should be recognized that how this project fs approached economically has tregendous implications for the State. If the State provides a grant of billions of dollars, that money can't be spent on other programs. Bonding of the project would have a large igpact on the State's ability to bond other projects. Additionally, the relationship between large ~rejects and population growth should be given greater eaphasis. Increased State expenditure results in economic expansion that attracts and supports the new population (DPDP Policy Analysis Paper r~o. 82-10). The State would be igpacted through services provided to this project caused higher population level. (a) Local (ii) Po~ulation: Para¥aash 3: Acceptance of the projected Mat-Su Borough populat on figures woue on the basis of a review and acceptance of the underlying ass~tions. ~ithout these we are left with what appears to be relatively high projections which apparently coae from a single source, the Hat-Su Borough, which could be viewed as having a vested interested in the project, and a high probability that the projections rest upon by the original, outdated project ~conornic analysis. The iQPacts analysis and mitigation planning is strongly tied to population projections with and without the project. ~e reco~nd that the data base be broadened and projections updated. Para£haph 4: ~e recently received a Seeping Oocu~nt (dated 29 Nove~er 1982) ror e Knik Arm Crossing fro~ the Alaska Department of Transportation and Public Facilities (ADOT/PF). In that ADOT/PF is just beginning to evaluate the desirability of this project it would be premature for APA to view it as a foregone conclusion. Parasraeh 5: Please discuss the assumptions upon which these population project1ons are based. (b) Regional (ii) Population: ~ar~!tfiPh 2: We accept the underlying assucption that, in Alaska, population gro 1s strongly associated with natural resource development projects. Please identify the developgent projects that have been assumed to be yoing forth. The recent downturn in State income, due to weakening of oil prices, should be factored into this ana1ysis. 3 -EVALUATION OF THE I~ACT OF PROJEC i 3.1-I act of In-~i ation of Peo leon Governgental Facilities and rv ces: aragrae : e un er y1n~ assumptions which lead to the C:unc1us1on that th1s project would have miniual 1gpacts to the tat-Su Borough should be discussed in greater detail. Peak project empJo~nt would be 3,498 (pag~ E-5-37) and 95 percent of these workers would have dependents, with an averitge of 2.11 dependents (page E-5-44). This would lead one to believe direct project worker impacts would be gore than 10,000 people. If all these -83- people were housed at the constr~ction site we would have a city approxi~ately three tir~s the size of Palger, with all the encumbent needs of this size c~.Gunity. This figure would be substantially inflated by secondary and induced jobs resulting frog the project. Spreading these n~.Mers out over the s~ll, local c~~nities would be expected to result in significant adverse H:~-~=t~. In the 27 ~1ay 1982 letter from the AOCRA to Eric Yould it was noted that, • ••• given the current state of the econo~, it seems reasonable to expect a sizeable influx of people from the Lower 48 seeking highly-paid emplo~aent, therefore co~eting directly with the local labor force. This was the State•s experience during the Trans-Alaska Pipeline project (TAPS) and, in fact, just recently for the as-yet to be started Alaska Natural Gas Transportation System. Yet this proven phenomenon apparently was not considered in the analysis. This influx of people seeking instant riches in Alaska during major construction projects has historically contributed to impacts far in excess of what ~therw1se mights normally be expected.• In reference to, • ••• the buffering effect of the expected continued increase of the population,• please refer to our Chapter 5 General ComGents. (a) Watana -Construction Phase (i) Local -~~t-Su Borough: As stated in our Chapter 5 General Comments we find it difficult to accept that, •In gost areas of the t~t-Su Borough, the population influx related to the project will only add slightly to the substantial increases in need for public facilities and services that will be resulting from the population growth projected under the Base Case.• It is stated in the previously referenced 27 r.tay 1982 letter fror:J AOCRA, •The State•s experience has been that the impacts from large construction projects (most notably TAPS) are far in excess of what were originally anticipated. Those impacts were due to a substantially greater inr:~iyration [SIC] of people than those anticipated based solely upon the size of the required construction and support work force. This was due in part to a larye nur.Jber of people who migrated to Alaska with no intention whatsoever of seeking employment, at least on the construction project. Another unforeseen impact was in the secondary job market. Inr:~iyrants [SIC] competed for, and filled, secondary and induced jCJS, many of which were vacated by local residents obtaining employment on the high-paying construction project. This situation only exacerbated the local unemplo~.~nt situation. •certain public services were severely taxed as a result of the larger than expected influx of people. The public safety and public health were jeopardized by increased •people problecs•; too few public safety officials and inadequate or non-existent facilities delayed the State•s ability to adequately respond. Lack of adequate housing led to overcrowded living conditions and sanitation problems. Increased vehicular traffic devastated the roads and at times created safety problems as well. Utilities, such as power and telephone, were overtaxed. Heightened dernand for housing produced rent gouging, displaced families, hastily and poorly construct~d housing, and use of substandard or even non-residential units as places of residence. •I·, seems, therefore, that the potential exist~ for the types of i~pacts described above to occur as a result of the Susitna project, and to occur ir. -84- larye part in the t·1atanuska-Susitna Borough. Simply put, we believe that t>ast experience h as shown that 1110re people will show up than originally anticipated, bringiny with them all the probler.~s att endant to a •bool.t-town• situation. We do not feel that t his was adequately ad\Jressed in the draft fea.sibil ity report, nor that the State1 s prior experience with TAPS was taken into account.• We would expect that a high percentage of those attracted to the area would becor.Je fish and w i 1 d 1 i fe. resource user·s. This wou 1 d 1 ead to increased demand for these resources at the same tirae and in the vicinity of liiOre direct project related impacts to· these resources. Additionally, because the project work force would be highly seasonal ., (page E-5-37) the impact of these employees on the. fish and wildlife resources would be greater than othe.r area residents • . Public Recreation Facilities: Pa.ra~aph 1: Please clarify whether the assWt~pbon that fu 11 pub 11c access woud be provided bY the project through the upper Susitna Basin has been made . ~e understood this was not the case (see page E-5-24, Transportation). Use pro j ections and anticipated fish and wildlife resource impacts should be examined • . Tra~sportation: Parawa~~ 1: We concur ~hat, •The ultima~e status of the road 1s unsettled at th1s llile. • The road 1s a proposed prOJect feature and as such the ultimate resolution or mechanislils for resolution of this issue needs to be provided in the FERC license, if i o fact we do still have road access at that t ·ime as a project feature . We have not concurre.d that road access is either necessary or desirable. Paragraph 3: Reference is gade to. •schedulin9 of coa.1uting workers•. Yet, on paye E-5-91 it is stated that, • .•• there wi 11 be no daily cor.T.JUting • and workers will not have the opportunity to drive personal vehicles to the camp/village •••• • These conflicts nee.d to be resolved. -Cantwell ( i i) Reg iona 1: P 1 ease refe.r to our Chapter 5 Genera 1 Cor.Jitents and to our coments regarding Sections 3.1 and 3.1(a)(i). -t·1at-Su Borough. (b) Watana-Operation Phase and Devil Canyo!!_-Construct i on Phase ( i) Loca 1 -f·1at-Su Borough: P 1 ease refer to o•Jr cor.T.Jents ir.t.Jed i ate Ty a.bove (Sect ion 3.1(a)(ii)). 3.2 -On-site t1anpower Regu irernents and Payro 11, by Year -85- .rp ) Seuona lit~ of Manpower Require~;~ents: P laase refer to our CQCII;lents regarding sectfon 3.1(a){i)-r~t-Su BOrough. The seasonality of the project work force could, if they reQ&in in the State, result in significantly higher use levels of fish and wildlife resources, and recreational resources than that found for residents employed year-round. Ye recor.LEnd that this should be exagineG. The TAPS project and in-state hydropower proJect~, such as Terror Lake, should provide valuable infonaation. 3.3 -Residenc~and Move~~~ent of Project Construction Personnel: Paragraph 3: The proposed a inistration of the construction c~p/village appears to siro~plify probleas by r.~inigizing constraints on the work force. Given the N'A Mi t igation Policy, which is consistent with NEPA and our Mitigation Policy, to first avoid adverse igpacts to fish and wildlife resources we find it difficult to accept the construction site cagp/village plan or administration of it. In ran.y ways it tends to caxiaize adverse impacts to fish and wildlife resources, in d lrect conflict with APA's stated mitigation goals. It appears that plans other than that proposed have not been evaluated as none appear in Chapter 10. \,le. rec013Dend that a Prudhoe Bay type cagp be exGined as an alternative whicn could r.~inimize project-related impacts to fish and wildlife resources and socioeconCMilic impacts to the local coiiiDllnities. Our position concernin~ rail vs road access to the construction camp/village has been previously statea-(FWS letter to Eric Yould dated 17 August 1982). (a) Region { i) Regiona 1 York Force: Paragrat 4: The as_swapt ions :stated for the on-site construct1on work force were ques ioned in the previously referenced 27 May 1982 letter frolil AOCRA, •Although there are currently enou~h unelilployed in Southcentral Alaska to more than fulfill the project's labor demands, in terms of numbers, that does not necessarily mean that the appropriately skilled people are locally availaole. Also, ~iven the current state of the econor.~y, it seegs reasonable to expect a sizeable influx of people frOQ the Lower 48 seeking highly-paid er.1ployment, therefore cogpeting directly with the local 'labo·r force. • In addition on paye E-5-94, it is stated, •There are at least a couple of reasons to believe that local labor might have a ciifficult tice obtaining construction jobs.• This would appear to support the r..ontention that hiring assugptions are overstated, and thus the ir.1pacts of project-induced population increases are understated. liv) Relocatin~ Workers and Associated PopuJation Jnf1ux: Concerning secondary and 1nduced population please refer to our co~ents under Section 3.1 and 3.l(a)(i} -Mat-~u Borough. 3.4 Adequacy of Available Housing in Impact Areas la) Watana -Construction Phase ( i) Loca 1 -t·tatanuska-Susitna Borough: Parasraph 1: It is stated that, •The r.1ajority of construction workers on the prOJeCt are expected to use the on-site r.ousing facilities . These workers wi11 not be in-rJigratin~ into established cor.r.1unities and ther·efore wi11 have no iGapact on the housin~ r.Ja ·rket in the -86- r~t-Su Borough.• Could we not conclude fr~ the above that a ~inority of soge unknown number of workers would not be housed on-site? This would lead one to expect workers cogmuting, and impacts to the housing ~rket. Please quantify these potential icpacts. Concerning co~ting workers please refer to our COQQents on Section 3.1(a)(i) ~Transportation: _Paragrap~ 3. In addition, in the previously referenced 27 r.1ay 1982 letter fror.1 AOCRA, the following statement is provided: •The key supposition in support of the r.1iniro1a 1 impacts described is that the majority of the labor force and their f~ilies will live on-site and largely regain on-site throughout the duration of the project. This presu.s affiniiAtive actions a~·e taken to preclude or limit r.10bility, particularly by private automobile, and to provide sufficient incentives ~or workers to locate their f~ilies on-site rather than fn the more attractive and urban settings of Anchorage, Palmer, or Wasilla. If those conditions do not occur, workers and their fagilies in some undetergined numbers will reside elsewhere, and the workers will comQute. If that occurs, impacts on the Borough will increase dr~tically.• 3.5 -Cisplacegent and Influences on Residences and Businesses (b) Businesses: Paragra~ 2: It would follow that if, •Most businesses in the upper basin are depe~ent upon abundance of fish, big game, and furbearer species,• and the project holds the potential to severely impact these species through elimination of their habitats, then most of the businesses would suffer severe adverse impacts. This para~aph illustrates a possible probleg relating to coordination or co~nication of Exhibit E study programs. Paragra~ 3: Please refer to our comments indediately above (Section 3.5(b): Para_a_ 2). Parasgaph 4: Please refer to our 'o~nts above (Section 3.5(b): Paragraph 2). e cannot disciss impacts to fish and wildlife resource users as Tnsignificant. The existing user levels must be established in addition to fish and wildlife resource levels with and without the project. Proposals designed to ~itiyate for unavoidable fish and wildlife resource losses should then be ex~ined as to potential impacts on these user groups. 3.7 -Local and Re~ional Ir.1pacts of Fish and \Jildlife User Groups (a) Fish (i) ~~thodology: The work which was cogpleted for 1981 did provide point estimates. The capability of the syste; to produce salgon is dependent upon a nu;ber of factors which are being exagfned as part of the Aquatic Studies Progr~ (e.g. winter water te~perature, availability of spawning gravel, flow regir~, etc.). The numoer of fish that pass a point along the river does little to establish a river's production capability other than to establish a botto~ figure for ft. A co:uparfson of point estimates of 1981 vs 1982 demonstrates the great variability that exists in this system. ~oth years are •representative•. -87- iiJ.l.. The Cor.raercial Fishery ~Specific l~pacts: Paragraph 1: Ue concur. ~aragra~h 2: G.iven the qualifications stated in the first Paragraph, this discuss1on fails to recognize the potential of the project to iQpact fisherie!; downstreaQ of Talkeetna, the potential of the river above Devil Canyon to support salr.10n {future opportunities lost), the igportance of COIID!rcic.l fishiny as a way of life, the igportance of co.....ercial f~shin~ in tera; of secondary and induced job creation, value of the fishery lost over the life of the proJeCt (based upon the sage econooic assugptions as the r~:~t of t ,le project), the cost of various mitigation proposals over the life of th! project, etc. We recomQend that a more detailed discussion be providei in the Exhibit E takiny into account at least the factors lfs.ted above .• 4: We concur tha.t the ~ype of research ~e-s.;...c...;.r....,..;-e.....,__,,,.s...;......ne_c_e_s_s-ar_y .... ~,...,.T",PT"'9,.;...o"""'n a!O.oor--rnf orna t ion on the scope and sch ea u 1 e for completing this work should be provided here. Ue would appreciate fu1ure coordination on this research as we had not been contacted previously. (iv) Subsistence Fish in~: The impact of the project on this is~ue ha! not been evaluated and rerna1ns a large data and analysis gap. The Hilport2nce of the Su~itna systeg to subsistence, potential losses, and how rnitigati<n proposals affect subsistence use should be addressed in the Exhibit E. The data provided is not applicable to the project. EnactCJent of a State subsistence law in 1978, subsequent 1 itigation, and changes to that law in 1982 invalidate direct cor.~parisons of permit nulilbers for different ye~rs. Additionally, we do not consider the price of sa 'loon at the superr.1arkEt an adequate r~flection of the iQportance of the resource to this life st}le. Cultural, social, ar.d recreational values should also be considered in this analysis. (b) GaL~: The prigary deficiencies of the Socioeconor.1ics Chapter are prevalent here: (1} inconsistency with Chapter 3, Fish, Wildlife, and Bot•nical Resources; (Z) lack of coordination such that miti~ation recOGJDendations from Chapter 3 are not eva1uated in Chapter 5 and vice versa; in several instances assumptions in Chapter 5 directly conflict with recolir.M!nded citiga.tion rneasures; and {3) data gaps and incor.~plete anal~·ses which prevent full evaluation of socioeconolliic issues (e.g. payes E-5-iS, paragraphs Z and 5; E-5-76, paragraph 1; E-5-81, paragraphs 1 and 4; ard E-5-82 to S3 discussion under Section 3.7{c)(i)-Data Limitations ). (i) ColiEiercial -Gu1des and Guide Services: Paragraph 7: Please refer to our cement:: on Section 3.5(6). In that •worst case 0 potential loses were examined in ~ection 3.7 (a){ii) we r ecommend that a si~ilar ~xa~ination be provided here, particularly since coose estir.tates have previously been furnished by the ongoing Big Game Study Progra~. Discussion should be included on the possible decrease in t~e area's attractiveness for re~otE, wilderness hunting given the increase in acce~s and human activities with project development. By definition. guided hunting involves a more remote type experience. Loss of this rer.1oteness and pote1tiai -88- icpacts to the guidiny industry should be ccnsidered here. Ongoing data collection/analysis regardi~g this issue needed to be fully described. iii) Recreational -Resources: We recorngend expanding the discussion to consider relative demands aiUf values for co~rcial, recreational, and subsistence hunting for each species in comparison to other species. Including a section on ·~anagegent• would clarify the remaining discussion on recreational hunting. The section should briefly describe ADF&G ganagement responsibilities and the Game Board; and include a ~Po~ Gage Management Units in relation to gajor project features and access routes • • Caribou: Including the map rec~nded under Section 3.7(b)(ii) -Resources ibove, would clarify the discussion. - Resource Status: The present permit system is designed to under harvest the herd so that it can continue to grow. This section should reflect the present and future management plans for this icportant resource, see similar co~ents under Chapter 3, Section 4.Z(a)(ii) Population Characteristic~. The Ex erience Sou t b Hunters: Please cla,ify by identifying the other area or resource o 1 un 1ng of the Nel~hina herd by nearby Anchorage, Fairbanks, etc. residents is being co~ared. Transportation to and fr~ Hunting Grounds: Project impacts on hunter access, and indirectly, to the caribou herd should be discussed. We suygest coordinating the discussion with that in Chapter 3, paye E-3-356, paragraph 3 and page E-3-371, paragraph 1, and our comGents on those sections. Hunti~Pressure: Management changes invalidate direct comparisons between the n er of hunters in 1980 and 1970. Increases of human populations should also be described. If it were not for the pergitting systeQ the hunting pressure would be rnuch higher. Although the number of permit applicants provides a clearer picture of the importance of the herd we consider this figure to also underestigate the i~ortance of the herd. Since the chance that an applicant would obtain a permit is low, many people are discouraged frog applying. If warranted, a survey could pro~ide an estimate of the nugber of people who would hunt the Nelchina herd if the permit system were removed. To adequately evaluate potential project impacts to the herd on~ would need to examine ADF&G present and future managment plans, projected d!Qand forecasts, gost likely behavioral responses to the reservoirs, access routing and control, alternative reservoir filling and operation schemes, construction and public use of the access mode and routing alternatives, the tradeoffs involved in conflicting mitigative proposals, irnpacts of mitigative proposals on user groups, etc. ~e rec~.~nd that the i~acts evaluation examine the aforementioned factors. Supply and Demand f(,r Hunting Oe£ortunity: Again, the situation is not fully discussed. Data should be prov1 ed cocparin~ rates of increase for both pergit applications and human area populations. Success Rate: The iQpact of hunting on caribou populations should be described here (e.g. see Chapter 3, pages E-3-220 to 222). Increases in herd nUGbers may have also contributed to the increased success rate. A map of take relative to existing and proposed project access points may aid in evaluating project impacts. An analysis of those impacts on existing supply and demand for caribou should be provided • • Moose: Since the subject of this chapter is socioeconomics, we recommend expanding the discussion to include information on goose being the gost economically iQportant wildlife species in the region, per Chapter 3 (see page E-3-197). Resource Status: The paragraph is inconsistent with Chapter 3 which includes 1981 data and an estimate of 4,500 moose in the upper basin. Recent and long-terg ADF&G management plans for moose, as well as a ~P of applicable Game Manayegent Units would help relate igpacts described here to potential mitigation measures. Trans~ortation To and From Hunting Grounds: The discussion describes the type of da a available yet fails to provide any quantification. Figures delineatiny present and project-related access points should be included and correlated to current huntin~ intensities. Hu~ting Pressure: Please explain the hunting perQit and/or habitat chanyes responsible for the significant decrease in hunters and harvest while area human populations have substantially increased. Reference to 2,859 hunters in 1981 is the same number of hunters as for 1980 in Table E-5-42. Please correct ff this is not the case. Success Rate: Refer to comment above, local human populations, permit regulations, and area goose populations are critical factors in the success rat~ which should be discussed • • Other Species: ~e concur that a large data gap exists. The schedule for acquir1ng these data and incorporating them into project planning should be discussed. Once socioeconomic mitigation proposals are established, they ~st be ex~ined in regard to impacts on fish and wildlife resource user groups. A tradeoff analysis would then be needPd to examine conflicting mitigative proposals. Because coordination among project studies has been lacking, each study described impacts relative to optigal project manageaent for the subject of that study, e.g. recreation, fish, moose, subsistence, power, etc. ~e rec~nd alternative ganagement scenarios be evaluated within each study before the necessary tradeoff analysis is completed • • Importance of Regulations: Paragra~h 1: Access routes, restrictions on access, and construction sChidutes w1 1 also greatly influence opport•jnities to hunt in the project area. Quantification should be provided for possible impacts under at least two·scenarios-severely restricted access and pergfts and open access without permits. Such analysis should be fu~ly coordinated with ongoing big gage studies and also discussed in Chapter 3. Given the substantial agency recommendations to ogft any project access from the Denali Highway, and the igportance of that recogmendation as a wildlife mitigation geasure, we recomcend your analyzing the impacts on hunter access both with and without that road corridor. Additional discussion should also be provided -90- on impacts both with and without restrictions on worker access and hunting. Again, regulation of such use is a significant ~itigation measure . Quantification of possible use levels is necessary for full quantification of project i mpact s on ooose populations in Chapter 3. Par agr~~: Consideration should be given to the greater losses expected for black bear than for brown bear habitat in view of the harvest regulations described here • • !~acts on the Hunter : Factors contributing to a hi gh quality hunt should be ~fined here. AViiTability and accessabflfty of ani~als are key factors which will be affected by the project. Again, the schedule for c;uantifying recreation a 1 project impacts shou 1 d be. described. The present i nab i 1 i ty to quantify economic effects of the project is recognized as a major proble~ and should be resolve.d in the license application. The econo~ics anal ysis should occur after quantification of wildlife impacts and formulation of ~itiyation proposals. Please refer to our co~nts under Sections 3.7(b)(i) and 3.7(b){ii). (iii) Subsistence Hunting: This section should be rewritten to oore accurately reflect current laws and regulations. For exagple, non-resi dents cannot qualify as subsistence users. A complete, rather than partial ., , .sting of all qualifications for subsistence use should be included here. The first sentence of the second paragraph pertains to a one-time only re'gu1ation which is no longer in effect . The last sentence of this paragraph is an editorial colllilent which should be deleted. f·1ention of the controversial nature of subs i ·stence use would be appropriate. The referenced future data compi Tat ion and analysis should be provided in the Exhibit E. At a minigurn, scope and scheduling of this work should be fully discussed. The concerns expressed u~der Section 3.7(a)(iv} Subsistence Fishing would apply to this section in regard to hunting. Please refer to Secbon 810 of the Alaska National Interest Lands Conservation Act (Pub 1 ic La\J 96-487, 2 DeceliiJer 1980} for guidance. (c) Furbearers (i} Cor.Llercial Users: During the August 1982 AEA Workshop on the Susitna project, trapping was considered the prigary mortality facto r affecting beaver in the project area. Access, in addition to species abundance and pelt prices, is a l so a key deterginant of trapping intensity. -Data Limitations: Given that there are problems with available trapping data, the r ecords which are available should be described h·ere as a genera 1 indication of area trapping act 1v1t 1es. We are. conc·erned about the apparent lack of coo·rdination with project furbear·er studies which do provide some population and trapping data (see Chapter 3 , pages E-3-250 to 251; E-3-253 to 256; E-3-315 to 317; E-3-321 to 322; E-3-344 to 346; E-3-361 to 362.; and E-3-368 .} -Trapping Activity: Para~raph 1: Any examination of project i mpacts needs to examine future opportun ties lost. Again, please provide whatever quantification of trapper numbers and harvest values is available . Consideration should be given to the nulilber of additiona1 trappers the area -91·· could support under alternative project access location and regulation alternatives. Phra~aphh3: Ba~ed on the suggested 25 mile trap line length, it is doubtful ~r t e project area, with projected access routes, could support core thdn an additional dozen trappers. There is soge indica~ion that the area may be near trapping saturation now {Furbearer Study Coordinator Phil Gipson, personal cogmunication). -Aquatic Species • Baseline: Para~aph 2: To co~,pliment and parallel the ~eaver discussion, information shoul be included on muskrat populations and habitat utilization; please refer to our comments under Section 3.7(c)(i) -Data Limitations, above. Paragraph 3: Subsistence value of furbearer ~pecies should be identified. Para~aeh 4: References such as •abundant• and •cOGGOn• should be deleted. Quan f1cation should be available from the 1981 and 1982 field seasons for those species. Please incorporate these data into the discussion and analysis • • Icpacts of the Project: The conclusion that the access road and transmission lfnes would provide increased harvest opportunities through increased access appears to be in conflict with conclusions and statements offered in other ch£pters and sections (e.g. Chapter 3, pages £·3·317 to 323; E-3·345 to 346; E-3-360 to 363; E·3-368; and in particular, £·3-377). The state~nt offered in this section would lead one to conclude that open access is expected to be provided by the preferred access road and through a maintenance road for the transmission line from Watana damsite. It has been our understandiny that the former has not been established and the latter was not to occur. Please refer to our cotnents on Sections 3.1(a)(i) -Public Recreation. Facilities: Para a h 1 and 3.1{a)(i)-Trans~ortation: ara9rap • e ost u ure oppor unities and the potential impact that cou1 occur to trappers due to the expected ice-free winter condition of the Susitna River above Talkeetna should be fully described in this section. The potential f'r furbearer populations to be trapped out, if open access is provided, should also be considered here. -Pine Marten Please refer to cogments under Section 3.7(c)(i) - -Lynx: Paragraph 2: Again, quantification shoul~ be given to this trapping pressure and success rate relative to other area furbearers. -Fox: Please refer to our co~nt under Section 3.7(c){i) ·Lynx, above. Consideration should also be given to project impacts on fox, as they gay relate to the fox trapper (also see our comoents under Chapter 3, Section 4.3(a)(xii)). -Secondary Industries: In order to fully assess project i~acts on secondary industr1es, the •relatively sgall percentage of Alas~an trappers who operate in the igpact area• should be quantified here. (ii) Recreatior.~l: Inadequacy of data base is identified. Information on this user group Should be accuwulated, igpacts analyzed, miti~ation proposed an..: then re-evalt~ated to assess effectiveness and impacts in the Exhibit E. The impact due to the loss of access across the upper Susitna River resulting from the probable loss of winter ice cover requires examination in this section. We suggest addition of a paragraph (iii) Subsistenc~ to complete this section. Information under paragraph 3, page E-5-84 would apply, see comment under that section (Section 3.7(c)(i)-Pine ~1arten o Impacts). 4 -MITIGATION: Paras;a~h 1_: The definition shou1d reflect that established ;n the APA Mitigation o icy document and the NEPA definition. Paragraph 4: Without proper coordination between Susitna study coaponents, actions desiyned to ainiaize one component's adverse igpacts can unwittingly adversely effect the ability of another component to Qitigate. The major gitigation proposals offered here are often in conflict with the ~itigation goals of the fish and wildlife resources components. Greater comGUnication, coordination must result in an open process to exa~ine the tradeoffs when mitigation p~oposals are offered which gay pose impacts to oth~r cm~onents. Please refer to our co~nts concerning Section 3.7(c)(i) Aquatic Species which appears to indicate a lack of co~ponent coordination. Par~aph 5: Appropriate local, State and Federal agencies need to have input to th s process. Continued gonitoring of changing mitigation needs in regard to coL~atability with ~itigation yoals of other components is very important. 4.2 -f·11tigation Alternatives: How the goal of lilitigation as expressed in this section conforms to the goals of r.1itigation in the IV'A r1ftigation Policy document and the NEPA definition of mitigation should be explained. {a) Toois that Influence the J~ nitude and Geo a ic Distribution of Project-n uce anges Para~aph 3: Scheduling constraints need to be reassessed in light of the late~ power needs forecasts. Ue recomgend that the extent to which igpacts could be mitigated in each study component be examined through a tradeoff anal~sis of the timing constraints which have been imposed. Parasra¥h 4: l~pacts to fish and wildlife resources, and thus indirectly to users o these resources, are related to the type of construction cagp established, access provided {route and mode), and the adginistration of these facilities. We perceive little coordination designed to ~inimize impacts to fish and wildlife resources as a part of the socioeconomic analysis. Para~aph 5: It appears as if management of the construction site is to be pass~e. That is, ~rkers can c~.~ and go without restrictions. This appears to be in conflict with the stateL~nt on page E-5-91, •For this project, there will be no daily comauting.• Also, the assugption that workers will maintain -93- their existing residences would follow only if the assugption that the workers would carne algost entirely frog the local and regional areas households. This was strongly questioned in the previously referenced letter dated 27 t~y 1982 fro~ ACCRA, and on page E·5·94, •There are at least a couple of reasons to believe that local labor gight have a difficult time obtaining construction jobs.• Paragraph 8: This paragraph suffers fro~ internal inconsistences concerning dilly co~uting and use of personal vehicles. Please clarify the discussion. Paragr_!Ph 9: This section is supposed to be the ~itigation plan. Para,raph 12: The referenced studies should be coordinated with fish and wild ife resources analyses and ~itigation planning. Please refer to Section 4: Paragraphs 4 and 5 for additional co~nts. (b} Tools that Help Communities and Other Bodies Cope with Disruptions and Budyet Deficits Para~aeh 2: In accordance with the APA Mitigation Policy document, a moni\Or1ny panel would need to be established, at project expense, consisting of representatives of appropriate local, State, and Federal agencies to carry out the function of assessing the extent of actual icpacts and recoggendin~ modifications t~ the gitigation progr&Q. Modification of the ~itiyation plan in the license would be through license arnendL•nt. Paragyaph 10: Please refer to the cor.L•nts imcediately above {Section 4.2( : Paragraph 2}. Paragraphs 13 and 14: The question of whether or not the labor needs of the project could be fulfill~d largely through local hire (page E·S-44} or not obviously is going to substantially effect socioeconocic impacts. In that uncertainty exists, as expressed in these paragraphs and in the 27 May 1982 AD:RA letter to APA, we recommend a re-evaluation be carryed out as indicated in Section 4.3 (on page E·5·95} and incorporated into the Exhibit E. Item 2: Please refer to our co~nts on Section 4.2(b}: Paragraph 2. Item 3: Please refer to our comments on Section 4.2(b}: Paragraph 2. IteLl 4: Please refer to our co~nts on Section 4.2(b}: Paragraph 2. Paragraph 5: Please refer to our co~nts on Section 4.2(b}: Paragraph 2. Table E-5·42: We reco~nd the addition of population esti~tes and any Changes in per~it regulations from 1970 to 1981. The nugber of hunters fn 1980 is attributed to 1981 on page E-5-79. Chapter 6. GEOLOGICAL AUD SOIL RESOURCES: No cor.r.~ents. -95- Chapter 7. RECREATIOriAL RESOURCES General Cowments Prigary objectives of the Recreation Plan should be: a) to identify and ~itiyate the project related adverse iQpacts to the existing uses of fish and wildlife and other resources and, b) to Qaximize additional recreational opportunities that are not in conflict with existing uses and the resources they are based upon. This should be acc~plished in the context of projected d!Qand during the construction and operation phases of the project. In general we find this chapter suffers from 1 Tack of necessary information which would achieve these objectives. In particular, the chapter fails to outline alternative recreation options; evaluate the recoggended plan and alternatives over the entire economic project life; distinguish between specific recreation users; recognize and identify specific responsibilities with regard to iQpleDentation and operation of the plan; and lacks specificity necessary to influence project developgent for the betterment of recreational opportunities. To allow the maximum flexibility for meeting recreational demands, it is important that an array of alternative options be evaluated. This is •~hasized by the lack of definitive d~nd projections and potential for access during the construction periods. Furthermore, we vie1 the tremendous influx of people during the construction period as a ~ajor cnnsideration for a recreation plan. Specific measures ~ust be identified which will not only satisfy degand but also act as controls on overuse. The plan must also recognize the liwited recreational carrying capacity of the area and deal with the fact that all demands gay not be satisfied. Identification of specific responsibilities for iQpleaentation and operation of the Recreation Plan should be included. It does not suffice to place the responsibility on the •aanayeaent agencies,• without a detailed coordinated effort with the agencies prior to issuance of the license. The plan must clearly identify the applicant's responsibility, the agencies' responsibility, and clearly outline the procedures to be followed. The plan must recognize the inherent restraints placed on the agencies and include as a project cost c~ensations of them as appropriate for mitigation of project-induced impacts. The plan clearly fails to recognize the differences between sport, trophy, and subsistence use of particular wildlife resources. The tendency has been to luap these ~sers as hunters with a major objective of bagging gaae. We submit these are clearly distinct groups and should be so recognized. Cultural differences regarding recreational pursuits have also been totally ignored in the plan. Lastly, the plan appears to have been written in a clearly reactive mode. There is no recoynition of any recreational planning initiative that has influenced the physical layout of the project. Thfs lack of initiative has precluded developgent of recreational opportunities which could have avoided some igpacts while Qaintaining a higher aesthetic quality to the recreational experience. Specific Comments 3 -PROJECT Uj)ACTS ON EXISTIUG RECREATIOU 3.1-Watana Development (a) Reservoir (1) Construction: The discussion fn this section needs to be expanded to address non-consumptive and subsistence recreational users as veil as sport and trophy hunters. Furthermore, the section needs to address the eminent competition between existing recreational users and construction workers. (if) Operations: Discussions should be provided to address a new recreational opportunity717e., boating on the reservoir, primarily for access to other areas. (b)_Talkeetna to Devil Canyon Fishery (if) Construction: Since a ~lan for flow releases during the construction and filling period has not been finalized, we do not know what effect flow wfll have on fishing opportunity. Mit1yat1on measures will be aimed at maintaining existiny fishing opportunities. i!i) Operations: Since the proposed operational flow regime will likely reduce water quantity in the sloughsr ve anticipate a reduction in fishing opportunity that ~ust be ~1tigated, the potential for this adverse igpact and appropriate gft1yation should be addressed. (d) Other Land Related Recreation (f) Construction: Paragaa~ Z: Please expand and clarify the discussion. It is our understanding t at he area will be open to the recreating public. Paragra~h 3: The discussion fails to address whether or not existing use shiftso other areas fs dependent upon several factors; e.g., species involved, availability of and restrictions on use of those species elsewhere, existing demand already present in other areas. and cultural association wfth those species. (ff) overations: It is the responsibility of the project sponsor to identify specff c rnitfyatfon measures and develop a comprehensive plan which wftl address this igpact. •proper control by landowners and managers,• is not a mitigation measure without appropriate compensation to implement and operate the recreation plans. This cost should be identified and evaluated over the economic project life and included as a project cost. 3.!.3~C.£!!!_ J!} Watana Access Road (i) Construction: ParajraRh 2: Estimated recreational vehicle traffic both prior to and after 199 s ould be presented. ( tJ) Dev i1 Canyon Access Roa.d 01 Construction: Paretgraph Z: Mitigation for excavation of the borrow areas could include the future use of these areas for recreation developc;Jent. These oeasures should be specifically identified and incorporated as part of the Recreation Plan. (fi) Operations: These •careful plans• should be a part of this document, if not, who will develop these plans and whe·n? The associated costs should also be discussed and displayed as project costs. Also, manageQent responsibilities during construction should be identified and discussed al.ong with associated costs. (d) Other Land-Related Recreat i on (ii) Operatio;,: Ue feel this will be a significant impact and specific plans should be identified and discussed in this document. 3.5 -Indirect Ililpacts --Project-Induced Recreation Demand ~Assumetions: Para~aph 1: This paragraph is very confusing and needs to be clarifled. In part1cular, that part dealing with mitigation. Ue would suggest, •rhe proposed recreation plan is designed as r.~itigation for recreation opportunities lost due to project development •••• • Par~gra~h 3: Assumption 6: We would suggest. that a likely scenario associated with th s development. will be a road access provided to the area without the project. This scenario could drastically affect your evaluation. (c) Estimated Recreation Demand J i) Per Capita Participation ~~thad: Parasraph 8: This paragraph needs to be expanded to discus.s how subunits were consldered, since you rely on the •man&Jet:lent agency• to control project demand, and this wi11 be done on a unit and subunit basis. Paragra~h 17: The simplification of your methodology also does not consider that ot er recreation opportunities may bec01.1e saturated, hence areas of l.ow use (project area) r*ly become liiUCh ~re important for future use and receive an intrease in de~and. Chapter 8. AESTHETIC RESOURCES General Comments Ue find the chapter deficient in the following areas: l) it lacks the detail necessary to distinguish the various user groups within the category •hunters and fishermen,• e.g., the chapter characterized this group as only subsistence users; 2) avoidance has not been acknowledged as a mitigation n~easure, which could significantly reduce potential ir.tpacts; and 3} the chapter does not reference the incorporation of any mitigation measures into the project plans. Specific Co~nts 3 -EXISTING ENV I RON~tE14T (STEP 3) 3.2 -Viewer Sensitivity (Step 4) T.Ypes of Viewers (A) Hunters and Fishermen: Your categorization of hunters and fishermen lacks thenecessary depth to allow meaningful analysis. There are three distinct group .s which must be identified and di~cussed, i.e .. sport, subsistence, and trophy users. ~e submit that they are unique in their appr·eciation of aesthetic quality. {D) t4onresident Outdoo.r Recreation Enthusiasts: Trophy hunting and fishing are readily identifiable user groups, especially in the Stephan Lake area. This should be identified and evaluated. Expectation of Views (A): The prime concern of soge users is not bagging their game or catching their limits. This distinction should b~de. 5 -PROPOSED f·11TIGAT10N t·1EASURES (Step 9): The mitigation measures you have identified are corngendable. However, there is no indication in this section that these measures have been addressed and incorporated into the project plans. Pertinent sections of the license application should be cited to show where these measures are addressed and/or reasons why they were not addre.ssed . ~e are a 1 so concerned th~t •avoidance, • as a ~~litigation liJeasure has not been addressed. ~e refer specifically to project features which could be located elstM~ere as a mftfyation measure or be li10re easily mitfgable in another location. Acce :ss routes and town sites would fall into this category. Chapter 9. LAND USE General Coaments With regard to Section 2.2.(d}(i}, we find the chapter suffers from a lack of definitive information regarding wetlands and floodplains. These areas should be graphically displayed by tyPe in the document. Furthergore, the chapter should discuss the specific values of these areas, their relationship with other vegetative tyPes, and specifically address the effects of the projects on wetland and floodplains. 11itiyation r.~easures recoamended to lilinimize fmpacts to wetlands and floodplains should be discussed including alternative site locations. This analysis is extremely important to avoid any delay necessitated to insure coapliance with federal requirements with Section 404 of the Clean Water Act as amended (86 Stat. 884, u.s.c. 1344), associated regulations, guidelines and Executive Orders (11g8a, 11990). Specific measures to lilitigate iapacts from the transmission line should also be addressed, including right-of-way ganag~nt techniques. Chapter 10. AlTEIU~TIVE LOCATIONS, DESIGNS, AtiD ENERGY SOURCES General Cogments rtr. John Lawrence of Acres .Aiilerican, by letters dated 9 r~veaber 1981, requested that the F\IS review the Development Selection Report and the Transmisson Corridor Report. These requests were ~de for the purpose of fulfilling the FERC requireaents of formal pre-license application coordination. Ue responded to the first review request by letter dated 17 Decel:lber 1981 and to the second by 1 etter dated 5 January 1982. In that th•tse letters were requested as part of the formal coordination pr~ess, they shoJld be responded to at this time. ~e have been requested to review the draft Exhibit E without benefit of the other draft license Exhibits. In Chapter 10 nugerou~ references are made tl other Exhibits (pp. E-10-1, E-10-1, E-10-14, E-10-16, E-10-23, E•l0-28, E-10-32, E-10-38, E-10-62, E~l0-81). Since we are unable to exagine the ot1er Exhibits we view this pre-license coordination as unsatisfactory. Additionally, in our exagination of the Exhibit E chapters we have seen nugerous examples of insu~iJCient internal coordination and/or com1Unicatio1. In that this appears to be a problem within the Exhibit E, we can only ass~Je that this problem occurs between the Exhibit E and the other Exhibits. Exagples of lack of coordination an,/or c~unication between Chapter 10 anti Chapters 2 and 3 are apparent in the discussion concerning mini~u flow releases (pp. E-10-28, E-10-30), temperature modeling (pp. E-10-30, E-10-31 1 and socioeconomic consideration between this chapter and Chapter 5 _(pp. E-10-138). These concerns are discussed within the text of our Specific C oaaen ts • There is ess~ntially no atte.pt in this chapter to assess the possibility of no Susitna project or how the Railbelt should contend with time delays of various lengths. Just listin~ various types of alternative energy sources does not allow an evaluation of what would, or should occur in the event that Susitna is delayed for a period of years, or is never built. Ue reca.;end that this type of planning effort be carried out to exaaine the effects of short-term delays and to examine long-term alternatives. Any assessment of alternatives, needs to take into account the most current power needs projections. It is our understanding that the power projections which are beiny used in the license application are generally agreed to be hfgh and are being reevaluated for submittal to FERC after the license application is subgitted (Acres .Aiilerican Deputy Project Manager John Hayden, personal communication). The environmental implications are rather evident. Alternatives to Susitna should be ex~ined on the basis of fulfilling future power needs rather than matching the power production of Susitna. Under previous projected power needs, it probably would have taken a coabination of a greater nu;Der of individual power yenerating stations than under ~~e latest projections. Several, smaller fndfvidual generating facilities should lead to greater flexibility in potential combinations and fewer adverse environaental iti1pacts. We rec~nd that this be exagined. In the assessments provided on hydropower alternatives, Susitna as proposed ___ .;;a,;.;.nd;..;;a;.;.l.;te;rn~a;;t.;.iY;;.;e;..;b;as;.l~·n-de;.v;.iei.il•o~pta~-nliiit•s•aiirliel.niiioilti.iievilailliiuiiiaitediillioiinlllianiilieqiuiilfiitiiabi1ii'eilibiasiilii.sii.••• Tables are displayed which contrast the weak and strong points of these alternatives yet we never see how the Susitna project ranks. This is particularly unfortunate since Susitna would leave one with the initial iupression (which is the level to which the alternatives are examined) that it would have significant adverse iapacts to many of the environgental criteria {page E-10-4), includiny: {1) big gaae, {2) anadroaous fish, (3) de facto wilderness, (4) cultural (subsistence), (5) recreation {existing), {6) restricted land use, and (7) access. There is no attempt in this chapter to examine the environmental tradeoffs of the differen~ power generation alternatives, including Susitna. Therefore, an assessgent as to what would be the •best• power development for the Railbelt fs not possible. Additionally, in that no single alternative source of poNer fs contemplated to provide the same level of power as Susitna (assuming the updated future power deaands projections assert that this power generation capability is needed) various power generation aixes should be examined. These alternative cODbination plans should then be compared to Susitna in a tradeoff analysis. One obvious alternative power generation mix (which fs further discussed in our Specific Co~nts) should center on the power generating capability of the West Cook Inlet area. In close proximity to eaCh other and existing transmission lines we have Chakachamna hydropower, Beluga Coal fields, Mt. Spurr geothermal, and the West Cook Inlet natural gas fields. Natural g,~ is considered by many to be a highly attractive alternative to Susitna.l_f, ~ Yet the coverage devoted to this subject was disappointing, particularly when compared to other alternative poNer generating technologies. Three tices as much space is devoted to nuclear power which is not generally considered as a socially acceptable alternative to Susitna. Biomass, as an energy source, received twice the coverage of natural gas, and wind power received more than four times the coverage devoted to natural gas. This confirms what ve perceive as misappropriation of emphasis. Numerous reports have been issued over the last three years on the natural gas alternative, including the two footnoted below. Few reports are referenced in Section 10.3{c){i) yiviny the i~ression that a very li~ited effort was expended in researching this section. Section 10.3{f) fails to recoynize the most attractive geothermal alternative, Mt. Spurr. Further discussion on this alternative is furnished in our Section 10.3(f) specific coaaents. 17/ Erickson, G.K. Harch 1981. Natural Gas and Electric Power Alternatives for the Railbelt. Legislative Affairs Agency, State of Alaska. 9 pp. 18/ Tussing, A.R., and G.K. Erickson. August 1Y82. Alaska Enersu' Planning Studies: Substantive Issues and the Effects of Recent Events {Draft). Institute for Social and Econoaic Research, University of Alaska. 15 pp. Apparently no attempt has been made to assess alternatives to the proposed construction camp/village such as sitfng, type of camp, and admfnfstratfon of th~ cagp. Alternatives to those proposed in the draft application obviously exfst and need to be openly ex~ined. These fmplfcft decisions have large fmp11catfons for the ffsh and wildlife resources and users. Considerations of a Prudhoe Bay type camp should be gfven. Construction camp alternatives should be discussed in terms of ~fnfmizing adverse fgpacts to fish and wfldlffe resources and thefr use. ~e are concerned that not only were the resource agencies not consulted previously on these actions but that c~nicatfon and coordina•fon between those responsible for thfs chapter and those involved fn the socfoeconaafc, and the ffsh and wfldlffe components dfd not occur to a satisfactory level. Due to the nugerous inadequacies mentioned above the •concluding• Sectfon 10.4 should not be expected to provfde enlightenment regarding the consequences of license denfal. It does not. Additional inadequacies are discussed fn the Specific Com~ents which fallen~. Specific Comments 10.1-Alternative Hydroelectric Sftes (a) Non-Susitna HKdroelectric Alternatives: Paragraph 1: Reference fs made to EXhibit B whfc was not provided, although we requested ft. J!). Saeenj_~g of Candidate Sites: Para~aph 1: Reference is rade to Exhibit 8, which has not been furnished, althoug we requested it. • Second Iteration: Paragraph 2: The criteria should reflect that: (1) just because salgon migrate above a site doesn•t mean losses to anadrogous ffsh are unavoidable (e.g. Chakachamna); and (2) just because anadroaous fish are not found above a potential site, adverse fmpacts are avoidable (e.g. Susftna). (if) Basfs of Evaluation: It would appear appropriate to fnclude Susftna and w1thfn Susitna basin alternatives fn the evaluation gatrfces. (iif) Rank Weighting and SCoring: Para¥ii9h 1: The interrelationships of the env1ron~nta1 criteria should be recogn~ and assessed. Dramatic Changes fn any one ftem would have repercussions to all others. (fv) Evaluation Results: We recomgend that all evaluation gatrices fnclude Sus1tna and within Sus1tna basfn alternatives. (v) Plan Formulation and Evaluation: We recom~end that all evaluation matrices include Susitna and w1thfn Susftna basin alternatives. This evaluation should be reassessed in terms of current pr~jections for future power needs. The present examination apparently is geared toward lookfng at various power generation alternatives (whfch are not specifically described) on the basis of providing an equal amount of generating capacity to what Susitna would provide. We recommend that these alternative plans be reassessed in lfght of current power projections. (ii) Site Screening -Ener~ Contribution: Reference is gade to Exhibit 8, which has not been furnis ed, although we requested it . {v) Comparison of Plans -Enar~ Contribution: Paragra~h 2: Reference is made to Exhibit B, which _ fias nooeen furnished, althoug we have reque ·sted ft. 10.2 -Alternative Facility Defsgns. J!) Watana Facility Design A lternat fves It is stated that, •Tables 8.61 and 8.62 of Exhibit B show the li1inili1Uil'l flow releases frog the Watana and Devil Canyon dams required to maintain an adequate flow at Gold Creek. These release levels have been established to avoid adverse affects on the Salmon [SIC] fishery downstream.• Perhaps a li10re accurate appraisal can be found in Chapter 4 (page E-4-3), •The iliJpact of •• • upriver and downriver chan9es in hydrology ••• cannot be assessed at this time due to the lack of information concerning the agount, tYPe and location of disturbances associated with these activities. • In Chapters 2 and 3 it is stated that the reduced flows could impair fish li1igration, de-water spawning and rearing habitat, prevent access to slouyh and side channel habitats and lower or elili1inate intragravel flows to slough and side channel spawning grounds. The minimum flows proposed were not developed using any recognized instream flow methodologies, and lack any biological basis other than the mst rudimentary. In fac.t, no explanation is offered in the Exhibit E as to how the 12,000 cfs Qinimum operating flows for August and into September were arrived at. (iii) Power Intake and Water Passa es: Para a h 2: The statement is made that a mu t -nt e struc ure wou e us , ••• in order to control the downstreua river temperatures within acceptable lir.aits.• The \latana and Devil Canyon darns will cause changes to the existing water temperature of the Susitna River, generally releasing cooler water during s...er 1110nths and warmer water in winter. This, ir. turn, may present s igni f fcant impact to the downstream riverine environment. Teaperature variations ma y affect the ability of fish to migrate, spawn, feed, and develop in the Susftna systect. Ice fomation ClaY be delayed or possibly not occur above Talkeetna. This issue is discussed at length in Chapters 2 and 3 although an accurate description of post-project temperature impacts is not presented. The model which was developed to describe reservoir outflow tempe :·atures contains input data frorn only fhe li10nths (June through October) of one year ( 1981). The Devil Canyon Reservoir was not godeled, but in Chapter 2 it is stated that the location of ice formation (above Talkeetna) will depend on the outflow telfJperature frorJ Devil Canyon da.Gt (paye E-2-83). Paragraph 3: Please reference our comments on Section 10.2(a)(i) concerning li11n1wa flows. (b) Devil Canyon Facility Design Alternatives Para~r~ 3: It should be clarified what •nonally• and •the requfreaents of no s gri fcant daily variation fn power flow• aean, particularly in regard to ffsh and wildlife resource 1-,acts. {c) Access Alternatives (f) Plan Selection: Para~ 2: Although input was solicited fr011 resource agencies and the SUs1tna; o Steering Ca.ittee {SHSC), the selection certainly did not reflect this fnput. Please reference the SHSC letter dated 5 November 1981 •. In addition, we wish to incorporate fnto our comments, by reference, our letter dated 17 August 1982 to Eric Yould on thfs subject. As such, APA should respond to this letter as a part of our formal pre-license coordination. (ff) Plan Evaluation: Paragraph 1: Reference fs gade to Exhibit B, which has not been furnished, although we requested ft. Item Nu~er 5: Paragraph 1: It is acknowledged that a problem exists in the potential of the access road and traffic to affect caribou moveaents, population sfze, and productivity. Avoidance of the problem by eliminating the Denali Highway to Yatana access segment would be consistent with the APA f.lftigatfon Policy document, the recOIIillndatfons of the resource agencies, and NEPA. As fs stated fn Appendix 8.3 of the Susftna Hydroelectric Project Access Plan RecOGaendatfon Report {August, 1982), •from a caribou conservation viewpoint, the Denali access route fs far less desirable than proposed routes originating on the Alaska Railroad and Parks Hfgh~ay. The Denali route would ~st certainly have igmediate detri .. ntal impacts on the resident subherd and future negative fq~acts on the •in flelchfna herd although these fr;Jpacts cannot be quantified.• Itera riUiilber 7: Parana£: 5: Both the MIA l·titfgation Policy docUIIIent and HEPA aCknowledge that ft s tter to avoid an adverse impact than to try to afnigize ft, •through proper engineering design and prudent manageaent.• APA's approach should better reflect thfs in their decfsfons concerning access routing. In addition, reference fs .. de to discussion •in Exhfb~t E.• Thfs fs the E~ibit E. {d) Transmission Alternatives: By letter dated 9 November 1982, Mr. John Lawrence Of Acres Aiirican requested our review of the Transmission Corridor Report as part of the foraal pre-license coordination process. We responded by letter dated 5 January 1982. In that ft was requested as part of thfs formal pre-license coordination process and we responded with this understanding, the issues raised and recommendations made in that letter should be addressed at this ti~. (vi) Screening Results -Central Study Area Corridors Technically and Economically Acceptable is made to Exhibit o corridor One (ABCD) -Watana to the Intertie via South Shore of the Susitna 1Ver • Environmental: Given the APA decision to have road access for the Watana dams1te to the Devil Canyon damsite along the north side of the river, we do not understand how it can be conside.red best environmenta 1 fy (rating of •A•) to have the transmission line along the south side of the Susitna River. In our 5 January 1982 letter we stated, •How construction -and maintenance- related access is obtained to a great extent determines the project-related wildlife and socioeconomic impacts. Construction and maintenance of transmission lines should not provide for additiona 1 pub 1 ic access over that provided by the dam access route .• and, •Access to the dams should be fully c-oordinated with transmission line routing. Access corridors which serve a dual purpose in regard to project access needs would be highly desirable from several decision-making criteria.• This poten t ial for increased access provided by the transmission line routing is readily acknowledged elsewhere in the Exhibit E (page E-5-84). This apparent inconsistency needs to be clarified. o Corridor Thirteen (ABCF) -Watana to Devil Canyon via South Shore, Devil canyon to !ntertie via North shore, susitna River . Environmental : Please refer to our connents above on Corridor One (ABCD). (ix) Results and Conclusions: Paragraph 3: Reference is made to Exhibit G which was not provided, although we requested it . (e) Borrow Site Alternatives: Unless unavoidable, borrow sites should be restricted to within the. future impoundments and/o r to upland sites. Selection should be coord ~nated with access and transmission line routing and with resource agencies. We have not previously been contacted for the purpose of providing input an~ ~e do not have any project plans or assessments upon ~ which to provide specific i nput. No attempt is offered to assess the environmental tradeoffs that would be made by selecting one borrow site alternative over another. We have assumed this is the underlying intent of including this type of alternatives comparison in the environmental Exhibit E. We reconnend that this be undertaken to an equal level for alternative borrow sites, access routes, transmission rou t es, and other alternative project features. 10.3 -Alternative Electrical Energy Sources {a) Coal-Fired Generation Alternative There are three main deficiencies in the discussion of Beluga Coal development as an alternative to the Susitna project: 1. No quantitative esti.ates of the areas or resources to be affected by coal develo~nt are included. We recommend you include a description of: {a) schedules for development; (b) area fish and wildlife populations; {c) habitat types and areas to be disturbed, altered, or destroyed; {d) construction and operation work forces necessary for project development; (e) .. gnitude of commercial, recreational, and subsistence use of Beluga area fish and wildlife resource; and (f) numbers of fish and wildlife ~ich -.y be impacted by project develo~nt. Ye realize that such inforaation is still very tentative for the Beluga project and project i~acts have barely been evaluated. However, recent field studies should allow you to approximate the magnitude of the resources involved and potential for impacts to them. 2. A direct comparison with Susitna development plans and anticipated i~acts is lacking. Comparison of the info~tion identified in 1., above, with similar information for the Susitna project should be provided. For example, the c~rcial, recreational, and subsistence harvests and pressures for use of the Beluga area should be ca.pared to Susitna area resources. Acreages and habitat types that would be impacted by alternative development scenarios should be compared. The magnitudes of project impacts relative to fish and wildlife needs to be analyzed. Also, the work force and time frue which would be required for Susitna should be compared to Beluga developments, for the same power needs. 3. Reasons for rejecting Beluga coal-fired generation or Beluga coal in combination with smaller hydroelectric projects or other energy sources, as an alternative to development of Susitna hydropower are not given. Paragraph 1: Since we were not provided with a copy of Exhibit B, we cannot com~ent on the adequacy of the referenced analysis of the econa.ic feasibility of Beluga Coal. We would hope the analysis includes ~iscussion of private financial backing for Beluga Coal developaent as compared to State financing involved with the Susitna project. Further discussion of the feasibility of alternative Beluga development schemes may be found in a State report by Gene Rutledge, Darlene Lane, and Greg Edbla., 1980, Alaska Regional Energy Resources Planning Project, Phase 2, Coal, Hydroelectric, and Energy Alternatives, Volu.e 1, Beluga Coal District Analysis. Current soft foreign market conditions are exemplified by recent slow downs of the most active Beluga coal lease-holders in ca.pleting ongoing environmental studies necessary for permitting. It would be helpful to know to what extent the State is working with the private leaseholders to consider State use of any portion of Beluga Coal production. We understand that the lease holders do not expect to complete financial feasibility studies before the second half of 1983. Paratia¥h 2: Although specifics o~ plant design and location are not yet avai as e, more detailed information can be provided on the .agnitude, and probable initial development alternatives, including export of Beluga coal to Pacific Ri~ countries. We recommend addition of an area ~P with locations of existing leases, potential camps and development facilities, and alternative transportation and transmission corridors. Para~a~h 3: We recaa.end expanding this paragraph to consider the ava1~6 11ty and probability of coal developaent in Southcentral Alaska. According to current industry plans, Beluga coal resources are sufficient to allow mining for export of 5 million tons per year (with possible expansion to 10 million tons) on Beluga Coal Company leases and 6 to 13 million tons per year fr~ the ZO,SOO acre Di.-ond Alaska Coal Company lease for at least 30 years~ The availability of this or other develo~nts as an energy source for Alaska has been increased with recent State pr08Dtions of additional coal exploration. The State has proposed a ca.petitive coal lease sale during the first half of 1983 for ZS,OOO acres near Beluga Lake. Also under consideration is a non-ca~petitive coal rights disposal west of the Susitna River. Moreover, Bering River coal development has been the subject of recent proposals for exploration and environmental studies. (i) Existing Environmental Condition: As described earlier, the qualitative discuss1on provided here allows no ca.parison with the Susitna project. We recaaaend describing detailed U.S. Forest Service and Soil Conservation Service data for .the area and ongoing studies which should result in a more detailed classification of area vegetation. The predominance of wetlands, particularly near the coast, are discernable on FWS' National Wetland Inventory maps available for the area. Those wetlands are particularly important habitats for the dfverse bird life described in later paragraphs. · o Fauna, Paragraph 1: Clarfffcation is necessary regarding the referenced •selvon fishery•. Paragraph z: We recommend describing numbers of bald eagle and trumpeter swan nests relative to numbers in the Susftna project area. -Aguatic Ecosystem: Addftfonal information should be provided on the quantity and quality of this syst.-(e.g. the extent to which spawning, rearing, and overwintering areas have been identified withfn and downstream of the lease areas). -Marine Ecos,stem: Although species presence is described, there is no quantftativenformatfon on thefr relat1~e abundance, or habftat qualfty. Figures cfted for the referenced Cook Inlet fishery is dependent upon Beluga, Susitna, and other area syste.s. An assessment of the proportion of that fishery which depends on the Beluga systa. ca~pared to the Susitna system should be provided. 19/ Beluga Coal Company and Diamond Alaska Coal Company. January 198Z. OVerview of Beluga Area Coal Deve1o,.ent Projects. -SocioeconOiiliC Conditions: The di scussion ~hould be expanded to cover current levels of c~.~rc1al, subsistence, and recreational fish and wildlife use. (ii} Environmental IQpacts -Air Quality: The potential for mitigating the air pollutants described here should be d1scussed. -Terrestrial Ecosystems: The range of terrestrial habitat to be annually impacted should be quantified and c01npared with Susitna devel.opment plans. In addition to habitats dhturbed by mining, project features such as roads and tra.nsraission corridors which could be expected with coal developcaent should be described. While the road systs required for coa 1 developgent should be substantialy less than that for the Susitna project, the potential for restoring mined lands to or'ig1nal habitat values is untested for the area. Paragraph 2: ADF&G harvest data should be included here. The correlation between hunting pressure and current access should also be discussed in quantifying roads and human population increases anticipated from Beluga Coal developaent. HuG~an/wi ldlife conf'l ic.ts (e.g. bears shot in defense of life or property, wildlife gortality from additional vehicle traffic and roads) is another critical i~:~pact not mentioned here. -Aquatic and ~arine Ecosysterns: Sorne quantification of anticipated impacts can be made and should be ;ncluded here. Developgent of both Beluga Coal Company's and Diamond Alaska Coal Company's lease holdings could e.liminate nine strealil-miles of existing anadromous and resident fish habitat. Stream restoration to original habitat quality will be difficult, to impossible, to attain. According to preli~:~inary flow information, nearly half the total flow in the Chuitna River oriyinates in or flows throuyh the proposed mine pits. Assuging that half the anadrOIDOus fish production is lost frog the Chuitna system, ADF&G estima.tes the annual loss of fish available to Cook Inlet fisheries will be within the following ranges: Pink Salmon 70,000 -650,000 mean • 275,000 Coho Sa lmcm 5,250 -48,750 mean • 20,625 King Salaaon 2, 100 -19 ,500 mean • 8,250 ChUG Sa l1:10n 700 -6,500 mean • 2,750 Total Salr.10n 7s,oso -724,750 mean • 306,625 ~e recocoend contrasting this information with prelfQinary i~act assessments for Susitna and other alternative project developments in the license application. The cOClparison should also cover resident fish spec 'ies, big game and furbearer populations and harvest levels, and areas and types of habitats to be altered or destroyed. Data gaps and uncertainties should be cl ;riffed in an accogpanying discussion. -Socioeconogic Conditions: Recently published reports by the ADF&G docu~aent the magnitude of subsi~tence hunting and fishing by Tyonek area residents.fQ/, £!/, 22/ Ue recoamend that you discuss these findings in assessing fish and wildlife resource uses which ~ay be affected by Beluga coal develop~t~ent. A general discussion of the socioecon01i1ic impacts on Tyonek from developing Susitna or Chakachagna hydropower projects, as compared to Beluga coal development is given in a recent report for the ADCRA.23/ Tyonek apparently supports coai development as long as it does not inhibit their ability to subsistence hunt and fish. Consideration should be given to similar local support or opposition to the Susitna project. Although the purpose of this section is to describe Beluya as. an alternative to Susitna, Beluga coal development would undoubtedly include additional mining for export. Thus while the discussion appropriately describes the incremental workers associated with the power generation facilities only, the entire deve 1 opCJent w i 11 1 nf 1 uence the permanence of the workforce. -The report is confusing in the disc~ssion on whether a fly-in construction camp or perQanent townsite is to be established (see pages E-10-81(a) paragraph 3, E-10-88, last two paragraphs, and E-10-89, paragraph 1). Some discussion is needed of both alternatives, resultant impacts on fish and wildlife uses, and the potential for mitigation. 20/ Foster, Dan. November 1982. The utilization of .king salmon and the ;J.nnual round of resource uses in Tyonek, Alaska. ADF&G, Division of Subsistence, Anchorage. 62 pp. (see page 36 for data on fish and wildife harvest). W . t·1arch 1982. Tyonik moose utilization, 1981. ADF&G, biv1sion of Subsistence, Anchorage. 29 pp. + appendices. 22/ Stanek, Ro.la Jd T., Jactes Fa 11, and Dan Foster. t1arch 1982. Subsistence shellfish use in three Cook Inlet Villages, 1981: A prelir.Jinary report. A[f'&G, Division of Subsistence, Anchorage. 28 pp. 23/ Darbyshire and Associates. Decertlber 1981. Socioeconomic ililpact study of resource deve1opgent in the Tyonek/Beluga coat area. ~nchorage, Alaska. (c) Thermal Alternatives other than Coal (i) Natural Gas: In that natural gas is con~idered by many to be the best single source alternative to Susitna 24/, 25, it is disconcerting to see so cinigal an effort expended exaoinin~ this alternative. The effort should be at least equal to that provided to the assessment of altern~tive hydropower sites and coal. Anything less must be considered inadequate. No examination specific to natural gas in regard to potential environmental impacts is provided nor is a tradeoff examination of natural gas, and other alternatives. Without this, one cannot detergine whether or not a proposal is the best of all alternatives. Discussion should be provided on the potential impact of the recent signing of natural gas supply contracts between the Enstar Corporation and Marathon and Shell Oil Companies. Discussion should focus on the impacts of these contracts, if approved, not only on allocated natural gas reserves, but also on predicting future use, pricing, potential future deaand of electricity for home heating through the ~atanuska-Susitna Borouyh, and future availability an~ pricin~ of natural gas for electrical energy generation. (iv) Environmental Considerations: It is unclear as to what this section is in reference to. If ft is meant to cover all types of fossil fuel burning power plants, it is insufficient. We do not consider the potential environmental impacts of burning natural gas to be the same as for diesel, oil, or coal. We recoamend that environmental considerations be examined separately for each of these fuel alternatives. Then they should be examined through a tradeoff analysis which would include Susitna, as proposed, other hydropower projects, and alternative within basin alternatives, and other alternatives to Susitna. nuch of the section centers on the potential icpacts/probleas which would occur with increased dependence on coal for power generation. Given that the section is entitled (c) TherQal Alternatives other than Coal this would seerJ inappropriate. (f) Geothergal: This section fails to recognize, other than parenthetically, the most attractive geothermal alternative, Mt. Spurr. We therefore, recoggend that APA exagine the feasibility of geothermal energy development at this site as an alternative to Susitna. ~lt. Spurr is being considered by the Ohfsion of Uinerals and Ener~ Manager.Jent of the ADNR as their first 24/ Erickson, G.K. l·farch 1981. Natural Gas and Electric Power Alternatives for the Railbelt. Legislative Affairs Agency, State of A 1 aska. 9 pp. 25/ Tussing, A.R., and G.K. Erickson. August 1982. Alaska Energy Planning Studies: Substantive Issues and the Effects of Recent Events (Draft). Institute for Social and Economic Research, Uriversity of Alaska. 15 pp. geother~~l lease sale area. They concluded it is the best potential yeothennal developgent site within their jur isdiction. It is. bein~ proposed because: (1) it has high ~otential; (Z) it is located on State land; and (3) it is close to existing transmission lines (Beluga Station). In addition, it is in an area already being explored for power developraent, being located between the Chakachatna River and the Beluga Coal fields, and the area is crisscrossed by log!:fing roads. It would also seer.1 logical to explore the possibility of a \Jest Cook Inle.t power gene.ration alternative to Susitna. This coamination would be coq>osed of ~1t. Spurr geot.herr;aal, Chakachalil1a hydropower, Beluga coal, and West Cook Inlet natural gas. Obvious advantages would be found in the isolation of adverse environgental impacts to a relatively small area which already has transmission facilities. 10.4 Environmental Conse uences of License Denial: This section provides t e 1ns1 as to w a m1 t occur 1 us1tna were not built. We hope that a greater planning effort is ongoing to allow the State to adequately address this issue. It ~ould seem that the first approach to this problem would involve a tradeoff analysis, looking at environmental as well as other issues, to examine appropriate alternatives to the Susitna project. The ~~alysis should be directed at: (1) short-term planning, in the event that Susitna is delayed for various lengths of time; and (2) long-term planning so that we do have a fall back plan in the event that Susitna is not licensed. We reco-.1end that this be un c'ertak.en. There is no ex~~:~ination of socioe.conor.~ic impacts in the event that the Sus.itna project license is denied. We consider the potential for a boom-bust occurrence to be great with construction of Susitna. Without Susitna we, therefore, would consider this as r.auch less likely. In the event we do not have Susitna, we would expect the construction of much s~aller powe r generation units which would come on-line over a guch longer period of tiae. We reco10101end that the socioeconOGiic i~lications of license denial be assessed.